Wired Hearts (5) Ch:39, New Thread (Sep 18) - Page 67

Originally posted by: Susegad

There is no sounding board like a sister. There is no mirror of truth like a sister.

She sees you for who you are and she tells you like it is.

Without a doubt!

The best part of this chapter for me was unquestionably the relationship between Raya and Geet.

It brought back so much nostalgia, so many memories.

🤗

I loved the ladies day out. What a blast. I could almost see the scenes playing out like a movie scene before my eyes😃

So glad to know that. 😃

I absolutely love how you give life even to the most negligible of characters there by making them so very real to us. You have also captured their personalities to the dot.

Thank you! 😳

Take the kids for example

Young Shay and Yana. Kids that age are so cute, but absolutely hate the cuddling and squeezing we adults subject them to. The cheek pulling, the uncontrollable squeezes are all a matter of extreme disgust to them.

I know! I've seen this happen so many times in front of my eyes. My sister, who is the Raya for me, runs after kids to cuddle them and they run away from her. 😆

Then there is the little worrier Sneha. She really is a mother hen isn't she? Worriying about everybody's feelings. She definitely reminds me of you😆

Of me? Really?

And then there is Ryan. I am forgetting how old he is, but I guess he is approaching teenage years. Boys that age feel awkward about themselves and generally everything around them and tend to be loners.

But Geet found the magic button that is god given to all boys...Cars😆

You guessed it right. Ryan is twelve and right now, he is one of the most difficult characters for me to write. He refuses to open up to me unless I want to talk cars. 😆

Is the haircut symbolic?

Are we going to see a change in Geet and her relationship with the head of ARK.😳

May...be! 😉

I had this checkered shirt that I loved and my husband hated. I refused to let it go, he refused to let me wear it, until one fine day it strangely disappeared.😲

But then so did two of his most favorite shirts.

People do have their own ways of loving and compromising I guess😆

It's all about give and take after all.😉

😆 What a way to give and take! 😆

So let's see how Ryan's grown up buddy finds the new hairstyle shall we?😉

Coming up next! 😉

This chapter was one of the best reads by far Mayyo.

I loved everything about it.😃

Thank you, Apa! I am so so glad you enjoyed it! 😃

Originally posted by: vrinda22

the girls having a day out with so much girly talks shopping n fun

geet had shortened her hair

how is both the boys going 2 react on it..

maan being friend with a small boy..so cool..

will geet ever think what she wants in her life..

n why she got angry with maan..

nice part

Originally posted by: honeygrape

nice one...loved the girls day out...raya raunaq relationship is lovly😳 dreamy indeed😊

Originally posted by: muskanp

I guess Ryan is t closest he could get to being with her
Very refreshing part
So keen to learn t guys in her life respond to this new hairstyle 😆
More than that her feeling to their respond 😉

Originally posted by: _SnowFlakes_

Fantastic update
I jst love Raunaq-Raya's couple ..both of them are so sweet & so much madly in love ..I loved hw raunaq said to geet that he will get his life back after 2 days when she was teasing him ..
Geet having gala time with raya, G & ananya with all the spicy gossips ..
Sneha is really cute kid & a chatterbox ..she was so excitedly explaining geet abt mall & how she can enjoy their ..
Geet & Ryan's convo was really nice ..
I loved the update so much ..😊

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

maan is a mystery

but i guess he's hiding many things in his heart

cont soon

Originally posted by: anant90

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Nice update...

You observe very little thing that happens in our life..and write it down in your update...

chahe wo girls day out ho ya kaise do sisters ek dusre ki life ke bare mein share karti hai ya fir relationship ke bare mein ho..

she tried to know about the friend of ryan who has these kind of cars..and wo friend kaun niklaa? Maan..😆

Thanks for the update Mayyo..😳

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

awesome update...loved it dear...😃

Originally posted by: _CookieMonster_

Awesme update
lovd it
missd maan alot..