~Akhri Khat~ LAST PART pg/20 || July 23rd ||

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change12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

wonderful story... very diffrent from usual stories on maan and geet ...

love how geet understad her faults and worked on them ...

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Zariya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

it is so sweet and give moral lesson as well

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vandy28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Grt ss ...
Stryline up is so nyc...wd morl attchd to it...
N landlord aunty is awsm chrctr n her way of telln n mkn geet undrstnd is too gud...

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dreamy4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Wow beautiful concept 😃 loved it ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

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suyoha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

lovely end

they all solved their problems with little understanding and guidance

and yes not to forget lots of love

and here goes a happy family reciepe

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custodian75

@custodian75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Lovely story enjoyed reading it. So true and apt for the current generation. Little bit of patience and compromise and you can have a happy family.

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mauaa

@mauaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

hii harika.. hw r u?

i read all 3parts in 1 go.. loved thestory n concept also..

i thought u will show that geet would love to stay with maan;s family as she was an orphan.. but u did'nt n i m glad.. coz in reality who has stayed alone would never like to share their privacy with many people.. so u have shown the reality instead of some fairytale or sas-bahu drama..lol..

lovely story.. n loved that landlord aunty.. she was too good wasnt she..

thnx for giving us such a wonderful story!!!!😃

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mani24

@mani24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

hey meri jaan di I was so damn excited to read my this fav story lekin di then me sad ke meri yeh story ended😭 but di just loved ke aapne itne beautifully geet aur maan dono ko is bepanah khubsurat rishte ke meaning bataye aur di now they respect aur love each other more than they were before😳

aur di wht I loved the most ke maan's family was loving aur taking care of geet so much ke geet majboor ho gayi ke why she did not see this in the first place before she realized ke she did not hurt maan but she hurt there family as well aur di loved more ke jab geet went wid her family aur cleared there old house taake they can all live in there this apt making it a home a living heaven on earth😳👏 di thank u for this beautiful story aur making me realize some beautiful worth's of marriage😳 waiting for my other eternal FF"s update di jaldi se woh bhi de dein plzzz ur baby will be waiting for it😳