The Heirs - MG - chapter 4, pg 7, 2/8

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 11 years ago

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chapter 3 ...

Interesting...

Liked it ...

Thanks for the update...

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

chapter 4 ...

Awesome... Nice...

Thanks for the update...

Continue soon...

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flowing_river

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

interesting...
all the characters have something mysterious ...
amazing plot...
continue soon..

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

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everybody seems to have their own agenda

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honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

wow story sounds interesting...looking forward...

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

I just read all the parts, an interesting story and different concept..

and wonderfully written..

Part 1 -

Naina's sneering at Geet, was there a bit of jealousy factor along with the vanity of her rich status..

Part 2 -

after reading the initial part, I also felt that Pari has distanced herself from home while stepping into a more prosperous life, but then her pretense and giving a nice picture back at home came as a shock..

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Part 3 & 4

after reading these parts, I am understanding the title more.

the heirs, all of them - Geet and Pari, Maan and Dev, Nayantara and Jay.

there is such a contrast in their life and lifestyle when it comes to money, but in the end they all feel discontent with the life they are leading.

Geet could not stop herself to momentarily compare her life with Pari's better one...but their bond is more strong, sensing Pari's not-so-good situation, Geet has decided to go and check it on her own.

on the other side, Maan, Dev, NT are not happy may be due to the lack of love and negligence from their parents..

waiting to read more..Hope you would continue soon.