His Beloved- A Historical Fiction MG OS 17th Aug'14

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"Your grace?" He broke her trance, which was obviously trained on him and his blonde dance partner on the floor. He knew what to do to rile her up, and here she was burning holes on the back of Myra.

She was positively startled, after being caught red-handed by the viscount himself...Oh no, now he would know she was staring at him, and his...partner. Oh Lord, what she wouldn't do to burn the hands of those nasty females that dared to lay their hands on the sexy Viscount.

"May I have a dance with the beautiful lady?" He quipped extending his right hand to her, which was flatly denied.

"My card is full, Viscount Khurana" She spoke haughtily, her nose high up in the air...not even glancing in his direction. Her lie clearly visible on her beautiful face, his lips upturned at the corner.

"May I see it, your grace, if it doesn't offend you" He said amused, his arms engulfing her small, petite form as she instantly stood up at his request. Oh no, what would she do now? She shifted from one foot to other, her heels paining from the high boots she wore. "No.." And she hid the card behind her back. His eyebrows quirked up at her sudden movement; now he would surely know that she was lying. She gulped in anticipation, what he was going to do now? Will he demand her to dance with him...or will he lose his interest on her. Seems he chose the latter, since he moved back to his blonde partner. So lost she was in her thoughts, she didn't realize the announcement of the grand ball dance to be taking place in next few minutes.

Although as promised, she was whisked to the dance floor by the visiting duke, Duke Nishant...of Sanford. He twirled her round and round, much to her chagrin...it really was making her dizzy and the selfish duke didn't even bother about her. It was making her so darn angry. Thank the heavens, it was just for few minutes as they had to exchange their respective partners.

The duke started to engage her in a conversation... "So you are the daughter of Duke Handa, must say you must be quite a spend-thrift" Uh oh absolutely wrong words to speak to a gentle-lady, a duchess nonetheless.

Still for curtsey sake she replied, "It's my late father Duke Handa Senior... I am niece of the presiding Duke, Duke Handa Junior... Your reverence, Shivraj Handa" She said with much admire and adoration. He really was a father-figure to her, yet he taught her everything that was required from a duchess...from sword fighting to etiquettes, she had it all. Yet not even the seventeen chapters of etiquettes could stop her from obsessing over the sexy viscount, who paid no attention to her...least of all her status. That made her frown considerably.

"What made you upset, your grace? Does my company bother you?" Nishant asked his lips puckered. Okay she must admit he was quite the adorable kind, but just not...handsome...enough. Of course no one could bat an eyelid against the sexy Viscount Maan Singh Khurana.

"No my lord, I find your company quite...interesting" She quipped, interesting...she would rather bury herself in her bed than being in his company; not after the utter humiliating rejection from the viscount. She thanked God, for the bell for changing of partners rang right then.

She heaved a sigh of relief, but it was quite short-lived as she landed in arms of none other than her dream-snatcher, Viscount Maan Singh Khurana. Oh curse her darned luck!

"Must I say you feel quite delightful, your grace" She sucked in a breath, as he bent down to whisper in her right ear, "much more delightful in my arms than the previous meeting we had". Oh she remembered it quite vividly, alright. The viscount was quite a charm the month she had arrived, two months back previously. He was quite popular amongst the gossiping ton, for his charm as well as for his increasing trade in the horse racing, his farm and of course the main trade with which he had begun in the town when he was just a new arrival in Cranford- jewellery making.

As heard from the tales of the gossiping ton, he was quite a poor peasant when he had arrived, with just a pair of clothing and a horse and just meagre amount of food of water to keep him alive for the day. Duke Handa Senior took him in; he was just nineteen summers at that time. Quite a candy sight to the ladies' eye though, no one paid him a second glance because he had no title. He seemed fined by that, which according to Geet worked in his favour; as it provided him no distraction. At first he was allotted a house, and three times meal a day. People used to wonder what he was doing inside the closed doors, with slightest of thumping sounds. Finally he got out with a bag upon his shoulder, requesting to meet the duke. After half a day he was allowed to enter the Duke's mansion. The Duke was extremely surprised at the gift.

It was rumoured that the duke had loaned him some money to begin a trade, and much diligently he had used the nine thousand grands to prepare a ruby studded crown for the duchess. It was such a great sight to the eyes of the commoner. Many queens of other countries envied the queen and even tried to buy it but in vain. The queen wouldn't part with it, saving it for her daughter...her beautiful and gorgeous daughter, Geet Handa.

The same day, Maan was raised from the status of the poor peasant to a guard, of course after a duel. It seemed, Maan was multi-talented after all, what with the swift movements of his sword fights as if he was trained to fight, like a prince. Slowly he went on with the trade of making jewellery and raising a farm simultaneously, as if he was on a mission to succeed. People who witnessed him work, said he wasn't satisfied with his trades...some said he craved for more money...some said he vied for the position of the duke but not a single word from the said man. Fight after fight he raised his sword against the bravest of brave men, challenging them to defeat and some to death...he rose in his status...guard to royal guard, then financial keeper to the owner of plot handling...to being a count. And then now he was the Viscount, her very sexy Viscount Maan Singh Khurana. Still the drive to work hard was present inside him.

Days and months passed by. Five years went as he excelled in each of the fields he took a liking to.

His farms faired well as it bore sufficient vegetables and fruits to feed the population of Cranford. Next he started taking part in horse racing, much to the chagrin of the lords of the town. It seemed wherever Maan set foot he succeeded excellently. He fought as a valiant swordsman, rode the horse like a knight, ploughed the land like an honest farmer and carved the jewels like a perfect craftsman. People were naturally shocked at his success and so were the gentle-ladies of the town who had previously ignored him.

Girls started throwing themselves at him, and he quiet enjoyed it; apart from the horse racing competitions he conducted and the painting hobby he indulged in. Quite haughtily he had announced that whichever lady managed to spend the longest time with him, obviously chaperoned...shall marry him. In midst of all that he was quite favoured by the duke and his family...specially by the Duke Senior and Junior...for he trained the guards of Cranford quite well if need arose for a fight.

That was the day, the eldest daughter of Duke Senior, Geet Handa had arrived in the town. She was sent to boarding school when she was just eleven summers-

"A Penny for those thoughts, your grace" He smirked pulling her closer.

"It seems you didn't learn your lesson the last time we met, peasant" She taunted, raising her nose up high. Maan stiffened for a bit, his grip loosening a bit. Oh darn her mouth, she shouldn't have said that, mentally slapping herself; she stepped away from him preparing to run away. He politely held her back, turning her around he twisted her hand behind her back almost conspicuously as he cocked his head near to her earlobe, "Yet it is the same peasant, your belated father favoured in his last days rather than his own daughter, your grace" He bit out, nipping her earlobe...she grit her teeth in anger, it was quite surprising why did her father prefer his company? She yelped in surprise, jumping a bit...startled he would behave so atrociously in a gathering. Again he turned her around in a sudden move, shivers passing down her spine with the intimate way he touched her, "Yet it is the same peasant, whose touch..." He lowered his voice, "whose kiss you enjoyed that day" He smiled back at her startled face, "your grace". His voice so enchanting, drawing her close...his lips hovering just inches over hers... "Like it milady?" He whispered so erotically, she almost had an orgasm right then and there. Unconsciously her body moved closer to his, her eyes staring right back into his...drowning her in a pool of desire and emotions still undiscovered by her.

However her trance broke, when the bell rang indicating the end of the grand ball dance, still he refused to let go, her breasts crushed against his hard toned chest, clad with an expensive suit. Sometimes she wondered did he steal from the Cranford's financial accounts safe during his tenure as the accountant? She stepped back almost instantly, "Sword-fighting and money doesn't change your birth status viscount Khurana, a peasant always a peasant" She threw back harshly and walked away, her head raised up arrogantly. Her hips still swaying sensuously making heads turn and Maan grit his teeth in fury and jealousy. Love is such a cruel feeling indeed, so self-destructive...he mused bitterly. He ran behind her, pulling her back equally ruthless "I don't put my heart in front of you just to crush it, beware your grace, it may cost you your heart" He turned away but then turned back and crushed her petite form to his, "Come find me...when you clear your head off the title...when you have place for love in your void heart". The whole interaction being watched like a hawk by the Duke as he smiled inwardly. Oh Young love, how much he adored it!

Two weeks after his announcement for the girls to spend time with him, her cousin had stringed her along, to his camp around which he spent the time with the very eager ladies. Her cousin, Neha, very excited she was, as promised by the viscount Maan, to be able to catch hold of Lord Prem Kapoor and thus arrange a meeting. Her very strict father, Duke Shivraj wouldn't allow her to go unchaperoned, hence she brought along Geet to act as her chaperone. Unwillingly Geet followed her hyper cousin to the camp. Uncaringly her cousin left her alone inside the tent with Maan as she went to meet Lord Prem.

Nervously Geet wringed her fingers with her pink lacy gown...she had felt so inadequately dressed under the intimidating gaze of the viscount. Obviously she had heard about the charming viscount of the town, which drove most of the gentle-ladies in Cranford to putty under his feet. Unable to ease her tension she had dared to look up into the eyes of the viscount, and she was done for. His face so arrestingly handsome, his eyes giving her the heated look almost shrinking her into a hot pool of mess. His gaze so mesmerizing that when he touched her cheek delicately, she came undone. Fiercely he had pulled her by her nape, and sucked the life out of her lips. The sexual undercurrent lying between them, gave rise to his aggressiveness in the kiss as he wrapped his arm around her slim waist consuming her being. Slowly and sensuously he had sucked her lips, revelling in the state of euphoria he was in. Geet was very much in a state of daze, ignoring her cousin's wild gasp of shock, she fisted the black mass of his hair and thrust her tongue inside his mouth. He had purred in delight at the ravishing woman in his arms...oh she was the one he wanted, and destined to be with. As soon he had the realization he had stepped away, he was now alarmed of the company they had. He didn't want to compromise her, he would rather court her for a long period, eventually propose and then marry her. However her cousin and his partner witnessing their position complicated things.

Geet had felt so peaceful at the touch of his lips on hers, they fit hers so perfectly, her breasts moulding in his callous hands rather impeccably...and then the forlorn feeling of rejection. She opened her eyes instantly, shocked how could she behave so recklessly...how could she let that...that peasant almost compromise her. She now had to convince her cousin to not speak a word to her uncle or her father...she gulped in fear at the thought. She slapped Maan that instant calling him an opportunist peasant and what not, insulting him like anything. They immediately left before Maan could explain anything to her...thankfully Geet convinced Neha to not speak about it to her father or uncle, although her aunt gave her a nice lecture about fraternizing with men of her own stature, Neha tried to intervene but was stopped much rudely...Duchess Handa feared their wealth would be plundered and their town overtaken by atrocious goons staying nearby- courtesy the rumour she heard from Myra's mother; and also the fact that their family had no sons, and her daughters were very gullible, they could be easily cheated by any mere peasant and thus they would be left heart-broken. Innumerable times she had warned Geet to not mix with people of lower titles and thus to respect her mother figure, she had followed them diligently However the very next day the viscount was called immediately to the mansion, the duke senior's health had taken a turn for the worse...and the duke had very worriedly asked for Maan, thereby sending away Geet from his room.

Duke Senior at that time, indulged in too much alcohol as his beloved wife passed away just two months back, Geet though wasn't attached much to her mother, she was very much the Daddy's girl hence she took her father's passing away quite hard. Before passing away the duke had given a letter to Maan, which was sent to him by Maan's father-

"Are you still infatuated by her, Viscount?" Prem asked his comrade, his partner in the business which wouldn't have flourished without his help and techniques. Even after the two months since the duke expired away and their kiss, Maan seemed to be brooding and sad, also very much in love with the beautiful young duchess. Thank the heavens he didn't fall in love with the haughty lady Handa, his thoughts taking an erotic turn as he pictured his betrothed his sweet beautiful Neha in his bed sheets.

Still he couldn't believe how Maan could love the arrogant lady after the innumerable times she had rejected him and taunted him.

"I love her" He gritted, sipping on his wine. Yes he loved her, that one kiss was enough for him to acknowledge his feelings, he knew she was the one...behind the hard exterior he saw the meek and innocent girl she was. Obviously she was still a maiden, he made sure of that. He just didn't know why she had drilled it into her memory that title was required for the position of her husband.

Yet...he smiled reminiscing...she was so much like his father, the very striving need to be surrounded by titled men and their grandeur the etiquettes, he thought wistfully still nursing his rejected heart from the incident back two months when she had rejected his proposal of courtship, turning down his offer for marriage. How could she be so ruthless and heartless, when her father and mother were so humble and gracious?

Prem signalled at the blonde lady hiding in a much revealing outfit to entice Maan from the dark thoughts he always seemed to be in. Unknown to his best-friend's plans, Maan drank another glass of wine shoving the glass he stood up...but he was pushed down to the bed by the strikingly beautiful lady in front of him. "Geet... You came" He babbled smiling happily, drawing her closer to him. She came to him, willingly...without caring about the title, he thought happily.

Yet...

Something felt off, it felt so wrong to touch her...he pushed her away that instant rushing to the washroom, he washed his face thoroughly. The red witch sauntered into the washroom carelessly, flaring Maan's anger...the bloody light skirt that she was...he gripped her arm harshly and dragged her out his room. Now wondering who let her in, in his private chamber. He felt so enraged, so furious. He marched upto Prem who was yapping happily with Neha chaperoned by Geet, the red witch following Maan in tow.

Maan punched Prem, "how dare you?" He was furious, he knew he loved Geet...he wanted to be with her only her yet he pulled such tricks, "Get out of my settlement right this instant, Lord Kapoor". He could feel the burning holes behind his back, and he knew who could burn him to this extent...Geet. Prem immediately got up and ready to fight back when Neha stopped him and whisked him away to calm him down. Maan, Geet and the red witch stood awkwardly, however Geet glaring at Maan and the light skirt. They were standing too close for her liking. From the corner of his eyes he saw Geet shaking with jealousy...her face distorted to a frown, looking at the space between him and the light-skirt...What did he say find him...when she has love...now who is finding love'

"Seems love is overflowing your filled up heart, Viscount?" She said, jealousy leaking from her tone. Her arms crossed around her chest in a protective stance, as if protecting her heart.

"Are you claiming control over something you rejected, your grace?" He smirked, pulling the disgrace closer and that bloody light skirt oh so happily leaned in. God he would need to bath again before going to bed! Geet stomped her feet and walked away, mumbling outrageously.

Earlier she was satisfied he would love no one else as she never saw him with other, she believed his love...another push and she would have given in to his demands...but now what? Her love was slipping out of her hands...how could she so selfishly expect him to remain celibate when she rejected him and when it hurts so much. How could she? She looked out of her window to find Neha and Lord Prem standing, cosily to each other. They are so happy...so in love...could she risk her heart? Her aunt had innumerable times warned her to guard her heart, could she risk it? She was advised so many times to fraternize with men of her status...could she risk it? Would love make her happy...happy enough to give up her title..her reputation? She just couldn't decide what to do.

Indecisively she walked into the chamber of Duke Handa, the duchess and him being in a deep conversation. She cleared her throat to gain their attention, slowly she walked to them placing her head in the duchess' lap. "What happened dear? You look so forlorn?" The duchess asked concerned, she had never seen Geet so sad...looking so broken and distressed.

"I am missing...father, your grace" She whispered, tears dropping down her cheeks. "Oh my poor child" The duchess cradled her against her chest. She truly sympathised with the poor child. "Cry not my dear, you are the heiress of this large empire...you should stay strong" The duke smiled at her warmly, picking her up. "And you need just a partner to begin with.." He winked at her. "And lots of love and babies to expand it...". Geet blushed almost instantly, oh what she wouldn't sacrifice to be with the man she loves and bear his children, speaking of the man...what would it feel to be loved by that delicious body, those hard toned abs and perfect hands...her lower body ached with pleasure. Her cheeks reddened more if possible, oh lord how could she have such sinful thoughts when sitting in front of her family. She quickly wiped her tears and sat back, "Tell me, how did father and mother meet?"

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"They fell- " The duke started knowingly what she actually wanted to hear. Oh yes, she had fallen deeply and irrevocably in love with the humble viscount...her intelligent viscount. Each ball she was greeted with the brilliant viscount, her heart was soothed with the thought that there was no one in his arms and today even that reassurance wasn't there. He was her love, how could she just give it away? What sort of foolish girl was she!

"They met each other in a ball dear...each of equal title and reverence, your father Duke of Cranford and mother the young duchess of Philippines, the only daughter of the duke" Duchess Handa cut him off, smiling at Geet warmly; "likewise you must find a handsome duke to complete you dear.."

"And before the title...you must follow what your heart says, in the long run...it is the heart which will guide you wisely, milady" The duke said glaring at his wife coldly. How could she be so cold to teach the poor child about looking at titles?

"Follow your heart dear..." He said again, caressing her cheek "and now if you may excuse us I have something important to discuss with the duchess" He spoke icily. Geet felt the tension between them and left wisely. After all she had to dress up for a certain someone tomorrow, a ball being organized to celebrate the engagement of Prem and Neha. She knew however angry Maan may be, he would surely arrive there. After all Prem was his best friend...just wait my viscount...our wait is over...she sighed dreamily.

~~~

Her heart however crushed when he was dressed so sinfully just to kill the members of the opposite gender literally, and had the light-skirt Myra in his arms. She looked down at her blue satin gown, her dressed up hair...was it even worth it? Clearly he had forgotten her, already replaced her!

She refused all the offers for dance, sulking in the corner...even refusing to engage in a conversation. She almost barfed seeing the viscount so close to Myra, her body coiling away from the sight in repulsion. Oh her foolish heart! She lost her chance...her love...her happy life! She cursed herself for the misfortune. Few seconds later her aunt had reprimanded her again to guard herself, like she did till now and left her to nurse her broken heart...

"I believe you had dressed up for a certain someone" Her heart jumped yipping happily, he came...he came. Maan engulfed the lovely lady in his arms. He had planned to take Myra, after witnessing the very jealous duchess almost staking her claim last night. He thought she would do the same tonight also but alas! The lady he had fallen in love with was quite an enigma...he had no qualms though. And now here he was like always, trotting after her like a lost puppy.

Geet decided to remain silent, her throat was too clogged up with tears of despair...oh Maan you have no idea...how much eager I was for you...

"It was foolish of me, my lord" She said sadly, her snobbish self had surprisingly taken a back stand. Maan turned her around, surprised to see her tears...it pained as if a dagger had been slashed down his heart. He decided right then he could take all her taunts but not her tears. Her lower lip trembled at the exposure. "My love can never be foolish, your grace" He lifted her chin, meeting her eyes, letting her see the sincere love he had for her...his earnest desire to have her love. He leaned in, his lips almost touching hers, immediately her eyes closed and a flash of the viscount and Myra flashed behind her eyelids...she pushed him away and hardened her stance... "Quite disgraceful don't you think Viscount, jumping from one arm to other?" Maan gulped, oh god he shouldn't have brought Myra!

"People of higher title wouldn't do..." She was cut off, as Maan clamped his lips down on hers sucking her words off her mouth. Every protest was cut off by his tongue as he imprisoned her in his arms. Truthfully he would give up all of his trades to have her in his arms. His fingers deftly made their way to the zip behind her dress, She moved apart just a bit "Maan we can't...title...child...empire" She breathed out, still not recovering from his attack. Maan was enraged, he whispered angrily " All you think about is title not love...how could I ever love you?" He hit his fist on the wall. "Every night I picture you by my side in my bed, wrapped in my arms making love..." He said, a forlorn tear rolled down his eye "How foolish of me, isn't it your grace... I was just running after a mirage..." He pushed her away roughly. He is confessing...he loves her...always loved her...her heart soared high. As he began walking away, she pulled his arm and hugged him as strong as she could unaware she was attracting Myra's devious attention.

"I love you Ma-my lord" She said, her voice shivering with anticipation. Maan still shook with rage not registering her confession. A sword was placed on the viscount's neck, "hands off her or I will behead you..." So lost he was in the commotion that he refused to acknowledge her feelings. Geet was shocked, how did her uncle find her, it was such a secluded area. She shivered in fear, for both her uncle and Maan. Maan compromised her...they were witnessed in such a public area! If Maan agreed for duel, she knew her uncle would lose and probably no she couldn't think such... but if Maan was compelled to offer for her...their marriage...would be a failure. She didn't know what to do?

And the dreaded words were out, "Offer for her, or I challenge you for a duel till death?" Before even Maan could utter any word, "Please forgive us uncle, I promise to remain a maiden my entire life and devote myself wholly to the town...please...leave the viscount" She broke down at the duke's feet. Like Maan, she knew her uncle couldn't see her tears. "Please..." she sobbed.

Maan was shocked, she would remain single rather than marrying him. Why Geet...why couldn't you just accept my love...Is my love also peasant like? He gazed at her longingly and walked away, shoulders slumped down.

Myra smirked at her dishevelled condition.

~~~

Two weeks passed by, no one not even her aunt left a day without taunting her. Everybody admonished her about her reputation...how could she be so easy...everyone knew the viscount to be a rake...what with his open challenge to marriage.

Everyone blamed her for being a light-skirt, her reputation was tarnished. Balls after balls she attended in hopes of seeing Maan but she was granted none...just to keep herself sane...she kept chanting in her mind...it was for him...her love...her viscount...her Maan. How hard she may try she couldn't forget the sight...the lone tear drop falling down his eye as he walked away from the last ball they attended together...where they were caught.

Where are you darling...forgive me, come back to me please...Maan? Her heart cried for him.

Unable to maintain low profile, she pleaded to Lord Prem to tell her about the whereabouts of the viscount. Prem looked at her slightly irritated, he didn't want to interact with the haughty lady, he informed her though...he was leaving that day.

Geet was devastated. Without caring for chaperones or manners she ran bare feet till Maan's estate. Lines of carriage surrounded his estate but none caught her attention, she scrambled running...falling and rushing to his room. Maan slept soundly, but otherwise nothing seemed amiss.

No female beside him, her heart thanked inwardly. She settled beside him, adjusting her petite form in his arms.

"Oh My dear viscount forgive me, darling" She pecked his lips which turned into a fiery kiss, as he kissed her back passionately.

"Why do you torture me in my dreams darling" He mumbled sleepily, still thinking it was his dream...his hands travelled to her back sliding down her zip...his fingers roaming her back. Geet lost in the passion of his touch simply gave in, she couldn't hold back...wouldn't stop him today. She was his...his love. May be this could be her only way to express her sincere love to him. Reputation and title be damned.

"You feel so real Geet..." His lips slid down her throat as his hands raised her skirt up and pulled out her drawers. "Let me love you, fill my heart" He whispered as he lowered his pants down...it was all a dream...a mirage like her, he thought wistfully. His lips slid over the hardened nipple as she arched her pelvis up, his other hand guiding his freed manhood all the way in. As her barrier broke, his sleepy state broke away...It was real all real...Geet gave out a painful gasp...she wasn't a maiden anymore... Geet hauled him closer, grasping his hair tightly her nails leaving marks all over his shoulder as she guided him in again. Maan smiled against her throat plunging all the way in again, her lips leaving out loud gasps and moans of pain and pleasure. He kissed her all the way from her lips to her neck to her stomach...where their child would lay...to the triangle of hair between her legs...he left nothing out...to be discovered. She was here...for him...no titles attached...nothing.

Geet pulled him up again, attacking his lips with hers, her pelvis raised up as he cupped her buttocks...oh how much he had imagined this...to be fulfilled now was like being in heaven, he sighed happily.

A knock at the door interrupted them, Geet blushed hiding in the crook of his neck...oh was she too loud...did they get caught again? She was so so embarrassed.

"Sire your grace is waiting for you.." Maan stilled, Geet unable to register as Maan pushed her off the bed. Geet gave him a confused timid look, "So you came here after knowing about my title huh, duchess?"

"What are you-"

"Say no more, your grace I don't wish to speak to you" He sneered at her, throwing the gown at her.

"Please listen, I-" Geet pleaded at the merciless man in front of her, but he didn't give her a second glance. Tears dropped down her eyes, after what they did he still thinks...

"Out of my estate right now", he bellowed...secretly hiding her drawers with him...at least he would carry some remembrance of her with him. Geet hurriedly covered herself up, whimpering in pain...it flared like fire within her body almost rendering her motionless. Frustrated Maan dragged her out till the road and shoved her away, "Good bye, your grace" He glared at her coldly and with herculean effort turned away from her vulnerable form. Oh please stop the tears love, you are making this so difficult for me to leave...his heart cried.

Geet whimpered, but Maan paid no notice to it and walked away, his heart urging him again and again to take her back in his arms to sooth her tears...to kiss her till oblivion and what not...

"Who is that girl, son? She seemed distressed..." Duke Khurana asked Prem who watched the interaction. Serves the girl right for rejecting best-friend for so long. She should get a taste of her own medicine. "Just a haughty lady your grace...refusing to yield to my friend's charms" He smirked at Maan as he walked in.

"What?" Maan screamed. No, no...she ...no he refused to think in that direction. She won't come to him on her own...he tried to convince himself.

"What do you mean Prem?" He grit his teeth out.

"I just told her you are leaving... And she came running here crazily...glad you rejected her, serves her-" Prem continued but was cut off by a heavy punch.

"You ba****d... how could you not tell me?" Maan was enraged, he must go after her, his heart registered his mind's worry. From the clueless expression on his father's face, he knew Geet still didn't know he was the only son of the Duke of England...who had run away to have a career of his own because his grandmother...that old hag refused to hand him the title if he worked with his own hands. Since then he had hated the titles...Hence he had run away, settling in Cranford and building his own career and meeting his beautiful love. He hated the titles even more because his love wouldn't accept him without it...and now he knew that was just a facade she was trying to hold on to...

The duke placed his hand on Maan's shoulder " Go after her son..." Maan instantly left Prem running to the road... Geet was nowhere. How could he be such a jerk...why couldn't he believe her eyes that spoke the truth. Each time, he did understand her love...behind those taunts...behind that hard exterior then why couldn't he do that now. He cursed himself running in the direction of her mansion, oh lord please protect my love! He prayed anxiously, his eyes tearing away. His eyes sought for the park, he often saw her in...contemplating her own thoughts...thank God there she was. He rushed up to the bench where she sat. Immediately he cradled her in his arms, asking sorry innumerable times.

"Forgive me my love, please...please" He sobbed into her neck. The tears automatically leaking away. Always he had understood tears were a sign of weakness like she exhibited after he dragged her out and defeat like he expressed when she pleaded her uncle to not conduct the duel.

Today, he knew it wasn't the sign of weakness or defeat but of love...that he was capable of feelings.

"Forgive me your reverence" She spoke staring at a distant place, as Maan had dragged her she realized that it was the Duke of England's emblem and then joined the dots together...the duke must be Maan's father or related to Maan, "Without the knowledge of your title I insulted you so many times... I am ready to pay for my misdeeds... I realize my folly...unworthy." Geet couldn't say anymore as Maan shut her up with his lips and tongue.

"Say no more beloved, I was wrong...utterly wrong about you...your heart...you are nothing like what I said... I am incapable-" Geet placed her finger on his lips. "I will miss you..." She whispered against his lips, tears slipping down and coating her lips.

She thought I am still going to leave her? Foolish girl! After all of this? Oh what have I done to the confident and defiant lady I met at the camp...he cursed.

She leaned in and captured his lips again as if saying her good-bye, "For the last time... Maan" Oh how much he had waited to hear that word...his name from her lips... No I won't let you leave me.

He stepped away and extended his hand... "I am leaving..." He proclaimed gauging her reaction. Her heart was confused and broken into millions of pieces simultaneously.

"But not without my betrothed..." He finished, taking her lips again for a deep passionate kiss, swallowing all her grief, tears and sorrow. Her face lifted up instantly, as her eyes seemed to glow. However she was curious...why was he bending down? He removed his boots and then picked her up in his arms, bridal style... "I must pay for my words...dear betrothed...marry me please"

"But... I..." Geet said, her lower lips still quivering to stop her sob from escaping.

"I love you..." He pecked her lips.

"You said-" She croaked, choking on her sob.

"I know...I apologize, duchess... In spite of what I said...please reconsider... I beg of you, your gr-" Geet pecked his lips, "Use that darned title once more and I will forget your proposal" She threatened him.

"As you say...Geet" He cradled her head as he began walking bare-footed back to his estate.

"Besides I still have your drawers, my beloved" He winked as Geet gasped at his shameless comment.

~~~

Well the next day Maan called upon his "old hag" to come up to Cranford, or he was marrying without her highness' presence. At the same time he formally asked for Duke Handa's permission who granted it eagerly for he wanted just Geet's happiness. If it was in the now Duke of England, Maan Singh Khurana's love...then so be it. Her aunt and Neha agreed eagerly as well. And Maan formally proposed Geet...no titles attached throughout the speech. After all she did threaten him...

His father was happy after a long time though, so was his begrudging grandma who surprisingly was impressed with Geet and so were the Handa Family... Everything seemed to fall into place...

Although the gossip mongers, Myra and her minions made a lots of meaning out of the absence of titles that the marrying couple had no respect for each other...no one gave ears to them, after all everyone was thoroughly mesmerized to watch his beauty trod down the aisle with her uncle.

"Must I say you look thoroughly ravishing, sweet pie" Geet boldly commented as Maan gulped and looked around. He was shocked, what happened to his softie?

"Let's just get over with this wedding..." He warned as Geet blushed profusely, "then we will find out who is ravishing..." He eyed at the hungry male attention she was getting and tucked her in his arms possessively. As soon the priest gave the signal, he crushed her soft lips with his lips, just after mumbling "softie..."

He staked his claim finally.

She was his.

His beloved.

Oh my...10 pages...I never thought it would be that long! 6400+ words...Phew I am tired alright! So please give lots and lots of comments... The last OS I tried to show the woman being submissive...just seeking love...not caring for reputation while the men being dominant...yet equally expressive of love.. and here...she caring for her reputation etc... and the men capable of tears...of emotions equally like women... like two extremities... that we see in our society... the two kinds...still love always wins over...Okay enough of my blabber.

Thanks for the likes n comments for my last historical fiction...

Just like n comment!

Edited by lazy-sleeper - 10 years ago
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WOW LOVELY BEAUTIFUL HISTORICALLY OS..IT WENT LIKE A BEAUTIFUL POEM..TE WAY LOVE MY MAAN KI LOVE FOR HIS GEET AND SHE INSULTING HIM WAS LOVELY EMOTIONAL..OH GOD WEN SHE REALIZE HER LOVE, RUNNING TO MY MAAN AND HE IS THINKING ITS DREAM WAS LOVELY EMOTIONAL..TE WAY MY MAANEET BECAME ONE AND MY MAAN KISSING HER STOMACH THINKING HIS BABY WILL GREW THERE WAS LOVELY EMOTIONAL TOUCHING..TE WAY MY MAAN HURTING HIS GEET AND PUSHING AWAY FORM HIS LIFE BREAKING HER WAS LOVELY PAINFUL..BUT ONCE HE CAME TO KNOW ABT PREM AND HE RUNNING TO SEE HIS LIFE WAS LOVELY EMOTIONAL..TE WAY MY MAAN SEEING HIS SOUL SITTING AND ASKING HER SORY AND CONFESSING HIS HEART AND CARRYING HIS GEET IN BRIDAL STYLE WAS LOVELY TOUCHING EMOTIONAL...ATLAST MY MAANEET LOVE WON AND THEY BECAME ONE IN ALL SENSES..I LOVE TE OS SO MUCH
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Sooo beautiful os
and so long
and perfect os
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I love your historical fictions.

This was a great story. I felt so bad for Maan. Poor guy. But he did keep trying.

Geet was a little complex here. I tried to see things from her point of view. With her aunt's nagging, I can understand why Geet was hesitating.

OK but Prem I did not like!
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lovely story ..
i enjoyed reading it ..
geet and maan so different here but then too made for each other ..
both high headed ..too much in love but caring for titles ..
last their love won..

thanks for lovely story anu ..
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congo
loved it to bits and pieces
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AMAZING !!!!
infact one of the best os i have read

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Well written .. Nice OS

So beautifully !!
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Omg its a beautiful OS loved it n thoroughly enjoyed it...thanks gor this OS which has All emotions,anger,jealousy,pain,unconditional love,helplessness Everything :)

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