~GUROOR~maaneet SS pt11 last pt pg69/76 apr24

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

congrats for new story muskaan
like the way dev stands by maan
then maan meeting her parents to getting married her
was all done by maan and she just followed him
wonder why maan's mother was mad on her😕😕
like typical sasuma and they could not even had their sR
five years had passed the distance between them has increased sooo much and maan does not even know it

he is sooo proud of her and then why he did not said it😭😭😭
omggg muskaan u r making me to say sooo much to maan as i never like to write against maan but what to do😕😕😕
it seems like he just has nasha of his success and he forget every thing about his love and how to cherrish his love

I hope he realizes soon before it's too late
and geet she started drugs and gave up without even fighting it
how come she is that weak
sooo far it seems like mr handa was right and maan is not rt person for geet😭😭😭😭

pls muskaan sort is out soon just can't see maan as bad figure and not able to even see her sadness

their not being one does not bother him at all and i know family is important and he gave all credit to his family and what about her who left every thing for him
and even did work to support him😭😭😭

waiting for next part muskaan

loving this back to back updates.
pls update puchki tooo naa😉😉

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fict

@fict

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

loving these back to back updates. 👏 Geet is almost at her breaking point, i think. something has to give. waiting to see what happens next.

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Krupa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

what u show is reality of life this is what happens when people forgets to keep balance between their work and relationship no one is supermen on this earth to get one thing u have to loose other, but i did not like geet becoming so weak she has to live him to show her place in his life then only he will understand her pain being lonely.update soon.

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Isolophiliac

@Isolophiliac00

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

this is just so heartbreaking!!!

Poor geet..leaving her whole family, who loved her..and getting nothing in return for all the sacrifices she did for this one person..

and maan can't hear anything about his mother..and other side he is disrespecting her parents..

poor geet..just can't imagine how she survived for 5 long years in this environment with nothing to hold on..just can't blame her for what she is doing to herself..

hope maan gets back to his senses before its seriously too late...

thanks for updating so much within a day..

waiting for more..eagerly😆

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sangeeta chauhan

@sangeeta33

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Awesome geet is from rich family and maan in middle class mohinder just concern for her daughter live in luxurious life geet left her family and maaneet got married aww maans mom to angry with him even shes right in her place dev is sweet supportive brother geet only wants love omg 4 and 5 part feeling bad for geet she left everything behind only for her love and what she getting only materialistic things loneliness i hate maan m never thought i got chance to comment in ur story but i got di u are just supperb and first ff i had read in gf is urs dhundhlae aks thank u so much

Edited by sangeeta33 - 11 years ago

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rs12345

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Congrats on the new story

poor geet she don't have any one to share here sorrow .she can't go to her mother's house in maan house no one is there to see her and maan has no time for his beloved wife.she is simple became trophy wife for maan.

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zeeenu

@zeeenu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Oo My GOD...is it really u di or i m in some wonderland?

5 back to back updates makes my day

Thanks for this new ss

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zeeenu

@zeeenu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Well after reading all 5 parts i really dont know what to say

I m kind of speechless the way u trying to describe this issue is commendable.after reading i m forced to think what is money ,power ,pride and what power does it possess that it breaks strongest of relation and sweetest of bonding and the best part is we never realize .

Maan is so involve in his work that he never realize what his indifference does to geet poor soul had to take drugs in order to forget her pain feel so sorry for her

thanks for updating di

Love u

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samidsamid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

awsm cncept...i jus loved it
di...things getting 2 complicated...
.maan is nt undrstanding situaattion
of Geet...aww poor Geet feeling bad 4
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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

PART 6

Nowadays Adi had began to call & inform her Maan's schedule. Like she cared any more.

As time passed there was some one who noticed the sadness in those eyes. That longing. It was strange he actually did & geet felt embarrassed. She tried her best to hide it. It had become more than often she caught him look at her & read those hazels.

If that was not enough her saas had began to question her expenses.
Well the only expenses she made was to buy her pills & they cost her a lot & that kind of figure no one noticed until now. Her expenses were never questioned.

Maan was getting late for his trip when pooja stopped him to discuss the finances.
Geet looked at them dazed. She had taken that extra shot to handle the situation.
Pooja - I can't just understand. what is her expense?
itni bhi kya kharchen hain iss ke?

Geet openly ogled Maan
she doesn't even remember when she got to watch him like this, so close for so long. She sighed & continued staring, not even hearing a word of what her saas was scolding her.

Was it the effect of her drugs that she had become so bold & shameless in her own terms.

Suddenly she felt Maan's lips moving with no volume. She smiled & looked at him cutely
Maan questioned again, irritated - tum ma ko bata do na kya expenses hain
she cutely nodded like an innocent kid

at that moment he just wanted to carry her to their room & have her, until she screamed his name.
Like she understood.. she blushed - phir karhten kyun nahi?
she pouted ever so cutely. He leaned closer to kiss her lips, but was conscious with his mom & every one around.

Pooja began with her non stop ranting on how shameless Geet had become.
Geet only smiled .. the fake smile that drew off the twinkle that was just there a second before. Maan felt like he was suddenly hit by a rock wall.

Geet didn't bother to stand & hear the non stop ranting. She just picked her expensive hand bag on the way to the exit.

Pooja lost it completely & yelled at Maan.

He stood there shocked himself. Then felt something was drastically wrong & followed geet in quick long steps. He stopped her with questions.

She did realize, this time her timing of the smile was wrong.
All she could say was - kya mera haaq nahi aapke paisen pe?
Maan scanned her eyes worried - nahi jaan I didn't mean that
lekin
geet snapped at once - lekin kya Maan?
Aab mujhe aapne ek ek expenses ka hisaab dena padega
yeh lo.. she opened her purse & threw all her credit cards and change at him.

She ditched the idea of going out & ran straight back into her room. Her head was spinning. The extra dose began to hit her hard. She held her head & just collapsed in the wash room. It was late in the evening or next day she had no clue.
She got up hearing lot of commotion outside.

She held her head & got up. She washed her face.. damn she looked horrible. Dark circles around her red swollen eyes. She immediately applied a lot more make up.

Dev immediately turned off the tv as he saw her coming down the steps. Geet looked at them trying to look composed. She was confused if she had something on her face. She pulled out the little mirror in her purse & checked herself.
Ok, she looked fine. Then looked down at her dress. She did look a lot thinner. Umm.

Probably she needed a wardrobe change. She called Adi & told him to order her next size lower.
He murmured - mam u have come down by 3 size, if I am not wrong.
Geet didn't even hear that. She changed herself into a figure hugging dress. Checked her make up again.

Her appetite had gone for a toss. She never had a meal at home after pooja had come to the mansion. She attended parties like crazy. At the max, she nibbled something here & there.

She checked her schedule & stepped out. Dev tried to stop her. Before she understood anything, the whole media pounced on her. She was nervous. She hoped no one knew her little secret.

thanks a lot for sweeties for comments & likes

BIG THANKS TO AVI SWEETY FOR PROOFING😳

love

muskan

NEXT PART 7

Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago