Unavoidable Destiney SS last part and epi page 43 - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago
I remember when u said u were sleepy when u said YES to jeeju..
i was laughing out loud the whole tym.. and when u described this scene i couldn't control it..
U drooled.. aww!! how much i want to see that face of urs..
Enjoying ur story a lot... But precap is ??
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

bichare jiju tumne unhe kitne shock diye

jab tumne bola that u r in love jiju ko unki life ka sabse bada shock laga😆😆 😆But meine jhoot toh nahi bhola I was in love with Taylor's voice😆
ooo so Mr and Mrs Preece have same zodiac sign but jiju jas so much patience and u tumhe toh uska meaning bhi nahi pata, iss liye tumne apne parents ka surprise ko bhi surprise nahi rehne diya butjiju loved u so much, nd thats why he brought guitar as ur gift but u idiot unka poora surprise kharab kar diya but jiju bhi kam nahi the unhone bhi tumhe Taylor Swift ka collection bhi diya, Dehk thx to this habbit me got two gift long loive impatient Mel😆
Waise ek tarak se accha hi hua tumhari tabiyat kharab hui kam se kam tumhe kuch kuch feel hona toh chalu hua, oo jiju got angry on u for being careless and u got scared seeing his anger I never saw him like that nah I was like issi gussa bhi aatha hain😆
haayee tumne mazak me bola that guy should ask ur hand from ur parents and jiju really came next day to ask ur hand ab toh jiju bhi intezaar karte karte thak gaye the but tumhare andar akal hi nahi aayi thi 😲dehk tuhne lawyer ko be akal bhola😲not done😆
last past we tumne mujhe pehle hi bataya but wapas read kane me bohot mazza, jiju really loves and cares for u a lot iss liye to tumhara haath mangne uncle aunty ke paas agle din hi aa gaye the and tum kumbkaran ki behan neend me hi ha bol diya, yaar tumhari shaadi ki baat chal rahi thi aur tumhe neend ki padi thi but still he personally confirmed from u that u r really happy or not Kumbkaran koun hain😕😆Haan woh toh hain
Precap
Haayee first date nd u were J nd painful past agar iss me uss kamini ka haath hai na toh hum dono mil kar uska khoon karenge aur ek dusre ke lawyer banake ek dusre ko bachayenge😆😆 Nahiii it's nothing like that nothing to do with Sam she did nothiong I just call her sam cause I don't like her but she didn't do anything except drooling😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

I remember when u said u were sleepy when u said YES to jeeju..
i was laughing out loud the whole tym.. and when u described this scene i couldn't control it..
U drooled.. aww!! how much i want to see that face of urs..
Enjoying ur story a lot... But precap is ??

😆Yeah only me can do that neendh mein saying yes😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maaneet say eachother about their felling lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
so cute
geet is cribbing maan about whats planned for her bday
maans gifts she is too happy
she is slowly falling in love
n when maan asked she said her love should ask her hands n maan did it
she said s in sleep
i really loved their msgs..
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww ... so cute and lovely !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
splendid update! Love their cute fights! Geet falling 4 him! update soon! superbly written
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Part 4
First Date
A nervous Geet kept walking ice bearing in her room wondering what to wear. OMG Maan asked her out on a date. Okay he is just your bestie she told herself chill relax where something simple. After getting ready she went to his place. Nervously she rang his bell. Maan opened the door.
''Come in Geet.''
''Hey Maan.''
''Geet you Always wanted to listen to my songs right.''
''Yup.''
He grabbed her hand and lead her to the studio.Geet smiled.
''So that's why you called me and your parents place.''
Maan nodded he made her sit. He took out his guitar and played some of his self written songs. The best part he let her read her song book.
''Damn Maan your really good.''
''Thx.''
After that the went back to the kitchen Maan had made sushi. After eating the yummy food Maan gave Geet a gift. It was a Furby. Once home that stupid thing made her life a living hell from singing to screaming he is evil and hates her and the next monent he loves her😡To top it all that stupid thing doesn't have a off button a annoyed Geet texted Maan.
Geet:
Your gift is scaring me.
Maan:
I know😆it must remind you of chucky. I remember how scared you where of him, isn't he a dream boy😆
Geet:
😡YOU
Maan:
Yes Geet me😆
Geet:
You gift your gf a Furby to scare her
Maan:
Yes😆as I didn't want the gift to get scared from her😆
Geet:
I HATE YOU
Maan:
You know that isn't true
Geet:
😡😡😡
Maan:
😆❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Geet:
Keep your hearts
Maan:
Nah I rather only keep your heart😉
Geet:
Don't flirt with me after gifting me this scary thing
Maan:
😲do you want me to flirt with someone else then😆
Geet:
Yes flirt with chukcy as you seem to love it a lot😡
Maan:
But he is already in a reationship with his bride and I won't like coming between them😉
Geet:
😡😭
Maan:
Why are you scared of Furby
Geet:
It's screaming it hates me and that it's evil and the next moment it loves me
Maan:
Poor thing is confused just like you😛😆
Geet:
Maan:
Hey smile okay make it listen to songs it will help
A while later
Geet:
😆Maan it fell from the table dancing to we are never ever😆
Maan:
😃Happy now
Geet:
Yup😃
Maan:
Thank GOD
Geet:
😆
Mangni
After the rings where exchanged Geet was standing with some of her friends chatting away, when Maan walked over to her and forwarded his hand.
"May I have this dance.''
Geet smiled and took his hand. He leaded her to the dance floor. They started dancing geet wasn't comfy at all maan noticed.
"'If you aren't it's okay you don't have to dance.''
''No Maan I am okay.''
''Btw Geet did you hear the song that is playing.''
Geet smiled.
''So all you have seen since the last 18 hours are my green eyes huh.''
He winked
''Maan that's Taylor singing not me.''
Geet giggled. She started to get more and more comfy dancing with him.
''But weren't you loving this song away to much lately.''
''Maan do you have freakles.''
''No.''
''So keep quit.''
''Just admitt it.''
Geet simply smiled.
''Geet let's sneak out and go to the terrace.''
''Maan no way we will be in trouble if mom dad find out''
''Geet no-one will even notice us gone.''
''Maan I am not ready to take the risk, why do you wanna go to the terrace anyway.''
''I wanna give you a gift when we are alone.''
''Maan you have lost it, this ain't a movie.''
''Geet come one I really wanna give it to you, come with me.''
''Maan does the gift talk.''
He laughed.
''No will you come now.''
Just then Raj Khuarana walked towards Maan and told him the hall was closing time to go to home.
''Cool I will drop Geet home.''
''I don't know beta it's already late.''
''It's okay uncle anyway she will be in safe hands.''
Maan winked. Just then Raj jumped into the convo.
''Maan what's your problem you where the whole night with her nah so let her go home with her parents.
A smirk was playing on Raj lips, while he winked at Geet. Geet did her best not to burst into a laughter. Maan glared at his dad. So thanks to Raj Maan's plan flopped😆. The next day Maan texted Geet.
Maan:
How let will you be free from uni I will pick you up.
Geet:
Maan I didn't go to uni today. Maan I am alone home if you want to come you can
Maan:
Okay I am coming
After a while the bell rang. Geet opened the door.
''Gift.''
Maan smiled and gave it to her.It was a heart shaped bracelet😳.
''Won't you make me wear it.''
Maan nodded and make her wear it, he was about to hug her when a giggling Geet took two steps back.
''Sorry asian side.''
Maan rolled his eyes, while Geet laughed louder.
A couple of days latter Maan had declared he was going to Austrialia for work. Geet came to his place to help him with packing. The day he had to leave Geet would drop him to the airport as his parents had to work. His home was a mess.
''OMG Maan what the hell have you done to your place.''
Said Geet cleaning his mess up.Maan was just smiling looking at Geet cleaning the whole place up. The bell rang and Sam came to say bye to Maan. To Geet's annoyence she was standing their drooling over Maan. Geet Always had a feeling she loved him and today the way she kept staring at him just annoyed her to bits. Anyway ignoring a drooling Sam Geet tried to concerate on cleaning Maan's mess, when Sam said the following lines.
''You know Maan I can't believe you two are dating.''
That was it Geet had it with this girl.
''Why Sam didn't you know that Maan loved me since I am 16.''
Shock was clear on Sam's face, while Maan turned arround to hide his laugh. Anyway Sam ignored that.
''Maan I will miss you.''
Maan smiled.
''Sam we need to go now let's go Geet. Bye Sam.''
''Bye Maan won't you give me a goodbye hug.''
''Sam I never hugged you so why start now.''
Laughing he walked out. Geet loved the expression on Sam's face.In the car Maan looked at Geet.
''Geet you look cute when you are jealous.''
He started laughing, Geet glared at him.
''Geet if you want I will keep a distance from her.''
Geet smiled.
''No Maan I trust you.''
''So why where you that annoyed.''
Maan giggled.
''I just hated the way she drooled over you.''
Maan laughed.
''Your enjoying this aren't ya.''
''It reminds me of the time you wanted to hook me up with her.''
Geet smiled.
''I wasn't in love then.''
Maan smiled.
''So are you know.''
''Yes didn't you know I love chucky.''
Maan laughed more.
''Oh GOD chucky how can we ever forget him.
Precap: a painfull period of my past

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