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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely part...
Maan is full flat on geet's beauty... He can't able to take his eyes from his geet and rain and wind also increasing his desire..
Thanks for the pm...waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update maan seeing geet beauty inrain she looking awesome maan desire 4 geet wakeing he loved her long hair
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mahi 🤗...thank u for the lovely update and pm...Maan is all lost in Geet ...her beauty and nature are both taking him to another world...love the song u used for the situation ❤️...her dancing the rain and hugging him when she got scared ...then she was all 😳...now her pallu is in Maan's hand...waiting to see what happens next 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 21
Geet try to hold her pallu but blow of air so much and when her eyes met with maan intense gaze she froze in place like his eyes capture her ,she even forget to breath also ...maan come near to her and took pallu in his hand geet start shake with cold and maan nearness it is too much for her her front can visible to maan

And she want to hide that but his gaze just frozen her ...

She can't able to move away from him it's so difficult to her to go away ...her heart start to make sound like dhak dhak and maan wrap that duppata which he hold in his hand and look her with so much love and desires both face so near to each other ...geet start to get nervous wih his gaze which is ...so instance she try to move back but maan pull that pallu and she pull to him with jerk and he wrap her in his arm

Time stop for while both soul who r searching each other for one glimpses

Both so much near to each other this hug ...give solace to both wounded souls , maan more pull her to his hug and she rest her face on maan chest like she so much tired and want to give all burden to his shoulder and other maan want to took her more in himself till his soul so no one can hurt her in any sense there r no need of any word

Unke breath ,unka touch hi sab kuch bol raha tha ek

Duze ke sath ...really there r no need of any word inka prem hi aisa tha anhkoha jag se juda ,ek duze ke sath na hoke bhi ek duze main samaya hua tha pyyar ...

Both don't know how many time standing like this a bird creep brought them back in sense ..or say in real senase they r not that billa and cuhiya now there body have its there own language which giving other reaction of such closeness

Geet start to feel so shy she closed her eyes tightly and mummer chod diyigiye muje but maan who don't want to do that but he want to more pull her in his arm like protect her ,feel her , LOVE her

Jo bhi Bhavnae (emotions thi) jisko wo sirf geet ke sath share karna tha now all that emotions start to took toll on him ,he mummer please geet muje abhi bhi ye ek sapna lag raha hai ,muje ise khooboorat sapne ko puri tarah mehssos to karne do please geet ...

But at last he stop and come out from that beautiful hug , but he again start to lost his sense in his lady love who looking so mcuh beautiful in wet from with open hair

At last he touch her beautiful hair with his plam ...geet get shy with his move she know how much he love her hair and she succeed to give this happiness

Some hair start to play with geet cheek and maan become so J with this he just push that with his plam ...and maan first touch on geet face she cluth her lengha in reaction this is so mcuh for her his finger touch her face ...red hu start to come in her face she truning more red with each second


Meri adhoori kahaani
Lo daastaan bann gayi
Ho Tune chhuaa aaj aise
Main kya se kya ban gaya

Next moment his eyes fill with tear his all suffering come in front of him like images , his suffering geet suffering all , geet cought his face and his changing emotions of face and next moment she cup maan face and mummer in soft voice ...feel this moment not our past , wo sab bhool javo humare liye ...ye bas jo pal hume nasseb ne diya bas unko jilo please

Maan feel like she put a medicin on his wounded hearth her touch make him so different , he stare her with so much love and his eye saying look how your touch free me from all pain geet



Sehme huey sapne mere haule-haule angdaiyaan le rahe
Thehre huey lamhe mere nayi-nayi gehraiyaan le rahe
Zindagi ne pehni hai muskaan
Karne lagi hai itna karam kyun na jaane

Maan put his palm on geet plam which cup his place , she found again that happiness in his eyes ..that happiness that smile geet feel like life really bless her today ..lag raha tha jo sapne wo khoni lagi thi wo sapne ajj phir se angdaiya lene lage the



Karvat lene lage hai armaan phir bhi hai
Aankh num kyun naa jaane O Saiyyan...

Odhu teri kaaya
Solah sigaar main saja loon
Sangam ki ye raina isme tyonhar main mana loom
Khushboo teri choo ke kastoori main ho jaaun
Kitni pheeki thi main sindoori main ho jaaun

Geet come out from her ...moment and try to pull her plam away from his face but maan is fast he just kiss her plam and geet eyes winded in shock he kiss her on her plam ,she frozen in her place and maan took that chance and just kiss her so near to lips not on lips but near to lips

And red hu come on geet face

She hide her face with her plam her heart start run in full speed

Maan love this shy shy geet

She turn herself to other side to hide her shyness ,but maan put his cold wet plam on her back ,,,,,nude back and she hissed in ...

She feel she become bas ye pal his uske liye ustav hai unki milan ki raina ...and maan again took her in hug this time her back touch to maan she breath hevanlly and maan try to breath in her wet hair he want to took that smell of her ...jo usko kisi aur hi duniya main le ja raha tha

Sur se zara behki huyi meri duniya thi badi be-suri
Sur mein tere dhalne lagi
Bani re piya main bani baansuri
Zindagi ne pehni hai muskaan
Karne lagi hai itna karam kyun na jaane

Karvat lene lage hai armaan phir bhi hai
Aankh num kyun naa jaane O Saiyyan...

Mere aasmaan se jo hamesha gumshuda thay
Chaand taare tune garrdishon ki lay badal di
Laut aaye aaj saare...

O Saiyyan...

Ajj unko lag raha tha jo snageet unke life se kho gaya tha wo waapas aa gaya with their heart beat sound which r music for each other there love ...sine their heartbeat ...she feel like basarui of her kahna her maan she is so happy that all that dreams of her he brought back for her

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Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Geet trying to wound maan's pain loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update
both are feeling each others love

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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely. .. galat tym pr roka huhh waiting for nxt. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan And Get Pahele Milan ki aas, phir aankho mein aayi pyas
Dil jiske liye tadapta , wo ban gayi Adhuri pyaas.
Milan abhi adha Adgura hai, milan abhi adha adhura hai...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mahi d description u gave for maaneet feelings r superb.
Maan remember their past.
Geet said maan to live dis moment nd forget d past.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazng update mahi
maaneer lost in each others closeness nd 4got abt their surrpundngs 😃
Bth came back 2 their senses nd geet is too shy 2 face maan 😳
rain is also influencng their senses bt maan remb abt their past qhere bth facd lots of things 😭
bt geet's wrds soothd him nd maaneet's momets were magical mahi 👏
waitng 4 d nxt part mahi update soon

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