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hira2010

@hira2010

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#151

first congrtas for new story

old day type story realy like the concept

little change

so he is a robin hood for village n chor for his father

veer his father so bravly he fought hope he will not die

n came back home

n geet she is sooo cute the picture u add is cute

maaneet ki nahi banti they j actually maan j with geet

geet ahy shy

waiting for next

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monika

@monikaseth

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Sorry dear i am out of country for work whenever get time i read and comment till sep first week please dont be sad

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#153

awesome update...i just read your all ff updates now...tkx a lot for pm me ...love all the updates👏

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#154

1st of all I am sorry for not commenting as my laptop was in hp service centre from 7th to 11th aug evening for repairing ...now I will read all the updates & comment......Coming to ur language & story , I have no problem...Infact I was enjoying time pass but u suddenly put that on hold...well it was ur wish & I don't want to say anything regarding this...I always appreciated the concepts of ur story...so different yet realistic...So plz don't bother about likes...Write for urself , for ur mental satisfaction , for ur fun & entertainment because writing is not about getting max likes & comment ...it is a very effective process getting out ur suppressed frustration in the form of ur writing...Sometimes it helps in processing ur jumbled up thoughts into a systematic manner...SO WRITE FOR URSELF...I am always with u...😊

part 3

Coming to the update...loved the maaneet nok - jhok...they remind me of a old hindi film starring Rajesh khanna & mumtaj...they were used to fight & tease each other & mumtaj was mukhiya's daughter...

part 4

so emotional...Veer is such a brave person...but at the end why he just gave up ...he should have tried to run......OMG!! really feeling bad for maan & his family...precap is interesting...

Edited by sanghita0000 - 10 years ago

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
1st of all I am sorry for not commenting as my laptop was in hp service centre from 7th to 11th aug evening for repairing ...now I will read all the updates & comment......Coming to ur language & story , I have no problem...Infact I was enjoying time pass but u suddenly put that on hold...well it was ur wish & I don't want to say anything regarding this...I always appreciated the concepts of ur story...so different yet realistic...So plz don't bother about likes...Write for urself , for ur mental satisfaction , for ur fun & entertainment because writing is not about getting max likes & comment ...it is a very effective process getting out ur suppressed frustration in the form of ur writing...Sometimes it helps in processing ur jumbled up thoughts into a systematic manner...SO WRITE FOR URSELF...I am always with u...😊
part 3
Coming to the update...loved the maaneet nok - jhok...they remind me of a old hindi film starring Rajesh khanna & mumtaj...they were used to fight & tease each other & mumtaj was mukhiya's daughter...

part 4
so emotional...Veer is such a brave person...but at the end why he just gave up ...he should have tried to run......OMG!! really feeling bad for maan & his family...precap is interesting...

dear first dont say sorry to me
that note is not regulare reader

and you already tale me your problem
so apse angry hone ka sawal hi nahi hai dear

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fariya20

@fariya20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#156

awsum banner

luv ur work gujan

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Mahi please don't feel bad...

I know I am one of them whom u r talking about...

I am sorry of I hurt u unintentionally...

as I told u now a days I am trying to finish all pending pm and updates I received when I was offline due to vacations and shifting...and in between u update very fast...I am really surprised with ur update speed...and u know I didn't even finish those pending and again saw many pms from u so trying to read them as soon as possible... when skimming through I saw this note...