MG FF Uljhe Rishtey---kahanni ek unkhili kali ki part 30on 103-1 sep - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago

part 23

meera come out from shock and look to girl and just run to her geet geet , ishe kya hua , kuch kyaya nahi kya geet wake up baccha kya hua , meera just panic with geet state

dev get confused with meera reaction , she just start chek up geet and same time called maan

meera - maan come in doc abhi clinic , geet yahi hai please come fast she is fainted and please brought that medicin also please jaldi aa jao please and cut the called other side maan with name of geet just say adi and sasha to follow him and took medicine of geet and reach their in minimum time

hear meera start her treatment and in 10 min her bp come in normal and geet start to open her eyes but hear maan voice and just closed it again , she fearing to face him , just than maan entered in room he just miss to see dev ,meera is with geet ,maan just went near geet bed , wo thik to hai na aur baby , in baby though maan himself don't get when his hand touch geet tummy like some magnate pull him

geet just closed her eyes , but she like this touch feel like so secure with this touch she just want to sit and hug him tight and cry her heart out but this but come in between them

just than maan feel some moment under his palm and geet just scare ...what is this ,but meera word clam her ,maan don't scare I think baby start to get your touch ...baby react on your touch

maan - like a small baby sacchi

meera - muchhi

both just look to each other and both remind slap and say same time sorry

meera- ku us nasur ko apani zindagi kharab karne de rahe ho ha bolo , aj uski wajse , maintum per haat uthaya , geeet get shock like what is this all but she want to lesion what is pain behind his smile she want to know , if he is married than where is his wife

meera- ku sam ko uski yaado ko apne upper havi hone de rahe ho maan ku usne tumarhi , meri uski hum sab ki zindagi kharab kar di maan aur in sab main ek nanhi jaan aur second unborn life suffer kar rahe hai maan ku nahi samjte tum ,tum ager geet se attract ho jate ya pyyar karte to sabse jada khush main hoti lakin tum ne geet ko sam samje liya that hurt me and I cant control myself and slap you , geet is not with you this thought just shake me so ...so aa small sob come from meera mouth maan just hug her and say don't cry meera don't

I know you care about me , I throw her out from my life but don't know in sleep how I called her name and that act with geet

meera - its ok jane do maan wo waapas aa gaya hai

maan - kon meera wo wo

ku naam lene ka bhi dil nahi ho raha hai kya , sound come from door of room and maan froze with sound , voice he know who is that person

maan mummer DEV

meera , not hear please say with cold voice and dev just went out ,maan just follow him

so maan singh khurana remind my name , muje to laga tha jaise dosti bhul gaya waise hi naam bhi bhul gaya hoga

maan mummer in painful voice dev ...

dev -ya ya dev you know kya

wo tumarhi puch (tail ) kaha hai , maan give confused look

dev - wo sam na Sameera maan singh khurana apne sam se permission li hai na say dev with taunting voice

maan - dev please

dev - what maan can I ask wrong question kya , in between how you care for this girl yaar , ku ki apno ki care tumane kabhi ki nahi phir ye ladki se intna lagav kuch ajeeb laga Mr .msk kya ye bhi sam ne karne ko bola hai

precap

present

maan and dev big fight on geet went with whom

dev just push meera on wall and just ...

past

Zindagi zindagi zindagi... haan.. zindagi

Zindagi zindagi.. dostonki duniyaadari me hasi me meri Zindagi ..

Aaisa kya hua re aaisa kyun hua re

Hot cha ha shot nako re

thora kasha maarle sav kasha maarle

Halki halki kik basu de .. hey

Saare gam chod re gham chod re

Zop mehi hot hasa re...

(Mai zindagi ka saath nibhata chala gaya

Har fikar ko dunve me udata chala gaya.. ) - 2

Zindagi zindagi zindagi... haan.. zindagi

Zindagi zindagi.. dostonki duniyaadari me hasi me meri Zindagi ..

next part in morning tomorrow

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


so i m the fist one to comment 😆
loved the update meera is soo good as doc, as friend she is awesome so geet heard both meera n maan i hope ki vo maan ke sath jaye n baby is responding to dad vaise bhi kaise respond nahi karega vo uska dad hai n so finally dev n maan are friend or brother still pending to know but jinke beech us chudeil sam ki vajah se unke beech jagda hua
eagerly waiting for next part to know ki geet kiske sath jayegi n mahi song past ia also good
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Posted: 11 years ago
very much emotional
what is past of dev n other as maan , meera
what is role of sam in brecking friendship
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baby started reacting to maan's touch lovely it is and meera apolizising maan for slapping him. faceoff between maan and dev and dev taunting maan.

ab kya hoga maan kaise samajhayega dev ko
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mahi 🤗...thank u for the update and pm...Maan touched Geet's stomach and baby moved...aww so sweet...loved Maan and Meera's convo...Dev is so angry and bitter...waiting for the past to umfold...and want Geet to be with Maanplzzz...plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! Maan n Dev were best friends! Wt did Sam do? Meera is wid Geet! She calls Maan! Maan feels the baby! Meera apologises to Maan! Dev n Maan argue! update soon! superbly written! Aweome precap!
Edited by khwaishfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice one
geet cant face maan so pretend sleep
listening meera n ,maan talk
aisa kiya hoya hai jo dev itni nafrat kar ta hai maan say
one thing is happy wali hai baby response to dady ohhh sooo WSOME
WAITING FOR NEXT
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Posted: 11 years ago
so sameera left him meera is angry on maan because of sameera and dev is also angry waiting for their past to revel.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow great story please update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update, plz geet with maan not with dev, he pushed meera why

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