DESTINY PLAY 2 updated Last Part on 17-7-2014 /Page 102 - Page 60

Awesome update dear

Originally posted by: zaara2212

oh so it was dev's chacha how disgusting😡
i am glad maan understood abt geet and helped her out
finally all is well 😊 and geet is going to report to her capt is that msk 😳😉😛

thanx dear

Originally posted by: Vidhi24

Loved all the updates, read it in one go, I loved the way you potrayed maan as desi gawar, the little little nock johk between maan and geet were nicely potrayed, loved parth and geet's attempts to bhagavo maan specially spider ones and the way maan protected parth was too good, parth ke jagah koi bhi hota to flat hi hojata, geet taking care of maan, akhir pyar ki sharooat ho hi gai, yeh kya geet is behind all this, I did'nt like that, phew she was doing just to save her little brother. Relieved that maan got to know that geet is innocent, aur maan is captain hmmm... I loved it. Recuse parth and sahil was well written, chahaji yaar yeh humesha villan kyu hote hai, good that he got arrested.
Hmmm... dev and meera decided to get together so.. sweet, loved that dev willed to take care of sahil so that geet could join acdemy, so geet is to
report her captain, no doubt he must be our maan.
Yeh story kuch jaldi khatam nahi ho rahi, I mean just a kiss no confession, no falling in love, yaar thoda acedemic I mean captain cadet love and romance hona chahiye tha, gawar maan to aapne dikha diya par thoda captain Maan Singh Khurana ka jalwa bhi to zarrori he, aur humari geet how she presents herself as cadet and sweeps maan of his feet...
Anyways its your decision but loved the entire concept and storyline, do keep writting...
Thanks and love you

jab story pe response hi nahi aayega to aise hi hoga

nice ending dear..

Originally posted by: ambbiha

I have missed track of this ss

Just read all the parts

I always like army based stories. Nice concept

😊😊👏

thanx dear

Kya hua

Originally posted by: gowri1712

😭

Ty dear

Originally posted by: 01aaradhya

Awsummm update dear⭐️

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#3300ff">hi thanks 4 da pm bt read n commented already, waiting 4 epilogue😊</font>

thanx once again sweety

I am not sure dear for epi

Originally posted by: _CookieMonster_

Waiting 4 epi