Manneet new os Anhokha Bnadhan part 2, 3(A), 3(B) on 8 and 12,20 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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sweet
poor geet
so love in d air
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Angry Maan confronts his family! Dadi slaps Maan! She says Geet will stay wid her 4 six months! They r shocked! Maan cribs n dadi says it will b a year! Maan agrees to 6 months! Maan in Geet's room! Geet stunned! Dadi comes der! Maan hides! Geet tells dadi there was a chuha! Maan upset n sms her! Geet tensed after seeing the sms! update soon! Well written

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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
yaar mahi crying ye os to lambhi ho rahi hai


Part 3 (A)


geet just run to her room and just hide in duvet but got shocked of her life already someone in her duvet and before she give reaction he say don't shout geet

muje chuha bol rahi thi aur khud chiuya ke jaise ha duat main chup rahi this , maan ask with smirk geet just bend he head , and mummer ye itne jaldi kaise

maan - no ans now say why you called me chuha

geet - wo wo app chori chori , wo mu se nikal gaya she just bite her lips in nervousness

Maan just gulp hard and say please don't do that ...

geet give just confused look to maan like maine kya kiya

maan just mummer teara kuch nahi ho sakta Msk and he again ask lakin chuha ku bola

now geet get frustrated chuha nahi to kya sher bolti ke mere bedroom main sher aaya hai waise to dadi ke sammne chuha hi ban jate ho na to phir main kya galat bola chuha bolke waha shergiri dikhate to aise 6 month alag to nahi rahena padata app waha main yaha hum apne hi bedroom main aarma se bed pe , just than she get what she talking she just closed her mouth with her palm and look down in shyness

maan just look her like awe , and he thinking that she must be les talkative but ye to ha anni kya kehati rahti hai ha wo Mahi ke basanti se bhi jada baat karti hai maan just smirk and say wo to hum ek hi room main na bed room main bed ke upe...just than geet closed his mouth with her palm and say please her cheek turn red like cherry and maan just took chance and kiss on her palm and geet make big eyes as reaction

geet , apane wo kar diya

maan like innocent child kya kar diya geet

wo wo kiss kar diya

maan bol to aise rahi hai jaise maine lips pe kiss kar diya ho , beta maan don't think that lagta hai 6 mahine rukna pdega , and his devil mind say oh MSK 6 mahine rukega kiss ke liye , braking news

maan just say ok I will not kiss you ever tihk hai

geet - nahi nahi maine aisa kab bola

maan ab muje confused mat karo did you want or not want

geet just look other side and say wo thode din baad ...

maan just mummer l love this shy baby yaar

maan just put his hand in front of her and say can I have dance with you beautiful young lady

now geet turn read like apple and maan want this apple but he have to wait till she get comfortable with him

geet with shaking hand just put her hand in his hand , maan just start song from his mobile in slow voice so only they can hear that maan just put her hand on his shoulder and put his hand on her wrist but it just light , he avoid to press it or touch her any wear it is only there first day and he don't want to make her uncomfortable in any sense

the song is beautiful and geet also start to enjoy her dance yet she is shy as well as nervous but maan soft touch and his care to not touch her unnecessary brought respect for him in her mind a soft smile playing on her lips and maan feel like he won world today , because he successful to brought smile on her face maan stop fro dancing and say now have to go and geet make such face like small baby

she say muje akele main dar lagta hai

maan just want to pull her grumpy cheek , she just look like small kid he say in low voice oh my cutie pie , ok till you get sleep i am hear so now go and sleep geet just nodded in yes and stop for while and turn to him and say can I hug you ...

oh maan just old out on her innocence he just open his hand and geet just hug him and mummer thanks for lovely dance after geet sleep maan just went from balcony

after one month from last one month it is routing of maan to snake in geet room in morning and in night he brought something like flower , chocolate teddy etc etc , now geet much comfortable with him and just wait for him when maan brought so many chocolate first time she just kiss on his cheek and poor boy just froze on his place and geet so much lost in chocolate she don't get that what her small kiss on cheek done to him he just wanted took that talking rosy lips in his mouth and suck that until...

and when he brought teddy she just dancing in room like small kid ...he just lost in her she is kid yaar bus sab tension main mature ho gayi hain one naughty thought come on her mind and he just kiss on her cheek who is lost in teddy and before she get what happen he just run from balcony

poor geet just touch her cheek with her palm with shocked expression maan just capture that in his mobile before run away

now it is month complete there punishment and he want to make special thou he ask for outing to dadi but dadi jut denied and say not now after one month I can think about it

But he also MSK he just entered in geet room with so many things he just give her packet and send her in bathroom to change , after some time when she come out in new dress , she just look room it is turn so beautiful , candle light , arrange table for them and ...on and on

geet is lost in room beauty maan is lost in her she brought white dress for her and she looking like pari , maan ki pari maan just make her sit on table and say , geet only 5 month more and we can ...he left sentence half geet cheek start to get it color

maan just say today geet I want to know about your life so tale me everything and geet is geet there hosyiar pur express start in full speed and maan just lesion her , who is lesion less and staring and admiring her more her hair , her zumka which is touching her cheek etc etc at time of went back maan stop for moment and ask with little hesitation can I can I

geet just took his hand in her hand and say please be comfortable you ask me anything

maan wo iwant iwant GN kiss on your your

geet get her word , her cheek turn red but she just closed her eyes and just wnet closed to his face , maan get happy with her action and with dhak dhak heart he bend to her til today he so many time thing how soft will be her lips , is she use that color or it natural and today

he just bend near her face and just slitily brush his lips on her lips and mummer gn geet and both just set on fire , maan just want to kiss her hard but control himself an d just turn to go

poor geet who feel goose bump on her whole body just mummer ,why he stop , she think that she is talking in mind but she say loudly but maan just go out from her room and send her sms

geet

don't worry bada wala kiss bhi milega without stop but time aane par

maan

our poor girl just sharam se pani pani just hide in duvet




Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Me first again!!!!!!!!!!


its hattrick!!!!!! 🥳

what an update dear!!!!!!!!!!

simply superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ⭐️ 👏






maan sneaking into geet's room is just so shweeet !!!!!!!!!! but i think dadi already knows about his sneaking kaarnama !!!!!!!!!!! 😆

MSK is very naughty!!!!!!!!! and geet too is becoming bold with his teaching !!!!!! ☺️

and u maahi !!!!!!!!!!! apni basanti ka mazak uda rahi ho na????????


Maaneet dance was just lovelyyy

and kiss was just awesome and maan's taking permission was sooo cute


Mahi kyu na aap OS ko SS me convert kardo na its soo

good dear!!!!!!! we all love it very much !!!!!!! 😛 u can

give slow updates but extend it


Do cont soon dear!!!!!!!!!!





Uma /basanti



Edited by umamaaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
basanti... 😡
tu firr aa gai 😡

i hate u 😭
bye gn
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
nice update. Finally Maan accepted his fault and confesed in front of his family. The bua is bad, good punishment for her too.
Lol Dadima is so funny 6 months punishment. Maan hiding in Geet's room in the night.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Superb update
dadi gave solid punishment to everyone
agar bua ko ghar k baahar nikal dete toh jyaada accha hota ..
wow maaneet separation for 6 months strict dadima's order bt who can stop maan from meeting his new love his wife geet ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...sahi hua uss bua k saath...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
when i start to read story
i want to beat maan grrr
how can he did this
he broke her
n geet i also angry on her y she cant against maan told his family
but knew that her parent are no more
n her uncle marry her just to get ride of her what will xpect her
maan bua mad tamasha i hate this type of elder bath ko chupaney k bajai sab k samnay tamsha kartey hai
agar unhai pata chala toh woh geet say ask kar leti
nahi
familyheight of un humanity chi
maan love sam n she cheated him good deserve this
taking care of geet
want her forgivness n chance for their relation
n geet give the chance itni jaldi this not fair
2nd
apni wife say hug k liya permison
1st part mein hate him now thinking to like him
opsss family ko sab bata diya
maan did right this time
dadi salp him
his parent are guilty
n that bua is ki toh mein
dadi tusi great ho yaar kya punishment dya sab ko maan ko bhi
6 month hahah a
msk ab kiya kro gye
well he has a back up plan
ab dekhtey hai msk ka plan kaam karta hai ya uski dadi ka
wel maan zara bach k he is ur dadi
n geet always shy shy type

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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Just awesome
Becoz of bua geet faced so much...thank god maan ko akkal aaya
Maan asking permission to hug his wife
Dadi giving punishment for maaneet to stay separate for 6 months
But maan babu in geet's room
Ab aage kya hoga😉

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