New FF: Forbidden Desire - Thread 1 : Link Thread 2 / Page 1, 148 - Page 24

Originally posted by: rsusmita

nice start ...

loved it

thanks dear.. hope u read further

Originally posted by: preeti555

awesome part...maan not ready to mate geet so his dad told rudra will claim her...geet's dad is so cheap he actually sold geet

yep coz his human side isnt ready

Originally posted by: sohni_kudi_111

Awesome start di!
but I have loads of questions...

How did maan know geet's his mate n he's so possessive for geet! Y must she b marked soon either by maan or rudra? N since she's maan's mate, how can rudra mark her? Is naina human? Wat going to happen in 6 mths di?

Shane

shane.. all your questions will be answered later... coz this is just the start.. and you will enjoy them later

Originally posted by: dolly10

Awesome update...geet's father is so cheap...he sold his daughter for money...hate him...waiting for next update

even i do hate him

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

superb update...

Wht Rajveer said.. in spite of his seeing his son's anger.. he wants Rudra to met Geet.. will Maan allowed Rahul or Rudra to claim Geet.. no way.. & Maan Geet both attracted each other..

waiting for next update..do cont. soon

yes he wants and why he wants it you will know later

Originally posted by: jasraj123

nice part

eventhough still so many questions

why geet was there and why maan is not wanted to see her or mate her even when his father wants him to

omg his father is also ok to ask his other son to mate her😕 interesting but this is making maan so furious that he can kill his own father for that

what geet's father took money for geet to get marry her to rahul

sooo many complications but looking forward for next part.

story seems to be very intersting and

I am hoping in this maan geet will not turn against each other or hate each other for some revenge

hoping to have passionate maaneet story😆

Maan wants bt his human side does not want coz she is a human.. and why his father is behind you will have to wait.. i know many questions and all will be answered as time comes

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Loved the first part..

it was a different concept..

and y maan is maintaining his distance?? and i already hate this b**d rahul and her hell of a dad..

considering the first part i think geet too has not met maan, rt?

heheh... just wait and watch dear..😆

Originally posted by: sessy

omg what a start of the story.it's like maan is constantly battling his human and wolf side in claiming geet.i am curious to know why maan's dad want's maan or rudra to claim geet.i think there is a mistery to geet's past.it's disgusting to see that geet's dad dhanraj sold his daughter to the leach rahul for 50 lks.is he truly geet's dad ?

oh i cannot wait to see what maan is going to do to rahul when he knows about this

looking forward to read more

thx for the update,loved it

yes its his human half not ready to claim.. and why maan's dad wants rudra or maan you will have to wait

Originally posted by: priya111111

kya jabardast start huwa

maan trying to save geet as she is human but maan's dad is very much adamant in trying to make maan mate her and he even warned if he doesnt accept he is going to as rudra😡😡😡

aur yeha geet ki father ne usko bhejdiya rahul ko for 50lacs😡😡😡

yes dear he does not want to claim a human first

Originally posted by: vandy28

Hey nyc concpt...my frst tym reading such concpt so very excited
Frst updte is too gud... maan bein werewolf n fgtn btwn his both sides...n above tht protectr of geet...
Was geet kidnpd by maan so tht she dnt marry rahul...y rahul wantd to marry her so desprtly...
Geet fathr is disappmnt as fathr...
Frst updte itself promises lots of twst n secrt in ds fiction...eagrly waitn fr nxt updte...
If u pm ur updtes thn Do pm me ds fictn...else no prblm i wll surely follow...thnx

thank u so much and welcome to my stories dear