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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: JayeetaGurtian

awesome concept dr...👍🏼...Maaneet are married with three kids...👏👏👏...their eldest daughter Sneha is angry with her father 4 not coming in her school when she got the award for best student...😡😡...Geet understands her husband's job and encourages him...Maan is a surgeon and Geet an ex-journalist...😎...loved it...❤️❤️...can't wait 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

interesting Start!

loved the feelings of a kid n expectations from her Dad...❤️
would love to read more...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Orchid-

Hey Nishi 🤗
Wow!! aate hi New SS..balle balle
Loved da concept..Very intresting⭐️
So Maan is Doc n Geet Journlist😛
aww feeling for Sneha..she missing her dada😔
want to spend sum time with him but being doc maan is alwayz busy cant give time for wife n daughter
loved Geet n Sneha's scene..GEet s very understanding Mom😊
waiting for next...continue real soon
Thanks for pm 😊
and Congrast on Ur First Story 🥳n All the Best 👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply brilliant
loved it,

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel0912

Frist of all I want to say good luck nishi for ur writing and u wrote lovely gr8 concept maan don't hav time for his family do add me in ur pm list

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: disha31

congrats for new SS dear
really a nice concept

loved it...pls continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sree10

Great start. loved it. please continue. this story is from a different perspective. Thanks

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Originally posted by: anmirza

Nice n simple concept ❤️

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Hi guys,

First of all I don't have words to thank you all! I'm so much overwhelmed by the response I got for my first ever story 😳 To be honest, I didn't expect this much 😲😆 Cuz I'm new here & a very few knew me. Thank you so much for liking & commenting on my story. 🤗 I hope you all enjoyed reading 😃 So here goes the 2nd part. 😳 Enjoy reading & don't forget to drop your comments below 😳

Till daddy comes home


Part 2

As a mother, Geet wanted to fulfill the wish of her daughter. She knew it was so much difficult for Maan to attend Sneha's prize giving function leaving his work aside even for few hours but she wanted to make her daughter happy.

She tried his mobile twice but no response. 'May be he is in the OT' She thought. After a while she noticed her mobile was buzzing. Finally it was Maan.

'Hello Geet.. sorry I was at the OT.' 'It's ok Maan. I just want to talk to you for a while about Sneha.' 'Sneha? What happened Geet? Is everything fine?' Maan replied in a worried tone. Though he didn't have time for his kids, he was always concerned about them. 'Calm down Maan, nothing to worry it's just Sneha wants you to attend to her prize giving.'

'Geet, I know, but...' Maan recalled the phone call he had with his daughter in the afternoon. She was so much excited about the prize giving & gave the good news to her father before anyone. He was on a hurry with an emergency operation & couldn't talk to her properly. He decided that he'll explain her later that he is unable to attend it as he was so busy but he'll try his best to come even for a few minutes to see his daughter receiving her prizes.

'Maan.. I know you have other commitments, but try to come for this. This is one of the important things you can't miss. See, Sneha is like you, hardworking & has aced her exams with flying colors.' 'Yes, Geet . I'm proud of my daughter.' 'But this is a matter of time. You know I have a great responsibility as a doctor. Every time I treat kids, they always remind about my 3 munchkins. I may not be a good father for my kids, but I'm doing everything for their own future.'

'Maan undoubtedly you are the best dad for our kids.' Geet tried to pacify him. 'They are too small to understand the service you are doing to the country as a good doctor. They are sad because you never get time to spend with them.'

'Let me talk to them when I get back home.' Maan was upset. 'Anyways they'll be asleep like everyday.' Geet smiled. 'It's ok. Don't think too much. Hope we can manage this situation & convince Sneha.' 'Take care Maan.' 'Love you Geet.' 'Love you too.' They ended the phone conversation.

'Give it back idiot!' 'Hey no! catch me if you can!' Nevaan ran out of his sister's room taking the book which she was reading. Sneha was reading her favorite book Matilda, by Roald Dahl. She has read it for uncountable times yet she loved reading it as it was about a special child who had special talents which weren't noticed by her parents. Sometimes she felt that she was like Matilda, but she knew it was completely wrong as she had a caring mom & a protective dad who loved her & her siblings so much.

Sneha was disappointed about her dad & always wanted him to be like the dads of her classmates. She wanted him to be with them & spend more time like other fathers do. The nearest incident made her more sad.

'Nevaan! you little rascal. Give it back! I was reading it! didn't you see?' Sneha shouted at her mischievous brother who always wanted to irritate his sister by doing pranks. ' How many times have you read this old book?' 'Isn't it boring didi?' and you have no time to play chess with me cause you are busy reading this damn book!' Nevaan made a face.

'Bhaiya let her read. I'll come to play with you!' Mahi, the youngest of three came upon. Mahi was a replica of her mother Geet. She had a milky white face & hazel brown eyes just like her mom's. Not only by appearance, Mahi had almost all the qualities of her mom's personality. She was the peacemaker at home. She was just 4 years old, yet had an understanding nature & wasn't cranky at all. She never threw tantrums like her older siblings.

'Are you freaking kidding me little lady?' Nevaan laughed out. 'You can't play chess! you are too small.' It wasn't new for Mahi. None of her older siblings called her to play games with them except when their mom forces. She was waiting to grow up soon & be a challenger for her siblings.

She had a beautiful doll house which was gifted by her parents on her last birthday & she spent her time there alone dressing up barbies & playing with them after coming back from the kindergarten.

It was the dinner table & Geet was serving for her kids. Everyday she makes her kids to have their dinner early & puts them in to sleep & stays till her husband arrives at late night & takes dinner with him. Maan had warned her to take care about her health & eat on time but she didn't want to satisfy her hunger knowing that her husband is working without even caring about his meals.

'Nevaan?' 'Why are you staring at your plate?' 'Aren't the food good today?' Geet questioned from her little son. 'No mommy not that!' 'I'm not hungry!' 'Haaw? how come you say like this when I made all of yours favorite pasta?' Geet was surprised.

Sneha & Mahi exchanged glances trying to hide their giggles as they knew the truth about their brother. The truth that Nevaan had almost finished a big bar of Cadbury short while ago without even sharing a bite with his siblings. It made his tummy full & couldn't save some space for his favorite meal.

'What's up girls?' 'Why are you two laughing?' Geet was confused. Nevaan gave an angry yet an embarrassing look at his sisters. Geet could almost figure out what has happened as she knew about her little rascal more than anyone.

'Oho so you aren't hungry?' 'Ok then! you can eat when you feel so. I'll tell your sisters to eat keep your share from the dessert. Everyone knew their mom was talking about chocolate.

'Momma, how can we share the chocolate with Nevaan when he himself have already finished off it!' Sneha giggled. Nevaan looked down with embarrassment. 'My naughty boy!' 'Hmm.. you finished it all?' 'I'm sorry momma! Nevaan spoke in a low voice. ' Ok apologies accepted.'

'No momma! you pamper him so much! he deserves a punishment.' Sneha spoke finishing her plate.'Shut up!' 'I told sorry & momma forgave me!' Nevaan tried to defeat her sister. 'Ok ok!' now stop it everybody. 'Nevaan today you have to help me with the dishes ok?' 'Huh? Nevaan didn't expect it. 'Can you?' Geet questioned again. 'Umm.. ok!' Nevaan nodded showing his agreement on helping his mom where as his elder sister smirked at him.

The kids were all asleep when Maan arrived. Maan went to their rooms & gently kissed them who were deeply in sleep after a hectic day. He didn't want to disturb them. He kept staring at his 3 little munchkins.

'Maan..' It was Geet behind him speaking softly. She back hugged him. Maan's face lit with a radiant smile. Geet was his stress buster. Maan was so lucky to have a loving. caring & an understanding life partner like Geet. He was proud of his better half as she played the roles of both mother & father to their kids most of the time.

'Maan..' 'Come on, let's go & sleep.' ' You just returned home after a hectic day & you need to rest.' Geet accompanied Maan to their bed room. 'But Geet, what about Sneha's prize giving tomorrow?' 'I'm sure she will not forgive me.'

'Maan don't worry. I'll make her understand. I'm sure she will, as she also wants to be a good doctor like her daddy & serve the country. She should understand this field is not easy.'

'But Geet, I'm feeling guilty. I missed back to back important events happened for the past few years.' 'Remember Sneha didn't talk with me for a week as I couldn't attend her school talent show last year & Nevaan cried a whole day claiming that he lost his chess tournament because I wasn't there to support like other parents.' 'I can't even remember some of the incidents as there are so many!' ' Mahi is not throwing tantrums like other two, but I knew my little princess is disappointed with me.' ' I know family should come first before anything but..'

'Maan just relax' Geet interrupted. ' I told you not to think about those stuff too much.' 'I'm there to look after everything & this is not the first time. I will manage like I used to do in earlier times. Don't worry.' Geet reassured.

'I love you Geet.' Maan hugged his better half. He caressed her hair softly. 'Love you too.' She replied back with a smile.Maan carried her to their bed.They spent a romantic night in each others' arms.

To be continued...

Pre cap - She called the hospital after failing to dial up Maan continuously. She was shocked to hear the words about her husband in the next few seconds.

Regards,
Nishi 😳

Next --> Part 3 link - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110648336
Edited by ..Twinkle.. - 11 years ago

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