DESTINY PLAY 2 updated Last Part on 17-7-2014 /Page 102 - Page 62

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor




PART - 4




HORRIBLE day for all but Night is very beautiful at KM for different reasons. Maan and Geet affected each other wheather they will accept or not.

On the other hands Parth,who was so scared in the morning now settled down completely. He jumped on Dev's lap when he was busy in working. He hit his abdomen with his knee and Dev falls down. Parth giggled and Dev to come in play mood with his son. He rolled him down and nuzzled his stomach to make him burst in laugh. Parth's giggles echoed his room and make it alive. Dev found solace seeing his son alright and calmed.

'dad you know,chachu fights like my super hero. Unhone yun mara,firr yun mara or sab dhammm...',Parth was totally impressed by Maan and telling his father the whole incident with actions. He is imatating what Maan do in the Mall. He explained to Dev how he beat all the goons. Parth's eyes were gleaming while giving detail to him.

For next half an hour he is telling stories to Dev and he too engrossed himself in his stories. When its getting late he pulled him in his embrace. 'Parth common champ its time to sleep.'

'dad waise sulao na jaise pehle sulate the.' He demands.

'par tab to aap chhote the na. Abi to big boy ho gaye ho.' Dev denied not genuienly. Inside he too wants to spend time with him,which his work wont allowed.

'nahi waise hi sona hai.' Parth insist.

Dev smile and took him in his arms. He turn off the lights and moved towards terrace with Parth. Parth rested his head on his shoulder and Dev roamed on whole terrace. Gradually his eyes turn heavy and sleep clutched him. Dev caressing his back tenderly and roamed till he went in deep sleep. Meantime one shadow came there.

Dev alerts and get ready to answer back if there is any who may be proved harmful.

'common relax its me.' one sound which is familiar,make him calm. He leave the rod again.

'Maan aise choro ki tarah aaoge to kaise pata chalega. Abi sir fod deta.' Dev complaints towards him and Maan smirked.

'by the way what are you doing here?' Maan enquired.

'ka hua aaj aise nahi puchhoge?' Dev mocked and both smiles wide.

'ha Dev bhai itni raat gaye babua ko leke ka rae ho?' Maan to come in fun mood and again speak like the way he use too infront of all.

Both laugh again and Dev feels Parth's moments. He understood that Parth is getting disturbed with their loud laughing sounds so he signaled Maan not to make noise. 'sshhh,he is sleeping.'

'ok,shall we...' Maan showed thumbs up and lower down his voice.

Both start walking again so Parth slept calmly. 'Maan tume jitna b thanx bolu kam hai. If today i m carrying my son is just because of you.' Dev showing grattitude towards him.


'no need of thanx Dev. Its my duty. Thats why i am here only. Main Parth ko jaan k hi bahar le gaya tha. I want to clear my doubts. And this time we able to arrest some ruffins also. It must be helpful for us to catch the main culprit.'Maan cleared his intentions.


'well i hope it settled down soon.' Dev get tensed again.

'Don't worry everything is gonna alright soon.' Maan is aware of his worries and dont want him to scare more. 'by the way what are you doing here with Parth?' He asked to divert his mind.

'Nainatara to rahi nahi. Ab iski maa b main or baap b. To woi kar raha hu. The day he born,only feels my warmth. To isko b aadat padd gai hai. Main aise hi isko terrace pe leke ghumta hu to ye chain se so jata hai.' Dev's eyes turn wet at the corners,feeling alone without NT.

'ek baat bolu? I know i dont have any right to interfare in your personal matters,but still. Dev this life is so long to live alone. You both need someone who took very good care of you. Meera achhi ladki hai and i dont know you are aware or not but she loves you.' Maan told him about his assuption he assume in the morning.

'i know she is sweet girl. Main, NT or Meera sath me padte the. Bahut achhi dost hai meri. Par main...' dev was confused wont know what he want exactly.

'zada sochne se failse kamzor ho jate hai.' Maan cut him down.

'nai Maan main NT ki jagah kisiko nahi de skta. Or firr step mother...' Dev have so many doubts,sply for his son's future.


'every girl is not the same. And you know what i checked her profile,i think she proved good mother. Parth needs her more then you. Baki decision is yours. Take Parth in confidence first and then decide.' Maan pressed his shoulder as he is giving support to him and then left from there,handovering Parth's toy car to him.

Maan moved towards the control room,where George is waiting for him. He salute seeing the Maan. 'sir..'

'any progress?' he asked strongly.

'sir we keeping eye on every moment. And also checking each and everyone's profile who came in the morning.' he told him.

'not only in morning. Checked everyone,who came today.' Maan commands him and he nodded.


MAAN scanning all the cameras carefully. He can saw everyone's moment. Except washrooms all places are protected with hidden cameras and speakers. He can even able to hear everyone's conversation too. Suddenly he found some thing weired in garden area,so he left the room in a pace moment and ran outside.

There is complete darkness all around. He scann the palce carefully. He aware that there is some one and to make sure he take his each and every step carefully,without coming in anyone's eyes. He felt some moments in bushes and went to there,bt found no one. He quickly take a round in whole garden area and found no one. True he fails to catch but he was sure that someone is hiding there.

'bas aaj ki raat and your are over...' he mummered in his mouth. Maan went back to mansion and collapsed with Geet. She glance him suspeciously. 'what are you doing here?' She asked and Maan again come to his mode seeing as he wont get her so she translate it in hindi.

'neend nai aa rai thi na to soche ki thoda ghum lete hai. Par tum eha ka kar rahi ho?' Maan snap back and showered questions on her.


'the reason is same as yours.' she said and moved.

Next morning was casual. In mid noon Geet secreatly went inside Maan's room and open his wardrobe as she is searching for something.. The very moment Maan shut the door on her face and confronts her. His eyes were glancing her suspeciously and face turn stern. The smile normally he is carrying is far away which clearly told that he is in MSK mode right now.

'meri almari se kya chahiye tume?',He enuired and Geet fummbles.

'kuchhh nahi main to bas waise hi..' she is trying to coverup herself. Her hand moved down towards her pant,but before she could do anything,Maan clenched her both wrists quickly and pinned her against the ward robe.

Geet is not an easy job. She shove him and freed herself from his grip. She quickly moved and threw paper weight towards his head but Maan's quickness saves him. She was in full lioness mode. Maan trying to overpowered her but she gave tough competition to him. Being a trained officed it beome difficult for him to catch this wild cat. Soon both facing each other holding guns in their hands.

'Geet drop the gun. I wont mind shooting you.' Maan threatened her.

'try it.' she challanged him.

Whole room turned into a battle field. Its very necessary for him to control her so he threw his gun on her hand due to which her gun dropped down and before she able to held it again,Maan hovered over her. She is laying underneath and trying to kick him. Maan quickly locked her legs and arms so she wont make moments. Both panting heavily and his whole weight was on her.


'leave me right now.' she commands angrily.

'try it baby. No one can slip from capt. MSK's grip.' he glared her and she is wriggling badly.


'i knew it that you are not the one you presenting to others. But you cant fooled me.' Geet gritted her teeth.

'i was here for you baby. Kal k hadse k baad you are over sweetheart. Now tell me why you are doing this?' both confront each other. Both true identities are opened now.

'you wont do anything.' Geet challanged him and she was right.

Suddenly noises grab's Maan's attention. He tied her first and went outside. Parth was taken by the kidnappers.



PRECAP: LAST PART..



NOTE:- guys i am ending DP,as no one seems intrest in that. So i had decided to wrap up this one. Soon i will Post the last part and no epilogue ok... 😡


nice update...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan's role...made us laugh n for geet irritated...bt at the end...they wer destined to b together...aftr all the problems come to an end...a new beginning...so it was destiny's play to bring them 2gether...
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Posted: 11 years ago
read all the part in a go... Wonderful.. and interesting to read.. Especially Maan's character in the beginning. He was really very funny.
Finally both Maan and Geet succeed saving Parth and Sahil's life.
It was Dev's uncle the kidnapper. How cruel and disgusting, he was after Dev's property..
Now Geet had join military again and have to report to her captain. I guess that's going to be Maan Singh Khurana. That would be interesting...
Eagerly waiting to read epilogue...


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Posted: 10 years ago
nice story👏👏



epilouge please😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi dear...pls post epilogue! Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
Richa..pls write epilogue for destny play
d story seems incomplete...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pls post epiii
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