MG Time pass teen age love story of maaneet part 23- on 153 - 28 jan - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 2


second dhamaka





just than maan feel something different like cool air he just turn and saw a girl 16 age in salwar cover herself with duppata , walking with bending head she just saw for second to maan and maan ki to ghanti baj gayi


maan ye wali Vicky - perfect for love MM



maan - MM Vicky- MM marriage material yaar sidi sadi , well culture ,always lesion to elder ye wala stock abhi khatam ho raha hai bahot kam bacha hai


I hour before in geet house




same area in medal class family a beautiful girl age 16 just taking blessing from her father Geet - she just say in low voice pitaji main wahi admission lungi jaha app kahenge she is geet handa , her father word is always command for her don't have her own mind decision , have good voice her father want she become singer always in two choti ... taking duppata like this so nobody look her inch of body always talk in shudh hindi have 85% in 10 th class joining collage which is start today



Mohinder -look geet you going for study there so concentration on study get it


geet just nodded in yes and say in low voice main wahi karungi jo app kahenge



just than rano come near her , waha baki girls ke kapade dekhk ye mat sochana ke tumko bhi wahi peheneko milega



geet maanji muje pata hai ladki ka sharer pure kapade main dhakaa hua hi accha lagta hai aur mjue ishe veshbhusha ke sahili se (fashion of cloths ) main koi bhi ruchi nahi hai (Hobby ) jasie hamare pitaji kehate hai humain apane man ko naye vichore se sajana chiyae na ki tan ko to app nischint rahiya maaji



rano just kiss her forehead and geet went to her collage where maan all gang watch her and poor adi is so lost in her He just mummer aai baabnchi aani sai babanch shapath apunko yahich chiye ( oath of mother , father and god sai babaa I want her only her )but geet just bending eyes went to class and there come sound of song all look that side there maan gang another member Dagadu come there and he start the song

Please watch this video and the boy who in short imagin him as maan and the girl who in two long choti imagin geet

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YC-5p8wyDDs

Fulpaakharu, Fulpaakharu,

Chaan kiti disate, Fulpaakharu,



butterfly butterfly

looking so nice


and viky just pull maan and all just start to dance geet who going to her class look who is there she give like who is this mad and turn to go

Ya velinvar, fulanbarobar,

Goad kiti hasate, fulpakharu,

Chan kiti disate, fulpaakharu.

on this tree with flower

it smile so sweetly butterfly butterfly

looking so nice

maan just went behind her to mandir also where he just look to her geet give him confused look like what are he doing hear but she just took blessing from god and went to her house


Dole baarik, karitee luk luk, - 2

Gol mani janu te, fulapaakaru

Chan kiti disate, fulpaakharu.

with small eyes try to look

eyes look a like round Perl

butterfly butterfly

looking so nice

next day maan behind her to atta chaki also he drench all in atta ...

Mi dharu jaata, yei na haata -2

Durrach te, udate fulpaakaru

Chan kiti disate, fulpaakharu

when I try to hold

it just went away

butterfly butterfly

looking so nice

same day at night maan just grab Dagadu and say , teri to geo exam main history ki copy deta hai , tuje to main teri wajes muje mere baap se kitani padi pata hai kya , tu to gaya dekh main teri kaise vaat lagata hu


adi just come between and say maan jane de yaar waise bhi baraber wali copy milke kaha tu pass hone wala tha , all just giggle on adi word adi ok now by chalo bahot der ho gaya , dagdu just pull his ear and say agli bar perfect wali copy dunga yaar abhi maaf kardo maan bahi , maan just hug him and went to his house , he stop near his house window when he heard painful cry of his father



pinky - itna dard ho raha hai to ku itni riksha chala rahi ho baba



maan father to kya karu us nalayak ke class ki fee kaha se aaygi



just than pinky saw maan on window she just stop him there she say to baba I will come in second



she just went near maan and pull him away from house


maan ask why baba in pain di


pinky wo kuch nahi maan


maan just pull her chin and say apne maan se zute bolegi di ,pinky with teary eyes wo baba ne loan liya hai tumare class ki fee ke liye and now he driving rickshaw for more than 12 hour so get pain in leg and back



maan feel so much hurt in his mind she ask with shaking voice mujse ku chupaya , pinky say wo tuze tension nahi dena chati thi main aur baba maan just hug pinky and cried why you both are so good tum dono itne ache ku ho from tomorrow I will took any part time kal se apun koi part time lene wala hai to apne baap ko bolna sirf 6 hour driving ok


pinky just slap his forehead ku tera baap nah hai kya


maan just look hear and there and say di yaha nahi marne ka koi dekh lega to area main apna wat , impression kam ho jayega , phir apunse kon darega



Precap


Shakal (geet father ) v/s maan

maan v/s geet

adi v/s ...


Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mahi 🤗...thank u for the awesome update and pm...Maan is such a tapori character 😛...felt bad for his father 😭...he is working so hard for his sons fees...glad Maan got to know about it...waiting to see how he changes...Geet is too innocent to be true 😲..is she really like this or is she acting?...awesome song 👍🏼...really interesting story...plz continue 😊
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Edited by --Ratna-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update dear
vicky saying ab ye stock kham hai🤣
maan's friends are not good😡
maan following geet😊
maan's papa😭 bechara kitna kaam kar rahi hai
happy that maan understood his father's condition😃
hope maan will study hard and help his family😊
precap-geet's father😡
geet v/s maan😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update maan to pura tpory babu hai now maan want to help his father abh vo akbhar bechne vala banega lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update mahi
maan following geet to mandir
and humari geet bechari full confused and so innocent...
feel very sad for maans father yaar...
he is working so hard for making maan read
glad that atleast now maan understood him
and trying to help him
loved pinky alot
she is so great and suppoting sis😃
continue soon mahi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wsom updt
maan is full latoo on geet
loved it
and me hae no problem with bothh language
cont soon
thnx f rpm
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part mahi geet's hindi is so pure bena milavatwala 😆 nd maan is attractd twrds geet dats nice hpe she ill change maan precap is interstng waitng 4 d nxt part😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
maan following geet everywhere...
maan's father
loved the update!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..loved it
Aww felt bad for Maan's father
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan u should think about ur father
he spoil his health just want u to get good study but u
wel geet is choi mui
her parent is stict but good for her
some time strickness is beter
maan total fida
now what next

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