MG OS :Geet Hui Maan Ki....Last Part -page 23

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drrose31

@drrose31

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#161

This was one Funny OS 😆 😆

The start was too sad..

Then first part .. was full of accusations and pain...

and the last part .. was really a big twist ... 😆

thanks sweets for sending me pms ...

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rsusmita

@rsusmita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

wa kya twist hai dear

loved the concept

nice os loved it

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

awesome story line dear...loved ur style of writing...hope to get more of ur other works...😃

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caller123

@caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Awesome dear... Great work ...

So Geet also didn't understand hindi just like me.😳

I really enjoyed this story and please start another story whenever you are free.

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Awesome n different ending...loved this

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

sorry sorry sorry
kaan pakadke sorry
chahe to tum bhi pakad lo
kaan ishke

i am like

first my baby like
this

alwyes crying mommy hot update do na
hi hi

but after reading first part i am 😲
ye meri CD hi hai na
so flowless update yaar
itna acccha to main apni first story
main nahi likh saki thi sachhi you
can read Life of Geet yaar

great work dear 👏
you write each and every emotion very beutifuly
msk ka anger , dadi reaction and that Beena 😡

second part

that women and her so called
bro just scare geet on her rajji izzat
sabse bura tab laga jab dadima say
she tale geet to stay away from maan
i feel like 😡😭
like how dadi do this 😕

and that cliff part
i stopped my breath for second
how maaneet get away from each other
and me 😭

third part and i am thinking meri devil U turn kasie
nahi liya so that all is shoot
disha i will kill you
but ye tuhi kar sakti hai my baby
but just love it and aham aham pad pad ke you
become so gyanni yaar
geet i am thirsty waht a sentence

thirty kya , tu mil muje abhi
mere update main aur cut cut 😡
no hot part to you onward 😡

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago