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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Loved it Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ooh la la! Kya update tha! I mean like seriously WOW!
Wow Kalpana you have such awesome writing skills! You are very talented! I must say that almost every story that I read that you wrote have ArShi and Maneet in them, and they do make a pretty good combination! All you need to do is just take a jodi like Arshi and Maneet, add some of Kalpana's amazing writing skills and Tada! you've got a whole new wonderful, masaledaar FF to read! By the way I love those short stories that you put up at every intro on your new threads I love each and every one of them. It's like you already met the characters and are talking to them in real life.

Okay so now to the chappy:

Maan gave Geet the responsibility of arranging Khurana Construction's Anniversary party. He already calls her hi future wife mentally I know that everyone knows that like ArShi and Geet but not his clients and guests. Geet did a pretty good ob arranging the party. Way to go Geet you made Maan Singh Khurana proud of you!

Finally Maan realizes that his sister is beginning to fall in love with Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada aka chota Dhak Dhak (for me he will aways be bada Dhak Dhak 😆)So he already believes that our Laad Governor is erfect for his sister but Khushi doesn't know that and Maan wants her to find that out by herself.

So Maan sees Arnav in the same mood that he saw Khushi in.
LOL he actually thought that both Arnav and Khushi need to be locked in room so that they can solve their problems and then come out and live their lives peacefully. Seriously that is a wonderful idea but we all know that it is not going to work out that way because of Khushi's stubbornness

I really like the way you described how Maan felt when he saw his lady love aka Geet Handa future Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana (according to him and us). Maan finds out that Geet wore a sari on purpoe she she could see him drooling on her. Naughty Geet!😆 She is very well aware of the effect that she has on him. They are so lost in each other that neither of them noticed the staff and guests swooning over Geet.

Geet was teasing Maan 😆 Maneet are becoming so naughty! She walks up to him while he is still lost in her and talks to him like he is his employee and he is her boss. Her way of teasing him was first wearing that saari that made him forget his surroundings and just only see her and then talking to him like they are only boss employee(including the winking part). Maan is not going to let her get away with this so easily he is going to get her back for sure.

Awww Khushi is admiring her brother and future bhabi. They look so perfect with each other. (Let me tell you a secret Khushi, I know someone that would make your jodi with him become a superhit jodi it's Arnav but you don't know that yet 😆) So she bumps into Arnav while admiring her bro and future bhabs. So cut Arnav Khushi have a short eyelock when Arnav is trying to bring her back to her balance. Arnav eyes are showing love and longinging for her while Khushi's are showing confusion and uncertainty. But what is the uncertainty for? I understand why there is confusion because she is confused about her feelings for him.

ArShi are out of their eyelock when they see Maan asking Geet for a dance and she agrees. This lights up some hope in Arnav and he asks Khushi to dance with him to which see refuses leaving Arnav again in pain because she gets jealous thinking that Arnav brought Annie to the party. Argh! Why did Annie have to show up at wrong timing! She seriously is the kabab mei haddi!
Oh so she thinks that Khushi doesn't deserve Arnav. But what she doesn't know is that Arnav can never be hers and that Arnav Khushi are made for each other. No matter how hard she tries to separate or keep them away, it's not going to work because Arnav Khushi are "meant to be".

I like the dance scene, Maan is getting Geet back for teasing him while dancing with her. (I've never heard of that song before)

Awww poor baby, Arnav is wondering why Khushi doesn't love him back. (Don't worry Arnie she does but she just hasn't realized it yet) He is so cute, he followed Khushi to the garden know if she's okay or not. It looks like he found out the reason of her tears, she is jealous of Annie. *facepalm* Saara satyanas kardiya by telling her that it was his plan to make her jealous. Yeh Arnav bhi na ghalat time pe ghalat cheez bol deta hai. Oh man! Khushi is angry now...
Par Arnav bhi kya kare he was drunk when he blurted out about his jealousy plan

*gasps* Oh my gosh! They just about to kiss until that Annie interrupted😡(Last time during diwali episode Arnav's phone rang when Aman called him but this time Aman wasn't the disturbance it was Annie)

LOL Maaneet are still busy teasing each other while Arshi on the other side are having problems
Right now Maaneet's love story is going smooth but I don't knw what's coming up in the future
As for right now I can't say the same for Arshi since Khushi hasn't realized and confessed her love yet.
Maaneet kissed!😲 😳 nice scene
Chalo atleast ek toh hua na
Arshi ka abhi incomplete hai

Grrr that Sasha. She took a picture of Maaneet kissing.😲 What is she cooking up that evil mind of hers. Whatever it is, I hope that Maan Geet will be able to handle the situation.

So Annie heard the whole conversation between Arnav Khushi. Eavesdropping!
She was happy that Khushi told Arnav that she didn't love him but her happiness didn't last long because she saw ArShi's almost kiss.

Who was Annie talking to on the phone? She has become an obsessed lover like Shyam but only female version. She is dangerous. Annie is trying to kill Khushi and make it look like an accident 😲😡.She is wrong again! No matter what she does she can't separate Arshi they are meant to be. I hope that Arnav will find out about her true intentions and save Khushi.

I hope that Khushi will realize that she loves Arnav soon!
The update was fantastic!
Thanks for the PM!
Update soon! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice one...have written the kissin scene well😳 finlly they kissed😆 anniee😡😡 i hate her already...hope she wont harm her...why is khushi soo stubborn?/😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan teasing geet maaneet dace awesome kushi sense some one see her she angry for arnav told to kushi their are planed by himself sashs j maaneet kissing anie heard arnav kushi conversation she plan killed kushi nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
maaneet dance was mesmerising.u chose d best song.but arshi was so tragic.truth abt arnav's drama is out.khushi got angry.i got angry with her.but she cares 4 him.the kiss was incomplete bcz of that stupid annie.so irritating that annie has turned rly -ve.hope she gets exposed soon n khushi wont b hurt
Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
now arnav gone away frome the khushi.
may b luck is not in their favor right now.
tf pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsom updt
loved it
love maaeet romance
arnav tell hiss all plan to khushi
tht annie is dengorous maan
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
geet teasing maan by wearing saree or by getting close to him
maaneet first kiss and shasha clicked pic of that
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Posted: 11 years ago
meant to say that khushi must love him right
why else she almost let aru kiss her
or she would have pushed or slapped aru right
khushi why would their jealousy plan make a difference to you dear
after all you dont love him
and aru when drunk go no where near khushi
you just ruin things
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Posted: 11 years ago
ARNAV'S PLAN BACKFIRED AS HE REVEALED IT TO KHUSHI AND NOW SHE IS ANGRY WITH HIM

BOTH SASHA AND ANNIE ARE DANGEROUS - DONT LET THEM RUIN ALL THEIR LIVES
WISH ALL THEIR PLANS JUST BRING THEM CLOSER AND MAKE THEM MORE FRUSTRATED

WAITING FOR THE TWISTS

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