~GUROOR~maaneet SS pt11 last pt pg69/76 apr24 - Page 2

First of all congratulation for the new story or say one more gem in your collection


I read the bharibharakam title "Guroor" 😆
And first thought come to my mind is arrogant shewred business tycoon Maan
But here business ka hii nahi pata 😆 😆


I love sweet surprises like them
Than one more ... Maan is pratically using his younger bro salary
One more unexpected below

Than in first meeting with Geet family
They got marriaed no typical drama at all

Than I thought Maan family is going to except them like a cake walk

Than one more unexpected think when Maan mother rudely behave
Annie is so mean at all...
Dev is good but why is he so happy to know Geet is big business man daughter
Any hidden ill intentions

Than for a moment
I thought
Maan is going to lash out his all anger on Geet
😆



But nothing like this happened at all


Me waiting for more and more part soon 😳

Pleasant surprise. U r back with a story.
Congratulation.
3 updates but short.
Loving Dev. Hope he is same till end.
Superb start.

Night dress dene mein bhi Anni is reluctant?

Part 4

Both of them just sat silently, embraced in their own pool of thoughts. Then spoke up together.
wo..
she looked into his eyes sweetly letting him speak
he felt so relaxed & smiled naughtily - its our SR
she looked at him making a big O face, as he reached towards her side of the bed with that glint she could kill for.

he lovingly hugged her & placed a peck on her forehead - I am sorry, it is not exactly the way you would have wanted it all to be
she peacefully rested her head on his chest feeling contented.
A feeling that bothered them just a little while ago, the feeling of uncertainty just vanished into thin air.

He made so many promises that night.
He was proud she was his. He knew he will have to build a new world for her.
All she wanted was that will in him. That love that drove him to do that.

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Maan had kept all his promises. It took them a little longer than a year to reach to this level. & on that day he was so happy. But when he had come back home to share that news about his project's success, he heard his mom scold her again for something. They were both like pillars to each other. She had picked a job immediately at her friend's company to ease the financial crunch then. But still his mom never approved. Even didn't let them be close .. she would drop into the room in the middle of the night.

She remembered how embarrassing it was on their so called SR.. she actually just walked in brief moment after knocking on the door on the pretext of using the wash room. Geet had to hide under the spread & always feared to undress ever after in that room. Maan did get a lot frustrated trying to say it was just an isolated incident but then it kept happening to an extent that they actually never ventured into it. Sadly after that his business drove him to insanity.

Even after having this whole mansion to themselves now, alas he didn't have the time. Initially, her job kept her busy but now he didn't even want her to work any more. She laid blankly looking at the glass table, at that white line wondering whether just to take a puff & forget this pain. This pain of having everything & still nothing.

wait hated.

She paused .. no he didn't like it like that
the moment she came out.. she bumped into him.

He looked away in frustration, so did Geet.

She kind of got used to this now.

First it was her Saas & now it was this luxury.

She would give every thing to go back to that one bedroom room flat they shared with his friends. They both had so much of fun then. His business had just picked up. He was busy like hell then too but he would come back home. She chuckled. In that room he would at least doze off in her lap.

At least she could hold him in his embrace without worrying about crushing his shirt. He would give her that head spinning kiss every now & then. It was like dating all over again. Then came the business opportunities. The drive in him to get more & more & more.

Adi laughed with his signature stammer..
She looked at the mirror. Her Maan. He lovingly pulled her hair away & tied the necklace. Softly kissing her shoulder.
Happy anniversary sweetheart he kissed her softly
She thanked him
She rested her head in his chest where she always felt complete. She hugged him closer.. before she could cherish the moment, there was calls & after the calls, meetings. So many things lined up.

She plastered that smile she was used to giving him now days; very successfully faking her ache. She causally placed the diamond studded necklace in the dresser, among all the other jewels he had gifted her. She knew how important it was for him. He is been trying hard to replace that pendant they lost. Even he knows nothing of this could match its worth.

She was drawn back to the memory of sharing her pendant in a thin gold chain, the only jewel she wore when she got married to him, with Anni. The drama that followed was heart breaking. That was the first time Maan shouted at her too.

Even now she wondered why would Anni sell the pendant. To their ill luck, it came in hands of the jeweler who knew her dad. It was not just a pendant, it was her grandmom's pendant & she had given it to Geet when she was born. Geet remembered wearing it through out her life. Even now when her hand reaches to her neck to trace it, her heart wells up.

Mr handa got the best chance to rub it in on Maan's face. He met him in the office
Handa - if you needed money you should have asked
Maan was a bit taken a back
Handa - you have no rights to sell our family pendant.
I knew this is what will happen one day. From day one your eyes were on our property.
Maan clenched his fist & all that anger poured on Geet in the evening. Poor girl didn't even know what had happened.
It was pooja who told Maan that anni had worn the pendant to college today. Rest is past.

He still feels sorry for that & wants to buy her best of everything.

Originally posted by: dqno1

Night dress dene mein bhi Anni is reluctant?

Kaisi chote dil ki ladki hai?

At least they are together.

I love how they started speaking to each other together.

Lovely moment.

Aissi SR mere puchki toh kabhi nahi hoti😆

Thanks for updating,

becahar SR bhi tho complete nahi ho apaya

Originally posted by: muskanp

becahar SR bhi tho complete nahi ho apaya

imagine pucki's plight😲

it is such a shame when love is replaced by things.

It was special. Maan had told her to make all the arrangements. His company was now among the biggies. It was big, really big. She heard him speak to his mom & call them over. Geet excitedly invited her parents too.

Now she regretted it. All of it!!

Finally when it was their day of celebration, he stood with his ma, brother dev, anni. He had proudly announced it was his family that stood by him to reach these heights. Not that she wanted to defy that. She would have felt wanted had he held her in his side while saying this.

She was in some far corner attending to guests. Her parents were in one corner watching all this. She still smiled weakly plastering that fake smile she had mastered over couple of years now to show she was happy.

They say parents could see through u.. & they did.

Maan refused to speak to her parents.

Later at night she was pacing angrily to give him a piece of her mind.

Maan was excited & a bit tipsy when he walked in.
geet roared - how dare u?
Maan was a bit taken aback
geet - how dare u treat my parents like that?
Maan snapped in irritation - come on geet u know how they treated me
geet pushed him away - wat abt ur ma. didn't they treat me badly?
Maan smashed the glass night table stand - ma ke khilaf ek lafz nahi geet
she was petrified with his reaction. This is not wat she meant. All she meant was they are elders & we need them. Like he needed his ma to be part of his success today, even she needed her parents to be part of it.

She stepped back & he left the room.

And so here she was left alone again, in front of this drug!! Contemplating whether to take it & float above this misery or suffer. Frankly it did made her feel nice. Easy to put up with reality.

6 months passed & she was doomed. She remained totally high all the time. Make up was on full y to plaster that perfect look of Mrs Maan Singh Khurana.

Not that she hated ma or dev or even anni for that matter but their presence now in the house irritated her. it felt like there was no place where she could be at peace.

Maan was too proud to let go & she didn't know wat more she was supposed to give in. for a couple of weeks he was traveling. That made it worse for her. It was like all of a sudden she was trapped with sorrow.

She couldn't face her parents after what happened that night. Her mom tried to check on her daughter but geet couldn't get herself to talk to her. Unwillingly & now miserably she had become an addict.

As days passed a new drama of Pooja running the house & wanting the house key became important. Geet had no clue what was happening.
Maan snapped yet again - if ma wants the keys, just give it to her. How long will u hold grudges?
Geet smiled at his words & gave the keys to mama.

It took a moment for Maan to read those eyes. They looked blank, void of any emotions. Not even tears, forget anger.

Later at night she came & coolly changed into her night dress. She desperately needed her drugs to keep her head straight. She sneaked back into the wash room avoiding his questioning eyes & sat on the commode. She all the while knew wat she was doing is wrong. But she had crossed that line of sanity long back. It was not her will any more. She needed it in her system more than she needed to breath.

Reality that she left every thing for this one person.. & he has no time for her. He doesn't respect her parents. He has become more proud of himself than he was. She just couldn't relate to him any more. The more she thought about it the more pathetic she felt about herself.

Maan was not born in a very high class family, so it was normal for him have the drive to reach higher the moment he reaches new heights. The more projects he got; he immediately wanted to achieve the next level. He already had too much on his plate & he had her by his side. She took care of his parties his social circle his friends..

When she descended down the steps wearing those expensive jewels, exclusive collections.. his heart swelled in pride. Yes she was his, only his. She had become his pride. He would adore her with all his wealth still felt it wouldn't meet her beauty, her charm. Truly she was his guroor. Then his eyes scanned the incompleteness... that void in those hazels. Then a call would come and he was distracted.

He was proud, proud of his achievement & didn't shy out of his responsibilities amidst of all this he forgot a simple thing, happiness. Not just his .. hers too. It all became materialistic. It all started with missing simple dinners to missing out on a phone call. He replaced it all with heavy gifts.

thanks a lot

BIG THANKU TO DARLING AVI FOR PROOF READING😳

LOVE

muskan

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PART 6

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She has completely given up