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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#371

just one more para then DFL done

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: chavvi16

did you know jeevs stories are freaking confusing
she is great mystery writer
no really

Really? Mysteries like the DFL one about Soni and all? Is she that good? Then I have to start reading her stories soon! Cannot miss out on a good mystery story! I read the start of her story, the new one! The presentation put me off though! She needs a beta badly!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Really? Mysteries like the DFL one about Soni and all? Is she that good? Then I have to start reading her stories soon! Cannot miss out on a good mystery story! I read the start of her story, the new one! The presentation put me off though! She needs a beta badly!

nahin not your kind
but more like we keep guessing who is with geet
like this one story geet marries maan
but we dont know till end that it was man
that sort of mystery

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#374

i always confuse peeps it seems

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: chavvi16

nahin not your kind
but more like we keep guessing who is with geet
like this one story geet marries maan
but we dont know till end that it was man
that sort of mystery

Thats a really good idea! Like in LJ and DP, when we keep on thinking it is Maan who is gunda but he turns out to be the Jeep waala guy and Dev turns out to be gunda, remember? That was one of my best twists! Loved everyone's reaction so much!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

Thats a really good idea! Like in LJ and DP, when we keep on thinking it is Maan who is gunda but he turns out to be the Jeep waala guy and Dev turns out to be gunda, remember? That was one of my best twists! Loved everyone's reaction so much!

haan waise
but you said it was not maan soon enough
but hers was only till end
and we were like well was it maan or someone else she married
we had inkling it was maan
but werent sure 100%

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#377

30 pages in our bak bak
cool

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: chavvi16
i always confuse peeps it seems

Ah! We both are confused souls!😉 Love to get confused and make others confused! If that fairy light scene happened with us like it happened with Khushi in IPK, we will be as stuck as her among the lights! We are that confused. And unfortunately, we dont have any Arnav in our lives too to remove us out. Have to stand there and keep shouting, "HELP! Koi hai?"😆

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: chavvi16

haan waise
but you said it was not maan soon enough
but hers was only till end
and we were like well was it maan or someone else she married
we had inkling it was maan
but werent sure 100%

Interesting!

I could have dragged too but that makes readers loose interest! Infact, if I hadnt put so many MG or Ak moments in DFL, many MG readers would have abandoned it as the mystery doesnot open till Chapter 55! I still cannot believe I dragged a mystery for so long and people actually remained with me! Shocking!😲

A mystery should never drag or else people loose interest!