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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.






Part - 98





Days started rolling down ,, everyday Maan and Geet nd Dadima spent lots of time on discussion ,, they decided nd then went to shop ,, Dadima was very excited for every work nd ritual which touched Maaneet's hearts ,, how this elderly lady was dreaming for them ,, not only their but her all dreams wr started nd ended on them ,, Maan was very quiet nd relaxed ,, enjoying with his two most precious person ,, their single smile gave him an immense happiness .

Geet got busy in her sem exam ,, she went on leave for study ,, though Maan missed her in office but that was needed nd he wanted to place all d major work on track so that Manish cd handle them easily in his absence ,, after Geet exams their marriage was fixed in next week ,, all d shopping was done ,, their dresses wr ready to collect ,, for d venue he assured Dadima that everything was set perfectly nd that was a surprise for her nd Geet.


Every passing day their longing was increasing ,, both wr weaving dreams for their coming life ,, d mere thought of togetherness shivered them ,, Geet's exams started nd Maan made him more busy to divert his mind ,, he didn't want to disturb Geet ,, went early nd came lil late so that she cd spent sufficient time in her study ,, though he met her nd Dadima at BF n dinner nd both pouted nd complained him that he was not spanding time with them but Maan excused that before marriage he wanted to settle all d work,, asked Geet about her exams ,, he was eagerly waiting for d last exam ,, he was dying to spend time with her but there r many things which need equal attention nd importance for d life .

D days of longing nd restrictions wr over ,, invitations for Maan&Geet's wedding wr sent to very close friends nd business associates ,, it was Geet's last exam day nd when she came back from d Uni d whole KV was decorated with beautiful deco lights ,, after four days they wr going to tie in a sacred knot ,, Geet's heart skipped a beat nd she blushed thinking about her marriage ,, when she entered d living hall there wr Dadima , Maan , yash , Meer and A&A ,, Meera run nd hugged her tightly saying surprise .

Geet: Meera tum sab aaj yahan? Aaj kuch hai kaya ?

Meera: yes sweetie , as per my Wd B jiju ,, we r bride's relative nd going to live with her . ( Meera winked at her )

Geet: really , tum sab yahin rahoge ?

Meera brought Geet near dadima nd both sat there ,, Geet was very curious to know d program.

Maan: Nahi Geet we r going at d venue TM ,, today we r here to discuss all d things ,, they all come there directly .

Geet: where ..?

Dadima: beta , venue thoda durr hai .

Geet: durr matlab ?? shaadi yahan nahi hei ?

Dadima: nahi aur kahan hei ye Maan bata nahi rahe ... surprise hei .

Geet looked at Maan curiously nd he passed a smile to her but faked a smile in return ,, she wanted their marriage in d house ,, in KV , not outside* Maan sensed what was going through her mind , but he was sure that he wd make her understand * after taking dinner all went to pack their bags for journey though Maan had informed them before a week but there wr many things to do ,, Dadima told Geet to pack her stuff ,, her nd Maan's bags wr packed ,, Geet bid bye to them nd went to OH ,, she was very confused ,, she opened her cupboard nd stood there thinking ,, kya -kya pack karu? Babaji !! kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha .

Then she felt two arms snacking in her waist she startled with that sudden touch, but knew who was that ..Maan ,, hummm ,, he hummed nuzzling in her nape ,, she shivered , held his hands on her tummy ,, he gave feather kisses on her shoulder nd ear lobe ,, she leaned back to his frame with closed eyes drown in his proximity nd sweet torture ,, their cheeks wr touching , he rubbed his cheek with her nd gave a soft pack on her jaw line .. Maaan ,, she tightened her grip on his hands feeling week on her feet ,, bolo Geet .

She turned nd hugged him snaking her arms around his neck ,, hid her face in his crook giving a pack there ...Geet ,, Maan glued her more to him drown in to that soft nd warm touch of her lips ,, their breaths turned heavy nd warm ,, he brushed her his lips from her ear lobe to neck nd gave a deep wet kiss on d hollow of her neck ,, sucked that place lil ,, Geet gasped nd shuddred in his arms with a moan ... Maaannn ,, he came in sense with her reaction nd thought that he was losing again nd making her weak too ,, Maan tried hard to control his desires ,, Geet was completely lost in those magical moments.

Maan slightly parted nd cupped her face ,,, awwwee,, wanted to eat her raw right there ,, her red warm tempting cheeks , parted trembling pink lips ,, closed eyes ,, Oh!! Holly mother ,, without wasting any sec he took those rosy petals in his lips to quench their thirst ,, she threw her fingers in his hair nd griped them arching her body more to him , her whole body burnt in desires when his hardness touched her soft tingling part ,, when it became unbearable for her she left a weak cry ,,, aahhh Maaann ,, oh geeett my love ,, just 3 more days nd i'll fill ur every pour with my love ,, only three days sweetheart , he caressed her lips with his thumb nd placed his forehead on hers ,, his warm breaths wr touching her face ,, Geeet sweetie open ur eys .

Maan sensed her weakness nd increased d gap between them ,, it took them a good few min to control their feelings ,, Geet was all shied, blushed nd quiet ,not looking at him .

Maan: Geet why r u quiet nd confused ?

She didn't reply , just turned her face ,, Maan asked again nd she nodded in a No .

Maan: don't hide Geet , I saw ,, r u not happy with d venue matter ? Bolo na Geet .

Geet meekly: no it's not like that , if u had decided something that wd be special .

Maan : but u r not happy ,, tell me what do u want ?

Geet: Maan , i want our marriage in our home not outside .

Maan: Geet , I knew it, but trust me i'm doing this with a reason nd won't disappoint u .

Geet nodded nd Maan packed on her forehead lovingly to assure her .

Maan: chalo tumhari packing mei help ker deta hun ,, we have to move early in d morning nd select few dresses nd imp stuffs of ur requirement ,, ur wedding dresses nd other things r packed with mine in a separate bag , OK .

He took out her travelling bags nd told her to gave her stuff to him to pack ,, Geet handed him nd he packed them neatly in few min ,, after packing he kept d bag aside nd told her to take some sleep for few hrs then they have to get ready ,, bidding her GN he came out nd went towards his BR * Maan called Adi whom he sent a week ago to make arrangements ,, discussed for few min told him about their departure nd then went to catch some sleep .


Precap ---- marriage venue nd all rituals ...


Part - 99
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4069620/mg-ss-the-torment-thread-14-updated-epilogue-pg63-29th-june?pn=5

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😊 aa gai tum..
sabki trd per bhatak rahi hu...koi to baat kare..😆



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AM UPDATING MCK... tum bhi jaldi se update dekar aa... baat karni hain... jaldi jaldi ...

aaj ka hello pic dekh kaisa hain... meine banaaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

🤗 Hi lakshu...
wow!! it's bful yaar..😃
ab ye bhi banane lagi.. cool...😎
kaise banaya..??😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


🤗 Hi lakshu...
wow!! it's bful yaar..😃
ab ye bhi banane lagi.. cool...😎
kaise banaya..??😃



mona ke site mein daalne ke liye banaaya... even i can use na😆

google se pics li and then edited it
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Posted: 11 years ago
mei bhi aagayi..
update soon barbie..
i have my fav daily dialogue..
im sleepy 🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago
hello dona..
watsup aayi mei morning to say gm😆
ab yahaan for gn8
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22

mei bhi aagayi..

update soon barbie..
i have my fav daily dialogue..
im sleepy 🤣


😆😆
welcome di
wait karo ye humara dialog hai
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22

hello dona..
watsup aayi mei morning to say gm😆
ab yahaan for gn8


yes di saw ur good morning 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

🤗 Hi dona...


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