MG FF Uljhe Rishtey---kahanni ek unkhili kali ki part 30on 103-1 sep - Page 22

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow lovely update thanks 4 pm update next part soon waiting 4 update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part mahi baby is respondng 2 maan's touch wow aakir dad hai na wts d mystry of dis chudel sam jise ne ssare frnds ko hurt kardiya waitng 4 d nxt part update soon 😃
Edited by christipie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautifully written emotional part...
geet closed her eyes and listening maan and meera talk...
is sam ne bahut bada kand kiya hoga jo maan or dev duur ho gaye...
good thing babby responce to maan touch...
thanks for the pm and update next part soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
😲 update milne waali hai kya mahi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please read note down side


Part 24

so maan singh khurana remind my name , muje to laga tha jaise dosti bhul gaya waise hi naam bhi bhul gaya hoga

maan mummer in painful voice dev ...

dev -ya ya dev you know kya

wo tumarhi puch (tail ) kaha hai , maan give confused look

dev - wo sam na Sameera maan singh khurana apne sam se permission li hai na say dev with taunting voice

maan - dev please

dev - what maan can I ask wrong question kya , in between how you care for this girl yaar , ku ki apno ki care tumane kabhi ki nahi phir ye ladki se intna lagav kuch ajeeb laga Mr .msk kya ye bhi sam ne karne ko bola hai ya fir mera se dil , nad before he complete that sentence someone just slap him hard ,dev turn to look that person it is sasha wo is firming in anger

dev mumeer sasha , kuch nahi sikha na tume abhi bhi apni zindagi se dev ask sasha

dev , bahot kuch sikha hu main sasha , thanks msk , apki wajase aj meri dusri dost ne muje per haat uthaya thanks , mere her ek riste ko todne ke liye ...lakin main nahi tootunga , I will not brake

dev turn to sasha , and ask with painful voice , why always I get punishment , every time iam wrong only ,jo insane hi galat hai unki galti tum loga ko ku nahi dikhati ku sasha

sasha try to put her hand on dev shoulder but he just stop and say main soucha tha mere aj bhi kuch log dost hail akin ok , iwiil just took geet with me and went from hear

first time maan say something in cold tone Geet mere sath jayegi , kisi aur ke sath nahi

dev - smirk and say ku wo teri private property hai kya , wo mere sath jaayegi ,ager tume uski itnhi chinta thi to ise haal main ku hay so stop this drama that you care for other msk

maan - dev tume jo chiye wo bolo lakin geet sirf mere sath jaayegi

dev - msk tume ku jarrorot hai uski , tumare liye sam hai ,aur meera to bhi , wo tich tich , you get bore with them kya

maan just lost his coolness and just punch dev hard on his face and dev shock for some second but next moment dev punch him hard , both just hitting each other so harshly , meera ,adi and sasha run to them and try to hold them

maan - ku nahi dekh pata sachaai kya hai , why you not looking truth ,jo dikh raha hai wo truth nahi hai , tab bhi nahi tha , abhi bhi nahi hai

dev - kya truth nahi hai ki yo and meera share relation a dirty relation

maan - DEV

dev -ku truth is bitter na msk

maan - dev don't use that word which cant taken back and which put us in remorse please yahi word tumko jine nahi denge dev

dev - oh truth kya , than why you go with meera for that abortion ,all just froze in their place ,meera sit nearby chair like soulless body

maan again punch dev hard

just than nurse come there and say , doc meera , meera your baby , and that word brought back meera from shock ,she just ask with fear kya hua , sis kya hua ushe tear just start to flow from meera eyes ,maan just come near her and say meera just control yourself please

but next meera word just shake dev soul ...

meera just hug maan and say brooo please save her please

maan kuch nahi hoga usae chalo mere sath and adi , sahsa meera and maan went from there dev who froze in his place come out , and mummer meera calling maan bro and ye baby ...dev just follow them

he saw all of them stop near glass door , dev try to look inside there a girl age around three year standing and laughing and clapping her hand



maan , shaitan ki beti shaitan hi hogi na , nurse ye kaise ho gaya ya , how she closed door , where are you in this time

nurse sorry sir wo , I just come our for second and , she closed another kundi

which could not open with key

meera - bacha kya kar rahi ho , ku muje tanse banati rahti ho maan just say meera just talk to her ok

maan just called ward boy and go behind room and just open window and slowly entered in room that girl who is all lost in meera talk don't get than ,maan just went behind her sit near her and tab on her shoulder and say hi buddy

first she get shocked than just hug maan in happiness and called mamu , mamu till than ward boy just open another knob of door and all just entered in room

meera just called in hard tone Anjali ...

land escape from dev foot Anjali his mother name he feel like someone slap him hard



precap

last part wala precap , last part nahi 😉


priya di 😕
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Note

just want to ask can i give next 3/4
part full of their past
or

you want past and present same time


and please don't get tense anyone
i know i start new story but
i will not ignore my another
work so don't worry
and enjoy update

i will give doaku wala maan
story update after journey
lakin bitch main mood
ho gaya to new story ka
update bhi de duni 😉😆

Mahi
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😲yeh kya next one last part


finally dev ko bada sa punch mila sab se aur yeh buddu abhi bhi nahi sudaradekho phirse blame karrahe hai meera aur maan ke rishthey ko lekar. ab patha chal gaya undono ka kya rishtha hai.

so anjali is meera's and dev's child

wow kya twist laaya hope now everything gets settled


mujhe 3/4 nahi mujhe aur jyaada parts chahiye😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
meera informed maan about geet
n baby reacted to his touch
geet heard maan n meeras talks n thinking where is his wife
dev mocking maan

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Posted: 11 years ago
maan n dev got into fight
dev using wrong words
meera is hurt
n nurse came saying about a baby
its anjali n meera calling maan as bro
dev is shocked
anjali must be his girl..
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 23
meera was shocked her condition 😲 dev get confused her reaction 😕
geet was sensed maan here she want hug him 🤗 baby react maan touch😊 geet to secured his touch she don't open eyes she want knows his painful 😔meer asked him sorry her behaviours dev and maan face to face what about next

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