New FF: Forbidden Desire - Thread 1 : Link Thread 2 / Page 1, 148 - Page 25

Originally posted by: Ash1991

Superb update...
Geet maans mate bt maan not claiming her...
Geet to marry rahuk...interesting start...
As for precap nonr of the events will take place as maan wud usreky do smthing..

yep and why he does not want you will wait to know

Originally posted by: priya_ya1408

Interesting start dear
Geet is maan's mate but why rajveer wants geet for rudra now shayad iss liye ki maan geet ko apnale
And hate geet's father he sold geet for 50 lacs hope maan will come to know about this and will save her
Continue soon dear

why rajveer wants.. thats a secret dear

Originally posted by: Rajshree12

Soo Geet is Maan's mate...
But how can Rajveer tell Rudra then to mate with Geet??
n this jerk rahul...she is going to maary Geet...n Geet's selfish father...how can someone be sssooo cheap...
Waiting to see how will Maan save her now...

all your doubts will be cleared as story moves forward

Originally posted by: muskeeter

wooww...

so much complications n problems...in maan n geet's life...

i don't understand maan's father why he is hell bend on dat matting issue...

geet's father is really cheap...how could he do this to his own daughter...

you have to wait for the answer dear😛

Originally posted by: dreamyharika

comment updated di still posting again

geet has already become a mate of maan then why is rudra hell bent on getting geet itne saare log padh gaye geet ke peeche maan rahul and rudra 😆 two wolves and one man 😆 lekin milna toh usko maan se hi hai 😉

why is rajveer against his own son? aisa kya hai baap bete ke beech?? me confused now😕

waise didu i am falling for the story and maan more 😉 cant wait ab kya hoga?? maan bacha lega i know😆

haila meri pagal meri story ki deewani...😆

Originally posted by: mani24

ufff meri jannat di first part tau DHAMAKA hai di me officially in love wid this story 👏 di maan brought his mate his geet to there place aur kept her there safe aur told adi again to take her back frm where he brought her aur di maan's father is still forcing maan to mate her to make her one of them but maan is not doing it fearing ke she is a human aur he is not supposed to spoil her life aur di maan's father is calling is bro rudra taake he can mate wis maan ki geet😡 aur hearing this di maan came to his werewolf self which scared his father coz his father too knew ke no one is much stronger in the whole clan than maan his father was scared di but still his ego he did not budge from his stance aur di loved jab maan's mom said ke agar usne aisa kiya tau maan will kill him aur he knows tht too😡 di when geet woke up tau di her story was painful her father sold her out for 50 lacs to rahul taake he can marry her aur di geet is adamant ke she will not marry him di me scared aur I want maan to come aur take his mate his geet away from all this aur keep her safe aur secure widin the vicinity of his arms 😳 wiating for maan to take his geet away from rahul aur from rudra before he does anything to her😊 di this story is EPIC aur thank u di for tis amazing maaneet love story😳

Mani thank u so much

Originally posted by: Krishna_Sourav

congratulation for new MG FF

awesome start

loved it

omg Geet is maan's mate

where geet's family sold her to rahul there maan's father want rudra to claim geet

n maan got infuriated to hear it

pls pls continue soon

my first paranormal story I have ever read n this is start thanks shoba for writing on Maaneet

thanks rakhi... 😊

Superb n intertesting :-) so geet dad mary her bcaz of money bt why Maan kidnap her tht r vry confuse evn rajvir n maan talk to..hope ol wil clear in nxt part waiting!!!

Teaser

Maan the growl scared Adi as he disturbed the feral grey wolf of Maan. He looked back at the now half dead black wolf Drona and next moment his scary lighted eyes looked at Adi with blood on his face. Maan ... No and the moment Adi opened his mouth again taking a step forward Maan jumped on him biting into his shoulder but was soon knocked off with another heavy wolf just like him.

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Wat the hell are you doing? She pushed Rahul as she saw him almost covering her petite figure with his. Aur yeh kya.. chi she tried pushing as she felt him behaving weird and though she was scared she tried to be strong knowing he was stronger than her. Whose smell are you carrying?

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Why did you kill him Maan? Rajveer yelled as he was aggravated by the doings of his son and the heir. Why don't you bloody control your feral wolf? Maan sniffed the sides and smirked hearing his Dad why do I feel fear in you, Dad? Rajveer was infuriated and hearing the sarcastic words from Maan made him angrier. Don't you dare back me Maan... just a moment and I will force you in doing wat I want.. just a moment.

You dare touch her and I kill you Maan's wolf was biting inside wanting dominance right now wanting to rip Rajveer the way he had ripped Drona who deceived him for unworthy things in their werewolf community.

Enjoy the teaser

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hawww what was dat ? im shocked