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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krishna_Sourav

congratulation for new MG FF

nice start
so maan is busy with his work n can't giving the needed time to his children
precap is scary
update soon

Thanks a lot 😃 Glad you liked it 😳

Originally posted by: love2_soma

abb kya hogaya...abb kya sun liye maan k barein mein...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Keep reading to see what happened to Maan 😉 Glad you loved it 😳 Thanks a lot 😳


Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

such a understanding wife she is!😳

n maan feeling guilty...

precap😕

waiting for the next!

Confused about the pre cap? Keep reading 😉 Thanks dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@Uma

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: JayeetaGurtian

awesome update...👍🏼...Geet called Maan to attend Sneha's function but Maan denied it......Geet said that she will make Sneha understand his job...🤔...Sneha and Nevaan are tantrum kids whereas Maahi is just like her mom...😎...sweet and caring...👏👏👏...loved Maaneet moments......precap is scary...😲...thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...

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Originally posted by: insight555

lovely update...aww..poor man is guilty of not spending time with his babies...loved how Geet is taking care of kids as well as Maan...

I love Mahi,she is so cute...she will grow real soon to play with her siblings...liked the siblings silly fights and banters...
Don't make the kids wait so long for their Daddy...
Precap is scary...Continue soon..

Thanks a lot Isha 😃 Keep reading 😉


Originally posted by: Maano_billi

Thanks 4 d pm Nishi its such a heart touching update, the precap is scary nyc work neways keep it up👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lenageorge

wow it was a fab update

geet is so understanding and caring.
i liked mahi sweet cute girl
precap is scary

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Originally posted by: _CookieMonster_

Awesme update
its getting very interesting!!
Loved trio fights nd masti...
Geet is really nice wife!!
I m liking her alot
I hope somehow maan attends the show!!
OMG precap is scary
pls update next soon

Thanks a lot Ada 🤗 Keep reading 😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tamanna1391

nice update geet caring but precap scaring me

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Originally posted by: hemangigazal

beautiful update too good

Thanks a lot 😳


Originally posted by: aparna3011

interesting

read both parts
maaneet r having 3 kids
update soon as precap is little scary
waiting

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: disha31

loved it dear...

so maan is busy..geet is really supportive
and three kids...they r lovely...sply mahi..
loved their cute lil fights
precap-kya hua???maan ko?

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Originally posted by: -Orchid-

Awesome update..loved it
Loved all Kids n Maaneet scene
precap seem scary..wat she heared??
waiting for next..cont soon
thanks for pm

-Ru

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Till daddy comes home



Part 3

The sun kept rising for a new day. It was Sneha's prize giving & everybody in her school was excited about this great event except Sneha. She was so much excited initially but nothing was important to her other than her father's presence on this special event. She knew that her daddy won't come as usual, but had a little hope in a corner of her heart that daddy might pay a surprise visit.

Geet arrived on time with her little son & daughter. Nevaan & Mahi were proud about their sister's achievement. Though they fight & pull each others' legs every time, the trio loved each other so much & the bond between them as siblings was indeed a strong one.

Sneha received the award for the best student of the year by taking the highest marks on each subject almost setting a record of saving her position as the number one in her class for three consecutive years. The hall echoed with the sound of applause of the guests. Geet was shedding happy tears as she felt that she is the proudest mom is the whole wide world. Nevaan & Mahi clapped for their sisters almost standing up from their seats.

Sneha smiled seeing her family members but she kept looking the entrance door to see whether her dad has arrived at least in the last minute. Her little wish was completely shattered. Everyone congratulated her for her achievement & Geet was so proud & she thanked everyone in a humble manner when everyone was praising her daughter.

The function was over & they started heading home. Geet was driving the car while Sneha was seated in the front passenger seat & Nevaan & Mahi at the back. Sneha was holding her trophy protectively & was completely frustrated about her dad. Geet understood Sneha's situation & decided to cheer her up. Nevaan was trying Maan's mobile to share the happiness of his sister's achievement with their father.

'Get the damn phone daddy!' 'You are bad!' 'You didn't even call & congratulate didi' 'Nevaan, daddy must be busy! Just leave it!' Sneha spoke in a dull tone. 'Mommy, daddy deserves a big punishment!' 'When will he get time to spend with us?' Nevaan made a sad face.

'Bhaiya daddy must be really busy at the moment. He will definitely call & wish didi. I'm sure.' Mahi tried to fix her siblings' moods. Geet was watching the whole scenario happening inside the car & made plans silently to cheer up her kids.

'Mommy! aren't we going home?' Nevaan asked in a confused tone after noticing that their mom is driving towards a different direction. 'Hmm.. don't you all want to celebrate this?' Geet smiled answering back. 'What? really?' Sneha who was silent, shouted in joy. 'Yay! we are gonna have some fun? Haina mommy?' Nevaan screamed with excitement! Mahi clapped to show her extreme happiness.


Geet drove off to the mall with her kids. 'Momma will you buy me the latest book of Jaqueline Wilson?' Sneha who was a bookworm asked her mom. 'Momma will you buy a set of new video games please?' Nevaan pulled his mom's hand. 'Momma I don't want anything except strawberry ice cream.' Mahi demanded her favorite flavor of ice cream in a cute tone. 'Ok! whatever my little angels demand, I'll buy all what you want today.' Geet smiled. 'Love you momma! you are the best mom in the whole wide world.' The kids hugged their mom & it was really a cute scenery made almost everyone go 'aww' when they were passing this cute family.

Sneha, Nevaan & Mahi all of them got what they wanted. They enjoyed eating sweets & ice creams, going rides in the play area & jumping on the jumping castles. It was getting late & Geet wanted to go home soon & prepare the dinner but none of the kids were ready to come out from the play area. Geet was happy that she could cheer up her kids, specially Sneha who was heart broken.

Finally she could convince her kids to come out promising them that she will take them wherever they want to go in the weekend. She tried Maan's mobile several times to make the father & the kids talk but failed as it said Maan's mobile was switched off or out of service. Usually Maan calls her back after a several missed calls but today he didn't answer her at all. Geet was a little bit worried yet didn't show it in front of the kids.

She called the hospital after failing to dial up Maan continuously. She was shocked to hear the words about her husband in the next few seconds.

To be continued...

Pre cap -
'What happened to him?' 'Has he met with an accident or what?' That feeling almost made her sick. 'Shut up Geet! why are you thinking so negatively?' She scolded herself.

Regards,
Nishi 😳

Next --> Part 4 (Final) link - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110708272
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
sneha received her award though she was disappointed that her dad didn't come but geet made her cheer up again!!!

What happen to maan now????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update children disappointed with maan geet trying to fill both shoes
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

Awesome update
sneha received her award though she was disappointed that her dad didn't come but geet made her cheer up again!!!

What happen to maan now????

Glad you liked it 😃 Suspense baby! suspense 😉😆 Wait till the next part 😃

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