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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely to read... Baby Geet got a baby as well 😉
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So Geet is a teacher nd has a baby girl Mahi . Maan falls in love with Geet but does not know anything about her

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#9900ff">any possibility of an update??? </font>


yup..today evening..I am updating..
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Originally posted by: ajenn

lovely to read... Baby Geet got a baby as well😉


thanks dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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~ DIL NE JISE APNA KAHA ~

~ PART - 7 ~

This part is specially for Chetna ( khwaishfan ) and dedicated to Vani di ( svani ) as it was her wedding anniversry on 5th dec..


Its been a month and Maan would intentionally ask his driver to take car from the front of Geet's school just to get her one glimpse or whenever he will see her walking he will give her lift while talking to her and they started sharing about their life . He has told about his family to her but Geet couldn't found any chance to told him about mahi though she has told him about her being orphan . Maan really felt bad to hear this and he assured her that he will be always there for her at time of any difficulty and somewhere he has determined to make her his very soon . They shared each and everything happening in their life . Their friendship became more stronger due to construction work going in Geet's school bcoz of which Maan had to come frequently and that made him beam in happiness . He always drool over Geet whenever he saw her playing with children in playground . She used to look so cute and childish with them that Maan couldn't stop himself from niharofying her . Even Geet's class students got familiar with him due to his meeting with Geet . All the kids had gone fully gaga on him and instead of Geet they used to play with him more and Maan also loved playing with them . Observing Maan's softness towards children Geet started feeling for him and not only bcoz of this but also his way of talking to her and his care for her . She is not that much innocent that she doesn't understand his feelings for her . She has many times seen him drooling over her and now she too has started feeling something for him bcoz of spending lot of time with him at school . She was actually getting addicted to him . Whenever Maan couldn't make it toher school she gets restless very easily . Actually not only Geet but both Maaneet cannot live without each other..

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Geet came out in playground with children trailing behind her . She handed balls to them and started playing with them . When one boy kicked ball a little away . She told them that she will get it . She picked up ball and looked above only to find Maan giving instrutions to his employees at construction site..

Dil ne jise apna kaha

Dil ne jise apna kaha

Bekhabar woh hain wahan

Jaane pal zameen asmaan

Dil ne jise apna kaha

Dil ne jise apna kaha

Bekhabar woh hain wahan

Jaane pal zameen asmaan..

She looked at him smilingly clutching ball tight to her chest sharply noticing his actions . She continued staring at him without blinking her eyes but her drooling session broked by the boy who come there to have his ball . She tapped her head shyly..

Mile nazar unse par behaya tanha

Baaton mein bhi keh na saake

Dil ki baat yeh zaban

Ab hai hulchul , pal pal pe pal Dhoonde hai unko dil

Ke chal zara unke hi manzil Bole raaze dil par

Ab woh hain kahan

Dil ne jise apna kaha..

Geet was coming downstairs with register in her hands . She stopped at window when she saw Maan outside . She very gently caressed the window as if caressing his face with her lips curved in a angelic smile . She was slowly forwarding her head towards window and suddenly hit her head . With a pouting face , rubbed her head and then with light steps walked downstairs grinning..

Khlie khilli hain kaise hain raat

Milke ke woh chand se

Door hai hum milke bhi

Dekhenge aapsi

Tim tim jaage aakhon ke taare Unki hi raho mein

Ke yunhi kab unke bhi dil mein jaage mohabbat

aaye woh yahan

Dil ne jise..

After having their dinner , Geet and Mahi were dancing on Mahi's demand . Mahi was dancing so cutely making Geet laugh at her . Mahi pouted at her and she instantly ruffled her laughter giving Mahi a cute smile . Both again started dancing and after sometime Mahi told Geet to change music..

Shaam-o-sahar charoon peher Dhooda tujhe har disha

Haan magar haar kar aa gayi yeh nigaah

Tadpe hain dil mera

Ki tera bina pyaar wafa kya mera yahan

kya Apna luta jahan

Dil ne jise apna kaha

Kgo gaya woh kaha

Geet was going to change music when she saw Maan appearing from behind the curtains in a black see through shirt with black pants looking dashing . He took slow steps towards Geet staring her with loved filled eyes . He clutched her arms tightly and jerked her towards himself making her fall on his chest . As a reflex Geet fisted his shirt . He entwined their hands and very softly twirled her and then both danced passionately in syn . Suddenly Geet came out of her imagination when she heard Mahi calling her . Then she realised that it was just her imagination.. " Geet..jhalli u have lost it completely..u are imagining about Maan " thought Geet picking up Mahi in her arms walking towards bed . But today Geet was totally lost in Maan..


Precap - Teaser

Thanks for all the likes and comments 😳
Edited by Preeti_Maaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
loved the song
I love that geet is having feelings for him but she should tell him about mahi too
he will understand her
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb upate simran 👍🏼
maan is findng chances 2 meet geet nd bth bexame gd frnds nd shard most of d things wit each other 😃
geet is lost in maan nd imaginng him everywhere 😉
waitng 4 d nxt part update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
maaneet getting closer.geet dreaming of their romance.loved dil ne jise as bgm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely part..
so maaneet had become friends and geet falling for him..

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