Wired Hearts (4) Ch:34, Thread:5 (June 26)

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Anny90

@Anny90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#521

Great update!!

you write in such a way that it touch to the heart..

there is so much pain they both have..

" when you put your head on the pillow at the end of the day, you feel a sense of fulfillment instead of incompleteness. If you have really wanted something and failed to get it, be sure that life has much better in store for you. Maybe not what you desire but what you deserve. Until you get what you deserve, don't miss out on the little pleasures life bestows on you."

this are one of the best lines in todays update..

her reason to leave him is not so strong to believe foe ayush..

ouch..the last line hurts..

" I was an outsider for him now."

apart from this update is full of happy moments with anaya ayush and their twins..

Thanks for the update..update soon..

it is fixed that you update only twice or thrice in month? please if possible give one update in a week..the story is going on such way so that waiting long is difficult..

Edited by anant90 - 11 years ago

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mayyo

@mayyo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: dqno1
thap thap thap😃

😲

I didn't even catch my breath yet after today's update!

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#523

Originally posted by: mayyo

😲

I didn't even catch my breath yet after today's update!

😲

Toh!

Main kya karu?

jaldi karo

ab se satavugi toh ek hafte baad milega

warna next update will be when I am gone..

😲

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mayyo

@mayyo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: dqno1

😲

Toh!

Main kya karu?

:P

jaldi karo

ab se satavugi toh ek hafte baad milega

warna next update will be when I am gone..
😲

Hmm... I will start working on it after tomorrow. Ab khush? 😃

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#525

😲

Mayyooo... do u have an ounce of idea what u have just did?? a while ago??

http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x1x9y8g_zaroorat-full-audio-song-ek-villain-mithoon-mustafa-zahid_music

"jab tak hum kisiki humdard nahin bante.. tab tak..hum dard se aur dard hum se juda nahi hota "

http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x1x9y7b_galliyan-unplugged-by-shraddha-kapoor-ek-villain-ankit-tiwari_music

No words.. all i could do is.. 🤗 i couldnt control my excitement..want to peep into maan's pain?? it would be better if i call it as the other side of the pain apart from mine..

My thoughts are all over the place again... u do that to me everytime.. u have to get used to it.. *smirk* *raised an eyebrow*

let me gather all my wits.. and read all the parts..

when i see her cry... it just makes me feel terrible.. i go into defensive mood .. its not sin.. but yess.. she WRONGED him... she accepts it.. and his pain .. its not deserved...

"Im Here. I love you. I dont care. If u need to stay up crying all night long, I will stay with you.There's nothing you can ever do to loose My Love!!!"

when ever i feel i have done something wrong.. and feel guilty.. i just read this message... this makes me feel better..

all we need is trust.. faith and that one person.. 😳

*sigh* ill just get on now.. il leave it to mishti avi ..nisha ji.. and Doc Onir 😃

those two songs.. one for you .. and other for... my anomaly..😃

My geet is a shooting star!!

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz
😲

"jab tak hum kisiki humdard nahin bante.. tab tak..hum dard se aur dard hum se juda nahi hota "

"Im Here. I love you. I dont care. If u need to stay up crying all night long, I will stay with you.There's nothing you can ever do to loose My Love!!!"

Hope both these lines are meant for Maan from Geet, Kittu.

Am hurting after this update..😭

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saf24

@saf24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#527

Awesome update. All the changes in Maan finally dawns on Geet making her question and try to find the reasons for such a drastic change in him. It leads her to a talk with Ayush where she realises her mistake from so many years ago has influenced the way Maan is today, finally making her realise that to him she is an outsider just by the way he treats people who he considers to be outsiders. That is a hard blow for her to take but i'm glad she finally broke down and let someone in. Fab job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#528

Ayush love for chocolate reminds me of my addiction to it.

Feel bad for Geet. Now she has to shoulder the guilt of changing Maan though it was not what she meant. The feeling of being a outsider for him is going to be hard for her.

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#529

grt updt..many answers got..vry painful n heavy period tht was rly..rly needed to come out frm tht...lvd th quotations abt life..last line of geet..thinking

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#530

part 31 - half truth out...he was so much affected by her refusal that he fell ill for one weak and even after geeting alright could not come back to his old self...he had really suffered so much...how he behaved with his close ones and how he behaved with outsiders...and now she could guess her behaviour with her and with jess too...

where her stupid decision brought them ...she is now so much guilt ..eager to what will she do to bring him back...will she confess her love to him...i am sure he will not trust her easily this time...

what about geet's suffering that time...she also had undergone much pain ...she also chnaged a lot...will he understand her point..?

very perfect title for this update

cont soon