Wired Hearts (4) Ch:34, Thread:5 (June 26) - Page 36

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Luvforever

Haaye yeh geet ke saath kya horaha hai... One tym all is fine another moment its awkward & den mysterious maan is back... He is doing it deliberately to remind her dat things hv changed wid tym so is he... & yet u managed to keep our brain working wid Ab aage kya hoga... Well poor vyan is too jealous wid maan already jb maaneet r so distant toh aage kya hoga... Well cnt wait to read more Di...



Doing that is probably his need of the moment. She needs the quickly changing moods too, so she can be pushed out of her shell, though it will still not be as easy.
Oh, do give Vyan a little more credit. A little bit of jealousy is not enough to discourage a man. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

nice update

but confuse due to maan
waiting


Thank you!
Maan is confusing, indeed!
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Posted: 11 years ago
missed th last chapter...now read it...geet is rght..maan is alws one step ahead of his age of boys...may more than one...does he drink regularly...y he was so hurried...y nw vyan is more thna maan ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: divya22

Lovely part...

Geets mind is occupied by maan n soon her heart too will be occupied by him...
Asking for drinks..he surely knows how to gain her attention...
vyan is a sweet guy..bt no one can repkace my maan..
Again ARK..
I feel dat d MD is none other dan maan...
N ARK can beAmeerah Ranbir Khurana.. i think so...


Thank you!
Oh yes, there can be no second Maan! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

he purposely ask for drinks to her, i guess but for what i don't have any idea😃

awesome update


For what? For giving her one sleepless night. 😆

Thank you!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

Talli hai yeh zameen
Talli hai aasMAAN
Sab talli hai yahaan
Yaa phir saara jahaan, vaise ka vaisa hai
Hum talli hai yahaan

Abhi toh yahan pe talli honay ki baat hui bhi nahin aur nasha pehle chadh gaya! 😆

Actually I really want to see Geet Talli, just once. Will she loosen up a bit, shed some of her inhibitions I wonder😆

You know what Geet reminds me of?
The Mimosa Pudica or rather the touch me not plant. You barely touche it and it just shuts on itself. Yep that's exactly her. Let's see how he opens her up. So far his shock tactics seem to be working just fine.😉

The idea of getting her talli is quite an interesting one. I had already thought about it and tried to work through it but I'm not quite sure how a talli mind works. If I do manage to write the scene somehow, you're sure to get this wish fulfilled. 😃
I just can't get over the whiskey part. He just zapped her with that one. He totally hit her funny bone with that one. You know the painfully hot sensation you get when you hit it, exactly like that😆


i can guess you're unable to get over the whiskey part. 😆
He had to be two steps ahead of her for obvious purposes, and you never know how many times he zap her in the future. 😉


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

First and foremost Thanks a lot for the happywala sequel!

It better be a happywala 😕 😳
It is happywala, pakka! 😃
And sincere apologies for all the delay
Kaan pakding
Phir wohi baat!

So finally Geet is back!
The whole new sexy Geet wonder how would Our MSK be😳
Truly time changes it all
MSK would be MSK. 😳
Oh my God! Raya is married😲
She will be joining Geet soon with her hubby and Geet all set to start a new life 😊
Yup! Raya is a married woman now.
Geet missing her friends it been so long she hasn't heard from them
Truly some memories make u smile and also moisten ur eye!
I agree!
Geet being alone from a year gives me a feeling that there something related to her parents
R&R are coming

G met Anaya and fixed up their meeting
Geet is really nervous, a kind of awkward feeling to face her after so long
But I'm sure Anaya won't let it be formal
Finally all her broken bonds mending!
Indeed, her broken bonds are mending!😃
Geet's first day to office in a bus?
Her reaction on buying a car hints there is more to it maybe her parents😕
So Geet is all set!
And Vyan
Vyan ke liye almost sab ka reaction aisa hi tha. 😆
Loved Geet-Anaya meeting 😊 Like I said there is no formality in friendship, distance doesn't matter its the emotions that bind us!
😃
I totally agree!
Geet breaks down in Anaya's arms, all her pent up emotions find its release😒
Ayush-Anaya's story was so painful, truly sometimes circumstances force u to take up drastic steps and later u regret it😒
Oh my God! Anaya-Ayush are parents now😲😆😉
Twins😃😳
Loved their names and their connection to Anaya n Ayush😊
That's life, is it not? We fight with family for our loved ones, we makes mistakes in thr spur of the moment, but we do realise them too.
Glad you liked the names. 😃
Oh! Her parents are no more and she confided in Anaya
I'm happy now she will feel a lighter and relieved!
Geet is getting back in her circle😊
Sometimes, only confiding in a friend does not lessen the burden...
Loved the moments Geet spend at Anaya's
meeting the kids and best Ayush-Geet convo😊

The past was truly painful U made me cry so much😭
Geet state was so heart wrenching then and even now 🥺
So thats why she hates the idea of driving
Her guilt stricken being is still not willing to...
Hoping her choti n Maan can bring her back to life
Her wounds and her low confidence in herself, her self-loathing can only be overcome if she is constantly loved and cared for, surrounded by a family of her own... Only family can remove one's guilt related to family. You get what I mean?
But where is Maan?
😒
Somewhere in the shadows, waiting for his cue. 😳




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

R&R coming😊

Geet wants them to stay with her but
This Vyan is flirting with Geet😡
Abhi toh usne itna thoda sa chance maara hai and you are all ready with the red faces?! 😆
Geet at the airport and Maan enters!!!!!!
Geet's convo with the baby was so cute and she was with Maan but I refuse to believe he is married
Goodness! Such certainty! 😆
Geet ventures down in the lanes of her past with Maan
Just a glimpse of him today has made such an impact on her
She practically studied his appearance in those few seconds😳
A part of her does regret not giving them a chance and then her Mom's words added up to it
She definitely regrets to an extent because she knew what a precious person she had refused to, without even trying once.
Geet's going to meet Maan's mom
I'm happy she is mingling with all her dear people
But can't wait for Maaneet meeting😳
I guess everybody was waiting for Maaneet meeting, and almost ready to strangle me for every chapter which went by without it. 😆
Geet meets the Khurana women
Loved their emotion reuninon
A peek in Raya's lovestory too😊
So that was Zara's baby Ameerah at the airport with her chachu😉
Kitty party at KM😎
Maan☺️
Ye sirf Maan ke khayal se blush aa raha hai?😆
Awesome updates Maari
Thanks so much
Will continue later
😃
Thanks, Heytal! I am so glad to have you here! 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 29 - geet was affected by his charm that she was so disturbed that she could not sleep well...

loved vyan again...he is so cute and entertaining all the time...no body could get bored with his company...
so the mystery behind ARK is over...its co in the name of ameerah where maan is md...
so they are preparing hard for the presentation...it will be interesting seeing geet & maan face to face professionally first time...
cont soon


How is the mystery over yet? Nothing has been said about the name of the company or the MD so far...
I am glad you are liking Vyan. 😊
Edited by mayyo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

Geet settling in the city

Geet sort of bumping into Maan
and Maan seen with a different girl each time😉
Vyan trying his luck😕
You're happy that Maan is seen with a different girl everytime? 😲
Geet at KM and finally the suspense ends on Maan's marriage😆
Ameerah is Zara-Ranbir's daughter
And Maan flirting with women
And now I see you are not. 😆
Don't worry. Wo jitni flirting karna chaahta hai ussay karne do. At the end, his fate is written. 😉
Maaneet meet atlast
I'm happy somewhere that Maan did taunt her indirectly
I'm sorry for being harsh but I still can't forgive Geet for what she did with Maan
And I so want her to apologize to him in future
She did have her reasons but still she wasn't ignorant to those feelings which both felt for each other😡
There are so many people who are unable to fogrvie Geet, even though they know the reasons why she stepped away. Her apology to him is due, and he has all rights of giving her the hardest of times in accepting it. 😃

Maan comes to Geet's home
The tension diffusing due Maan cool behavior
Where are they heading😕
Towards an impasse, after which they will have to burst out and let the cool go...
Does ARK stand for Ameerah Ranbir Khurana😕
Why do I feel Smith is just an employee n that Co belongs to Maan😳
If yes than smart move 👍🏼 😎
Read on to know more.
And now all are off on holiday😊
Bechara Vyan plan backfire ho gaya😆
Not really. 😆
Maari 😡 😡 😡
Keep that Vyan away from Geet😒
Iss baar no gadbad
Now Shasha too joins 🥱Wow!!!!!!
Sasha came and went. She is not the one Geet will need ro be wary of. As for Vyan...umm...let's see.
Loved the foursome playing basketball
A trip down in their past😳
Enjoying and remembering their times together😃
A priceless past!
Geet goes to the ball with Vyan and Shasha with Maan 🤢
Geet is really coming out her shell now
Bimbo! was the best😆
She will need to come out of her shell if she wants to set things straight. Though, this shell is faaar different from the shell that only one person can break.
Geet is sort of relating Vyan with Maan back in college days
No matter how much they pretend they are affected by each other till day!
Oh, surely! Affected they are!
Loved the Maaneet moment at the deck😳
They are easing up in each others presence
Finally their holiday ended on a happy note!
😃
Easing up, or just trying to lay the act too thick...?
Geet goes to KM yet again
and Maan at his flirty best😎
Bechari Geet boori phasi😳
Long drive plus ice cream and Maaneet😎
Phas tou ussay tha hi. 😉
Whats on Maan's mind
Can we get his POV also!!!!!!!
Geet going to the MD of ARK...interesting
Now she is off to Raya's house for dinner
This story is planned from Geet's POV ro keep Maan a mystery, but it sure will unravel slowly but steadily. 😊
You know I'm getting a naughty idea what if Maan bumps into Geet and takes her out
Imagine Raya's reaction😆😉
Par tu aisa kuch nahi karegi😭
Your last line says it all. 😆
Tu bhi Aash ki tarah bailgaadi chala rahi hain
Kuch toh dhakka maar Maaneet ki gaadi ko
Mere ko thoda passion or romance chahiye🥺

Sab mujhe bhool gaye hain
meri wishes ki toh koi value hi nahi rahe
😭
Passion aur romance, dono hi milenge. 😉
And I guess you are not aware, I am entertaining a wish list this time. Agar koi aisa scene hai jo story mein chaahti ho toh all you need to do is tell me. 😃
Thanks Maari for all the superb updates
Truly sorry for all the delay
And please bear with my not so detailed comments
Will try to be regular hence forth but condition apply!!!!!
Refer to the bold red request
😉
Strictly no more sorries!
And refer to the reply for your bolded comment. 😉
Love u
🤗
Love you too! 🤗

Edited by mayyo - 11 years ago

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