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Posted: 11 years ago
nyc update..
specially loved tat last Arshi pic.. ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyforsarun

Just read all the updates in one go
This is a really amazing story with ArShi and Maaneet!
I love it!
So Arnav is tired of all this fake romance with Annie to make Khushi jealous
Khushi ko seriously Fadk Padtha Hai!
I hope she realizes that she loves Arnav soon!
So she did feel attraction for Arnav at first but then it died down due to his arrogance
Gosh Arnav! That was the wrong time to be arrogant
I loved the way Arnav answered Annie
Poor Annie she loves Arnav but her love is one sided too.
I'm loving Maneet's love story it looks so cute!
I hope that Maan will realize that Khushi loves Arnav and make her understand.
I'm loving both Arshi's and Maaneet's love story!
Thanks for the PM!
Please update soon!

Hey dear!
Thanks for giving my Deewanapan a chance!
I am really glad you liked it so much!
Khushi will soon realise her love once the story starts its roller coaster ride starting with next chapter! I am so glad you liked my possessive Arnav!😃
Thanks for the review!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zebali

nice 1.

annni v bad drama changed in to real.
khushi what the.
there is no need arnav to pretant further straightly go and confessed ur love.
tf pm.

If Arnav went straight and proposed to Khushi, then why would I write this story?😆
Coz there will be no story left!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Deelight

nyc update..
specially loved tat last Arshi pic.. ❤️

Thank you!😃
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CHAPTER 19. TWO ROMANTIC MOMENTS AND TWO SINISTER LADIES!

Maan smiled as he greeted his guests at the KC's Anniversary party. Most of his clients and employees had come to the party and many seemed to compliment him for the arrangements. Maan smiled proudly. He had given Geet the job of arranging the party and she seemed to have done a good job. Maan smiled with pride as another client complimented him about the arrangements. That is my future wife's work! Maan wanted to tell everybody but he remained quiet for the sake of Geet's privacy.

As Maan walked around the room, he saw his sister Khushi standing in a corner looking around forlornly. Maan shook his head. It seemed that his sister was finally falling for Arnav. Maan smiled. Arnav was perfect for his sister; if only Khushi saw this too! But Khushi was nothing but stubborn and for once Maan refused to interfere in his sister's problem! Laaton ke bhoot baaton se nahi maante! Khushi needed to come around in her own time! Interference from family will make her more stubborn and she will be in denial longer.

Maan turned around only to see another forlorn looking fellow named Arnav! Ek taraf Khushi dukhi hai aur doosri taraf yeh Arnav! Seriously, these two need to be locked in a room and not allowed to come out till their issues were solved. He could have done that but he knew his sister. She was too stubborn for such acts. She will remain even if that meant being locked for longer. Maan shook his head in amusement and turned around with his eyes constantly searching for his Geet.

Suddenly, Maan sensed Geet and he turned around to look at the doorway. His eyes widened and his breath hitched as he saw his love. Dressed in a shimmering saree which wrapped around her body highlighting each and every one of her curves and her face glowing like an angel, there stood Geet. She took Maan's breath away as she walked towards him. Her eyes were right on him twinkling mischievously and there was a knowing smile on her lips and Maan realized that Geet had dressed up in a Saree just for him. Her eyes and her smile seemed to tell that she knew very well the effect she was having on him. She walked right towards him while he looked at her stupefied. Neither of them noticed the staffs and clients staring at Geet, awed by her beauty.

Geet stood in front of Maan and gave him a wink and Maan came out of his thoughts. He looked at her in shock and Geet smiled mischievously, "Hello Maan Sir!" Maan narrowed his eyes. She was teasing him! She, Geet Handa, was teasing him, Maan Singh Khurana! She was teasing him with her sensual saree and twinkling eyes knowing very well that he could not have her in his arms in front of the party goers. Dekhlunga tumhein Geet Handa! Dekhlunga! He stormed away from there and Geet let out a giggle. That was so fun!

Khushi was walking around looking at her brother and Geet. She smiled; how perfect they looked with each other! Lost in her thoughts she crashed into Arnav. Arnav stilled her by grabbing her arms and Khushi's eyes looked right into Arnav's. Both stared at each other; Arnav's eyes showing his love and longing for her while Khushi's eyes showed confusion and uncertainty.

Suddenly, there was an announcement that the dance floor was open for dancing and music started playing. Khushi and Arnav came out of their thoughts and looked around awkwardly. Both their eyes reached Maan and Geet on the other side of the room where Maan seemed to ask Geet to dance and Geet seemed to shyly agree. Arnav turned to look at Khushi with hope in his eyes. He raised his hand to ask her for a dance when Khushi's eyes fell on Annie coming towards them. Yeh yahaan? Veerji ne toh bulaaya nahi hoga! Toh kya Arnavji ise yahaan le aaye hain? She looked at Arnav with accusing eyes and stormed away from there. Arnav looked at her retreating back with disappointment and pain.

Annie smiled as she saw Khushi walk away. Jaao Khushi jaao! You don't deserve Arnav! She walked over to Arnav to ask him to dance but before she could say anything Arnav walked away to the bar and Annie closed her eyes in pain. Sab uss Khushi ke wajah se hua hai! Chali kyun nahi jaati humaari zindagi se!

Maan and Geet smiled as they took their place on the dance floor. The lights dimmed down as the song started.

Sholon Si Sholon Si

Teri Aankhon Ki Yeh Roshni

Kiske Liye Hai

Kiske Liye Hai

Maan took the lead and Geet followed him as they danced on the floor. As Maan was guiding her and Geet was letting him control the moves, they seem to move flawlessly.

Chandni Chandni

Tere Chehre Ki Yeh Chandni

Kiske Liye Hai

Kiske Liye Hai

Maan dipped Geet down and then pulling her up, he spun her around.

Tera Muskuraana

Nazar Yun Jhukaana

He pulled her close and spun her outwards.

Tera Muskuraana

Nazar Yun Jhukaana

Mere Liye Hai Bas

Mere Liye Hai

He twirled her around and then dipped her down making her almost touch the floor.

Sholon Si Sholon Si

Teri Aankhon Ki Yeh Roshni

Kiske Liye Hai

Kiske Liye Hai

He pulled her up and both continued to dance.

Chandni Chandni

Tere Chehre Ki Yeh Chandni

Kiske Liye Hai

Kiske Liye Hai

As the music began Maan pulled Geet close and his hand ventured from her back slowly upwards. Geet felt her breath hitch as Maan pressed her against him with his hands trailing her upper back. She felt lost in his touch and closed her eyes. His fingers continued to tingle her senses, creating feelings inside her and making her heart race. Maan bent down and whispered in her ears, "Mujhe tease kar rahi thi na? Ab kaisa lag raha hai?" He pulled away from her as her eyes opened and she looked at him in shock. He smirked at her and spun her outwards.

Samjho

Mera Jo Ishaara Hai

He pulled her in but the smirk refused to go from his face.

Jo Bhi Hai Mera Woh Tumhaara Hai

She narrowed her eyes promising revenge as they continued to dance.

Samjho Mera Jo Ishaara Hai

Jo Bhi Hai Mera Woh Tumhaara Hai

She stood on her tip toes and placed a kiss on his cheek lingering longer than necessary and pulling away sensually. She gave him a coy look while trailing her fingers right around his throat. "Geet!", Maan hissed and Geet giggled letting go of him. Luckily the light was dimmed around them so no one noticed their games.

Leher Mein Khoyi

Hoon Khoyi

Manzil Toh Hai Tu Kinaara Hai

Yeh Meri Adaayein Yeh Meri Wafaayein

Yeh Meri Adaayein Yeh Meri Wafaayein

Tujhko Pata Hai Sab

Tere Liye Hai

Soon Maan and Geet were dancing on the floor again as the tempo of the song picked up.

Sholon Si Sholon Si

Meri Aankhon Ki Yeh Roshni

Tere Liye Hai

Tere Liye Hai

Chandni Chandni

Mere Chehre Ki Yeh Chandni

Tere Liye Hai

Tere Liye Hai

As Maan and Geet continued to dance to the music of the song, Arnav stared at Khushi from far all the while drinking whisky. Khushi sensed his stare from the moment it started and she felt uncomfortable due to it. But she refused to look at him or give him a single glance as her heart still burned due to Annie's arrival. She smiled and talked to the person in front of her but each and every one of her senses were aware of Arnav's stare.

Haske

Dikha Do Deewane Ko

Arnav wondered why Khushi rejected him constantly. Why couldn't she love him back? He wondered as he stared at the glass in his hands.

Jo Ho Raha Hai Ho Jaane Do

Maan lifted Geet up and then slid her down making sure that each and every part of her touched his. She looked at him breathless and he slowly dipped her.

Haske Dikha Do Deewane Ko

Jo Ho Raha Hai Ho Jaane Do

Khushi could not bear Arnav's stare anymore and walked out of the hall to the garden in the front.

Dil Ki Uljhan

Zubaan Pe

Arnav followed her out, the alcohol in him giving him some courage.

Aati Hai Toh Aa Bhi Jaane Do

Geet narrowed her eyes at Maan's attempt and she pulled him close leaving only a small gap between their lips.

Yeh Hoton Ki Narmi

Yeh Saanson Ki Garmi

Maan felt his breath leave as he stared into her eyes wanting to remove the gap between their lips.

Mere Liye Hai Bas

Mere Liye Hai

Geet pulled back and spun away making Maan look at her incredulously.

Sholon Si Sholon Si

Teri Aankhon Ki Yeh Roshni

Kiske Liye Hai

Kiske Liye Hai

Geet winked at him playfully and Maan shook his head. Iska badla toh main leke rahunga Geet!

Chandni Chandni

Tere Chehre Ki Yeh Chandni

Kiske Liye Hai

Kiske Liye Hai

They continued to dance; Maan with annoyance on his face and Geet with mischief in her eyes.

Tera Muskuraana

Nazar Yun Jhukaana

Tera Muskuraana

Nazar Yun Jhukaana

Mere Liye Hai Bas

Mere Liye Hai

As the song ended and the lights came on, Geet walked away from Maan towards the audience while Maan was left standing on the dance floor looking at her longingly. As he walked after her, some clients accosted him and he was forced to talk to them while Geet remained in his periphery trying to tease him by looking at him coyly. Maan had to smile and talk to all his clients when all he wanted was to hold Geet in his arms. Geet seemed to know this and kept on teasing him with her coy smile and shy glances.

Khushi stormed off to the garden as tears welled up in her eyes. She did not know how long she stood there crying when she heard Arnav speak behind her, "Khushi! Are you crying?" Khushi's eyes widened and she wiped her eyes. She turned around and shook her head, "Nahi toh!"

Khushi tried to walk away from there but Arnav caught her wrist. "Tum ro rahi ho, right? Coz you are feeling jealous, right?"

Khushi looked at him in shock. How did he know that?
He pulled her close and looked at her with excitement, "You are jealous, right? You are jealous that Annie is getting so close to me, right?"

When Khushi continued to look at him in shock, he pulled away and grinned at her happily, "You are jealous of Annie; which means you have feelings for me!"

He grabbed her by her arms and pulled her close, "You are falling in love with me, right?"

He left her and stumbled a few steps back in exhilaration, "That means my plan worked!"

Khushi looked at Arnav in horror. What plan? Khushi did not know she said her question out loud till Arnav answered, "To make you jealous with the help of Annie! And it worked!"

Arnav came close and hugged Khushi tightly, "Oh Khushi! I am so happy today! You have feelings for me too! I am so happy!"

Suddenly Arnav felt himself being pushed away and he looked at Khushi in shock.

Khushi glared at Arnav with anger and hatred.

"How dare you!", she hissed.

"HOW DARE YOU!", she screeched making Arnav look at her in horror.

Khushi looked at him with accusing eyes, "How dare you play games with me! How dare you play with my emotions!"

"Khushi...", Arnav tried to hug her when she pushed him away again.

"Bas kijiye Arnavji! Aapne humein samjha kya hai? Koi khilona? Chalo dekhte hain jalan ki chaabi ghumaaye toh kya hota hai?", Khushi glared at him while Arnav looked at her in confusion. If he had not been drunk, he would have understood his mistake. Infact, he would not have approached her at all and definitely would not have told her about his jealousy plan! But as he was drunk, he could not comprehend what was happening at all! He just looked at Khushi in confusion.

Khushi continued to glare at him and then slowly spoke, "Hum aapse aakhri baar keh rahe hain! Hum aapse pyaar nahi karte aur naahi kabhi karenge! Aur agar in dino mein humaare dil ne aapke liye kuch bhi mehsoos kiya ho, aaj aapke iss plan ko jaankar sab khatam hogaya!"

"Khushi!", Arnav whined and Khushi pushed him away, "Bas kijiye Arnavji! Humein bhool jaayiye! I don't love you!"

Arnav's horror and confusion turned into anger and he walked towards her and glared at her, "Kya kahaa tumne?"

Surprised to see him angry, Khushi stumbled few steps back and her back slammed into the wall nearby. Arnav closed in on her and caged her between the wall and him with his hands. Khushi looked to her sides at his hands and then looked at him with worry. He leaned towards her and hissed, "Kya kahaa tumne? You don't love me? You don't love me?" He slammed his hand into the wall, "Why don't you?"

"Arnavji!", Khushi shouted as she saw his hand bleeding. His eyes reached hers and they stared at each other; Arnav with pain and longing and Khushi with worry for him. Arnav slowly leaned close and it dawned to Khushi that Arnav was about to kiss her. She felt her breath hitch and her heart started beating fast. She felt his breath on her face and she closed her eyes; her heart and body longing for his kiss.

"ARNIE!", A shout came and Khushi was brought out of her world. She pushed Arnav and Arnav stumbled back just as Annie arrived there. Khushi looked away awkwardly and walked off from there not looking into anyone's eyes. Arnav started to sway in his place and Annie caught him and dragged him to her car planning to drop him at his house.

Just few minutes after Annie and Arnav walked away from the garden, Geet came running out of the hall and took a deep breath. She let out a giggle and grinned happily just as Maan followed her out. Till now, Geet had continued to tease Maan while Maan tried to get away from his clients. And the moment he saw the chance, Maan took it and walked towards Geet. Geet smiled and sneaked out to the garden followed by Maan. No one noticed them sneak away except one person. The person waited for a while and then followed them.

Geet and Maan grinned at each other and then Maan walked towards her. Geet's eyes widened and she shook her head with a shy smile on her face. She walked backwards and Maan followed her. Her back slammed into the same wall, Khushi's back had slammed into few minutes ago. Maan caged Geet in the same way Arnav had caged Khushi few minutes ago. But unlike Arnav and Khushi who were angry at each other, Maan and Geet were looking at each other with love.

"Toh Miss. Geet Handa! Tum mujhe ched rahi thi?", Maan asked playfully.

Geet shook her head looking at him innocently and then giving him a coy smile as she nodded softly.

Maan leaned closer to her and her heart beat rose. She still gave him a mischief filled look.

"Jaanti ho! Sher ko cheda nahi karte! Naaraaz hogaye toh anjaam bura hota hai!" Maan whispered.

Geet tilted her head sideways and whispered back, "Kyun? Kya Anjaam hota hai?"

"Yeh!", Maan whispered and pressed his lips to hers. Geet stilled for a moment and then started to kiss him back. Maan placed his hands on her waist and pulled her close and Geet placed her hands on his chest grabbing his shirt tightly. Their heart beat in sync as they continued to kiss each other. They pulled away when air seemed the issue and looked at each other with love and lust in their eyes. Maan moved close and kissed her again. His one hand trailed into her hair while his other hand grasped her waist tightly. Geet grabbed his collar and tugged it towards her wanting to be as close to him as possible. The whole atmosphere seemed to charge with electricity as they poured their feelings into the kiss.

As Maan and Geet continued to kiss each other, the person who noticed them sneaking entered the garden, took in the scenario and fumed in anger. That person was none other than Sasha. She glared at them with anger, "MK ko achche jaal mein fasaaya Geet! Well done! Tumne toh mere MK ko mujhse door hi kar diya! Very good! Lekin main chup nahi baithungi! Tum dono ko ya toh alag karungi ya tumhaare life mein sirf problems khadi karungi! Dekho ab main kya karti hoon!" She pulled out her mobile and clicked a picture of them kissing. Then she smirked and walked away. Ab dekhti hoon kaise MK aur Geet iss situation ko handle karte hain!

Annie had followed Arnav the moment he had started following Khushi out of the hall and had heard their whole argument while staying in hiding. She smiled as she heard Khushi affirm that she was not in love with Arnav. Maybe now Arnav would move on and maybe give me a chance! Annie thought. But she was shocked when Arnav attempted to kiss Khushi and Khushi closed her eyes. Nahi! No! Iska matlab Khushi Arnav ke liye kuch mehsoos karti hai! No! I can't let this happen! I have to disturb them! Her blood boiled in anger. She called Arnav's name loudly and entered the garden as if she knew nothing about what had happened.

And now that Annie was in her car after driving Arnav home, she thought about the scene and she stopped the car with a jerk. Mujhe kuch karna hoga! Iss Khushi ko Arnav ke raaste se hataana hoga! She pulled up her phone and dialed a number. After giving some instructions, she warned the other person, "I don't care tum yeh kaise karte ho lekin yeh ek haadsa lagna chaahiye! Kisiko bhi pata nahi chalna chaahiye ki Khushi Khurana ke maut ek accident nahi, ek saazish thi! Samjhe!" She cut her phone and smiled vindictively. Ab dekhti hoon main Miss. Khushi Khurana! Tum kaise Arnav ke zindagi se nahi jaati!

The song is from the movie Shabd (2005) sung by Sunidhi Chauhan and Vishal Dadlani and picturised on Aishwarya Rai Bachchan and Sanjay Dutt.

If you remember guys, I told some of you in my replies to your reviews that first few chapters are about setting the stage but once the story starts it will be a roller coaster ride. Well! With this chapter the topsy turvy ride has begun.

Fasten your seat belts coz every chapter has its own twists!

Next Chapter: Sasha's move and its consequences!

Thanks, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

P.S. This is my first attempt to write a kiss scene, so comment on it too!


Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my god
sheesh kya update tha
really
it had everything in it
maneet romance
arhi almost romance
aru stupidty as well
well telling her about jealousy plan well that was just stupid
i know he was drunk so it was bound to happen
but really aru what to do with you
waise maan is right dono dukhi atma ho rahe the
hadh hai
she loves him too
but just doesnt get it
who called annie man
she ruined it all
they were gonna kiss almost
but no that didnt happen all due to her
and what she is planning is even more dangerous
as in trying to kill khushi
annie sasha listen up
neither maan nor aru belong to you guys
so dont even go there
warna tumhari chatni bana dungi
of course they wont listen
well they shall pay for it of course
so maneet kissed actually kissed thanx for that
haiyye kya baat hai
so she took a pic of maneet kissing
damn this kameeni
no really
she is asking for trouble
as was geet
when she teased him so much
well he got back to her if the kiss was anything to go by
arhi and their tiff and almost kiss wow that was something
she does love you and will realise it too soon i hope
but hope she will be okay
as annie is hell bent on killing her
well dream on kameeni
ahhh loved that possessive side of aru
shiver me timbers when he is that possessive of khushi
hmmm so things have been set in motion right
let the games begin then
cheers for pm
just realised didnt say about kiss
it was magical and cant believe you put it up
and it was sensual too
why you never put it before i dont know
i read it few times to believe it was there
and not my illusion
haiyye it was just perfect for them to kiss there
and be so lost that they didnt notice anyone around them at all
good going
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry took me longer
my brother did something with desktop so took me time to get here
where are you
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

sorry took me longer
my brother did something with desktop so took me time to get here
where are you

I did a stupid thing! I forgot to upload the song for this update! So was uploading it and now the update is giving me problems, so working on that!
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Posted: 11 years ago
and there she is found her
hota hai kappa
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

and there she is found her
hota hai kappa

Meet you in VM gallery in few minutes!😃

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