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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update. Wow Maan is saved by Brij, who is actually Ranveer. Geet praying for Maan and ready to give her life up Maan is not saved. Geet spoke to Maan and said warrior in his ears. Now she knows the truth, so is Maan going to tell her about his past.
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Posted: 11 years ago
😊AMAZING UPDATE👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
FINALLY MAAN KNW THT GEET already knwsc tht he's her warrior😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
eagerly waiting for nxt update😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous update, waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update...U did a great job in writing the emotions of each & every person , be it dev , dadima , geet or Breej...I loved the temple scene where geet pleaded for maan's life to god ...& parallely maan was thinking only about geet...waiting to read maan's reaction after geet confronts him ...& I hope breej will now ask her mother about his forgotten past...
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Posted: 11 years ago
humein toh yeh darr hai jab maan ko pata chalega geet kaun hai...tab kya hoga...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
thank god maan is fine and got his conscious back

oh geet told him that she knew who he was😳

brij is helping in geet and maan was so nice of him

waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mission Impossible : The Don N The Diva

Part 51




Maan was looking at her shocked and surprised, "what are you seeing" Geet asked looking at his shocked face, her tears flowing unstopped, "I knew it a long time before, but you, you didn't tell me anything and you too knew the truth. But you didn't say a word, why, why, why didn't you come to me straightly and tell me the truth, why didn't you held me and say the truth, and why were you running away" Geet yelled surprising Maan,




"You don't know how many days, I got up praying that some miracle must happen up and you must accept that you are my warrior, you would coming running to me and hold me up and call me "Choti Rani," but no, every day went disappointed, you finally told you love but still you didn't tell me your identity, why, why, what did I do to have that punish, to ache for your confession," Geet said and Maan's heart melted like an ice by her words,

"Geet, come," he said as he knew that people around them watching them, and he don't want to talk in public, "no, I won't, why should I, why should I listen to you, what right do you have on me," Geet said in her cute anger and frustration, Maan slowly held her hand and held it close to his heart, "Choti Rani," Maan called and Geet looked at him with all her love springing up in her heart, all these years to hear these words, from him, she looked at him with a slight smile spreading up in her teary face,

"Choti Rani, please, won't you listen to your warrior," Maan asked and Geet forgot everything what she was thinking and where she is, all she knew was she got her life back, the Man she loved, this is enough, she thought, she looked at him smiling up and her tears flowing in happiness now, "enough, I will not even feel a bit if I die now, I got what I need, I got what was mine, my warrior, I am blessed" Geet thought staring in to his loving eyes shining at her, she slowly went near him holding his shoulders.




"Warrior" she said, and Maan smiled up, his heart was feeling so happy, a sense of pleasure filled his heart. There was no pain now; he was feeling so alive, like a new born child, "I love you Geet, and I will live for you, now I need an long life to live with you, now an greediness to live long is created inside me, just for you, just for you," Maan thought looking at her, and he slowly held her and walked her up to the flower room, as he knew where it is and it would be vacant at this time, as it's his hospital and his rules he knew it well,

Geet walked with him silently, not knowing where he is taking her but she didn't need to ask, it's her warrior, where ever he goes, she will follow him with no questions, and they both stopped as they entered the room, and Geet looked at him and Maan turned her around, her tears still hanging on her cheeks,, he slowly turned her around and held her cheeks and wiped away her tears away,

O Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan





Gali-Gali Ghoome Dil Tujhe Dhoondhe
Gali-Gali Ghoome Dil Tujhe Dhoondhe
Tere Bin Tarase Nayan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

Maan held her cheeks and Geet held his shoulders and both stared at each other and there was love and only love in their eyes, the place seems like heaven, they felt they were far away from the world around them, in their own world, their own moments, the happiness and closeness they felt now was so much, which they wanted to feel, they were themselves and only themselves, they forgot their identity, it was just two soul filled with love for each other belonging to each other and an satisfaction of an long search finally ended in each other's hold,

Maan held her close and Geet keep her head on his shoulder and Maan hugged her close and tight,

Aa Ja O Meri Jaan
Mere Dil Ka Jahaan
Maange Teri Khabar
Dhoondhe Tera Nishaan
Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan




Gali-Gali Ghoome Dil Tujhe Dhoondhe
Gali-Gali Ghoome Dil Tujhe Dhoondhe
Tere Bin Tarase Nayan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan

Maan then pulled her slowly from his hold and held her cheeks and looked deep into her eyes, her golden gaze dazzling with happiness and love, Maan slowly moved close and held her shoulders and pulled her close, making her blush red and he moved close to her and as his hot breath touched her face, she closed her eyes shivering up, Maan looked at her and slowly pressed is hard lips on her forehead, it was a strong kiss,

He pressed his lips like an big promised, as if sealing her, claiming her to be his own, only his, Geet too felt it his strong claim on her, it made her happy to the care, she smiled blushing up, it made her feel that she is full and fully his own, she belongs to him, and it made her strong,

Tera Tujhako Saunp De Kya Laagat Hai Mor
Mera Mujhamen Kuchh Naaheen Jo Hovat So Tor

Tere Bin Mera Man
Jaise Ban Men Hiran
Jaise Pagali Pawan
Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan
Lagan Laagi Tum Se Man Ki Lagan




Aa Aa
Pa Da Sa Re Ga Re Re Sa
Pa Da Sa Re Ga Re Re Sa
Ma Ga Re
Pa Da Sa Re Ga Re Re Sa
Pa Da Sa Re Ga Re Sa
Pa Ma Ga Re Sa
Pa Da Sa Re Ga Re Re Sa
Sa Re Ga Ma
Ma Ga Dha Pav Sa Ni Dha Ni Dha Pa
Dha Pa Ma Pa Ma Ga

Maan pulled from her and it made her to blush deeply and she looked at him shyly and went away from him, but Maan held her wrist stopping her, and went near her and Geet too turned towards him, "Geet, how long you know the truly," Maan asked slowly and Geet looked at him with the same loved filled eyes and stared deep into his eyes, "long enough" Geet said with a smiled, "but my heart and soul found it as the first time I saw your eyes, I guess" Geet said softly,

"Because when even you kissed me before I wasn't feeling an rejection except to accept, I feel guilt and every time I would decided to stay away from you but it was until I see you, those eyes would always make my heart weak, making me feel an guilt, but when I found the true, I cursed myself for not recognize you first even, when I my heart did," Geet went on while Maan listening to her in silence with a smile,




"And In Hosharpur, I found the truth I was so happy, but also felt bad really bad as you wanted to hide the truth from me, but I decided to get back the truth from your mouth, make you confess," Geet said and Maan held her closed by her waist and looked into her eyes, " oh, so that's why your behavior changed ah, after coming from there," Maan asked softly, "Yes," Geet said and Maan moved close to her press her more to him, "so that's why you were so close to me after that and the surprise" Maan asked again, "yes, do u think I would even let anyone else touch me other than my warrior, my heart would have stopped beating the very second, if another guy would touch me" Geet said and Maan immediately hugged her, "please, don't say like that" Maan said and Geet pulled from him,

"I wanted to hear everything from you, accept me as your Choti Rani, but no, you are as always stubborn but today when I saw you like that I dead an million times, can't hold on to myself, if you like or not I know the truth, I am sorry if it had disappointed you that I," Geet started and Maan stopped her words which gave her tears, "no, I am happy, I am so happy, I am sorry Geet, I was so stupid trying to hide it from you," Maan said and Geet looked at him with a smile,

"you don't know how many time, I wanted to come to you and say everything, how many times I wished to throw away everything and take you alone with me and go somewhere else, you don't know many day's I struggled inside me, whether to keep you close or get away, which I couldn't, all the sleepless nights, I spend watching you sleep, I always wanted to tell the truth, put myself down, I was confused," Maan confessed his feeling and Geet smiled big,




Maan held her cheek, "Geet, I guess even the gods decided to help me and they decided to reveal the truth themselves," Maan said with a grin and Geet too slowly caressed his cheeks and she held his shoulders and pulled up and kissed his forehead, and looked at maan, who was looking at her with a sweet surprise in his eyes, Geet blushed and looked down and Maan held her chin and made her look at him,




"Geet now I am feeling so alive, you do know how many questions raised in my heart when I found the truth, how excited I was , how amazed it was to see you and know you after all this years, I wanted to ask how you grow up to an beautiful girl like this, with the same amount of love for me, you know, Geet, I used to compare your each actions with your childhood behavior, nothing changed mostly," Maan said and paused a second, "Except for one thing, which I miss" Maan said and Geet looked at him shocked, "what is it" she asked





"You remember Geet, when you are little girl, you used to kiss me up whenever you see me, until I get troubled with your constant kissing and hug me up and hang around holding my neck not even allowing me to study or work, and being in my arms always but now, even getting a single kiss from you is really hard" Maan said making Geet blush and she turned around and Maan went close near her and pressed his back, on to her making her blush,

Maan slowly pressed himself more close to her and held her waist with his strong hands, now he was feeling an right on her which was never like before, "Geet, see now you are shy to your own warrior, who was always yours" Maan said and Geet turned towards him still blushing, "Yes, but I am not an little girl anymore, I am an big girl now, and all girly qualities had build into me," Geet said blushing up, "so you are a big girl now," Maan asked pulling her close by her waist, and Geet just nodded a yes,




"Yes, I can see that, you are grown up so beautiful, making me weak before you," Maan said caressing his hand on her waist, "Maan please" Geet blushed, "Geet, you don't have any questions to ask to me, after knowing who I am," Maan asked doubted a bit seriously, "yes, but that will change nothing between us, not the way I love you or feel about you, so I didn't mind it" Geet said and Maan signed deeply,

"Maan, first come, let's go and meet Dadi maa first" Geet said feeling the present now, "but Geet, won't she freak out seeing me like this" Maan asked confusing Geet, "what" Geet asked, "Maan, Dadi maa is here in this hospital," Geet said, "What, but I didn't see her and Dev said she doesn't know anything" Maan freaked out, "Maan, I think Dev lied, to keep you away from the stress" Geet said feeling suddenly scared whether she did good or not by telling him the truth about Dadi maa,

"Geet, What happened to Dadi maa," Maan freaked out, "oh, she fainted hearing about your condition," Geet said, "Dev lied to me" Maan thought tensed, "Maan please, more than any of us, Dev was so in trouble, he was running between you and me and Dadi maa, and you know him, he is so emotional and handling this situation was not easy" Geet said and Maan nodded and pulled her out and rushed to see Dadi maa, "Mr.Khurana" Doctors voice stopped him, "what is this Mr.Khurana, you had out of an deadly situation and we didn't even check you up fully and you are" he asked,

"Doctor, Dadi maa" Maan said, "She is fine, her BP had raised but now she is fine and Dev is there right, now you need to be very careful, please listen to me," Doctor begged, "No, I need to see my Dadi maa" Maan said, "Maan, listen to the doctor, I will go and see how she is, ok, please, do as the doctor says please," Geet begged finally making Maan nodded a yes, "Geet tell her I am fine, ok," Maan said worried about his Dadi maa,

Precap: Geet's fight with Breej and Maan knowing about DCP's Plan so as Geet, (Saturday morning)
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow simply amazing part... full of maaneet.


now waiting 4 brij n maan's confrontation ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome ud
maan geet tell each other
wen they knows abouts she being chotti rani and warrior
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!!
Yipee they finally got to know about each other!!

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