Mission Impossible:The Don n The Diva part 55 updated

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sanum23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

wonderful ud

that trap was 4 geet

maan is fine in KH

brij memory is coming back too

WAITING

4 PT 50

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jayshu17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Awesome update...omg!!!Brij is Geet's brother...Hope Maan will be safe and fine...waiting for the next update

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Posted: 11 years ago

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(sorry for the delay in updating guys, sorry... yesterday my net was slow and so wasn't able to upload, sorry)

Mission Impossible : The Don N The Diva

Part 50

Geet got of the taxi and rushed inside the hospital, there wasn't need for much introduction for Geet in that hospital as she had many visits to the hospital now, Geet stopped near the reception and before she could ask, "MSK is in ICU" the lady in the reception said and Geet rushed to ICU, as Geet rushed towards the ICU wiping her over flowing tears she saw the Doctor standing there with two nurses saying something,

"Doctor," Geet jumped in and he saw Geet who was so messed up with her tears, "Maan, Maan," was all she could say and then the doctor looked behind her and saw Dadi maa, Dev and Adi rushing towards them and he waited for them to gather up together, "Doctor, where is bro, how is he," Dev jumped in while Dadi maa went and held Geet's shoulder, "Everybody, please relax, I can't say anything now, we just started our treatment, his condition is critical now, his blood loss was high but thanks to the guy who bought Mr.Khurana before it was too late, but still"

Geet heartfelt heavy as she heard his words, she wasn't even able to imagine Maan in such a trouble, she suddenly felt a difficulty in breathing, "critical" Geet thought as her she lost her scene to the anxiety and slid down from Dadi maa's hold, "Geet" Dadi maa shouted up and Dev immediately held her up, "Adi, water" Dev shouted and the doctor came near her and held her hand and checked her pulse, "nothing to worry, he was shocked I guess," the doctor said,

"Baba ji, what wrong did we do, why are you punishing us this like, please save my Maan," Dadi maa cried and Adi held her close as he gave the water to Dev, Dev splashed the water on Geet's face and tapped her face, "Geet, Geet" he called worried and Geet opened her eyes slightly, "Maan," she said and Dev pulled her up straight and held her by her shoulders, "Please, don't lose your hopes, we will do everything we can, please, have faith" he said and Dev nodded and took Geet up and made her to sit on the chair and Adi made Dadi maa to sit down,

"Please, calm down, I know, Bro will be alright, nothing will happen to him, he is strong, so strong, he is brave, he is an fighter, he will not give up that easily, my bro will be fine," Dev said but his tears running down his cheeks said his fear filling his heart, yet he tried to be brave for his family, "There he is, the guy who bought Mr.Khurana on time, or else it would have been too late" the Doctor said and everyone turned up to see him except Geet, "Ranveer" Dadi maa's voice made Geet to look up, her tears blocked her vision and so she wiped it up to see who it was, and to her shock it was Breej,

Breej walked towards them and smiled a bit at Dadi maa and gave the big cover he was holding to the doctor, "I bought everything you said," Breej said and the Doctor nodded and went in, Breej then went towards Dadi maa while Geet was looking at him with shock, "don't worry Dadi maa, he will be fine," he said, while Dev looked at them puzzled, "Dev, it's Geet's brother Ranveer" Dadi maa said and he nodded with a slight smile towards Dev,

"Thank you," Dev said as he felt an immense gratitude towards him, and hugged him up, Breej felt so strange, seeing the love Maan's family feeling for him like this, he can now understand how difficult Geet would have felt acting between them, and can see why she loves this family, Breej pulled from Dev and went towards Geet and she stood up slowly, Breej don't know what she would be thinking or how she will react but still stood in front of her, ready with all answers,

Geet looked at him for a second and hover up and hugged him up crying like hell, her tears melted down Breej's heart like an ice, he immediately held her back, pampering her and caressing her head, "it's ok, it's ok, he will be fine, he will be fine, Baba ji will make him fine, don't worry," he said, and he had no clue why he is saying this about an person whom he always thought that he deserves dead, "enough Geet, enough, please, stop crying, be brave dear, be brave" Breej said seeing her state,

He pulled her from his hold and wiped her tears away her face and pulled back her messy hair on her face and tugged behind her ear, Breej was feeling an motherly affection towards Geet now, he felt like, the girl stand before was an small child, broken down and he felt an emotion of an mother, "be an good girl, should not cry ok, I am there, I am there for you," he said and he knew this were not mere words but his heart's emotions, "what the hell are you doing," he brain wondered, but Breej was not ready to hear it, "enough get out, you had done what you have to do, now go" His mind ordered,

He looked at Geet who was still holding on to him by his shoulder and he had no heart to leave her like this, it killed him, "ok will go after, MSK reports comes out positive and when she is ok," Breej thought to himself and held her hand and Made Geet to sit down, and went towards Dev who was looking at him, "need anything" Breej asked and Dev nodded a no and he hugged Breej, surprising him, Breej was so stuck, "You saved my bro, it more than anything, I will be grateful to you forever, My bro is all I need, I don't want anything else," he said and pulled from Breej, Breej was shocked to see Dev tears, and strong will build guy, crying like this showed how soft his heart is, Geet was right about him, Breej thought,

Breej then sat near Geet, who was praying deeply, "Doctor," Adi voice made everyone stand up and there was an fear in everyone's face, Geet held Breej arms tightly and he pulled her front, "hmm, right now, I can say Mr.Khurana is fine, no life threat but," the doctor paused stopping the heart beat of all, "but, but what" Dev shouted in fear, "But we can't be sure, as per the reports there is no internal bleeding or cuts which is an good news, but he had an bad head injury and his brain cells are still inactive due the shock,"

"And we had to do his head scan again, to find whether any nervous had injured and if it is then, he might go to an deep coma or his organs would lose it's sense, like his hands or legs could get paralyzed" The doctor said and Dadi maa held her heart and fell down, "Dadi maa" Dev shouted as he held her and Dadi maa held her heart which pained up, "take her to the emergency room," Doctor shouted, and Dev scooped her up and rushed towards the emergency room, and the doctor followed her, the place become silent as everyone went away,

Breej turned around and saw Geet standing there frozen up, "deep coma or his hands or legs could get paralyzed" her heart beat was getting week, how could this happen, how could this happen to my warrior, how could, he can't do this to me, he can't punish me like this, I can't see him like that, Geet thought and suddenly wiped up her tears and rushed inside the ICU, "Geet" Breej followed her as he knew they were not allowed there,

Geet busted out into tears as she saw Maan unconscious, IV's injected all over his body, wires covering him up, "what's all this," Geet shouted and Breej stood there no know what to do, "You can't do this to me Maan, not again, you had punished me enough, all these years, I was living with only one hope, to find you and live with you, and just a few days ago, I thought it's finally going to happen, and now, no Maan, you can do this, get up Maan, get up now," Geet screamed, "listen to me atleast now Maan, please"

"if only you had listen to me on that day, and come with us in the train, none of this would have happened, we would have been living somewhere happily or would have died peacefully, instead of dying every minute like this, I know who you are but still can't say it, and you know who I am but you too can't say it, what is this life, even after knowing we belong to each other, we could express it, and now, please warrior, come back,"

"look at me warrior, you hate to see me crying right, look, look at your Choti Rani, look, I am crying like hell, and I will be crying still you come and wipe my tears, do you hear me warrior, do you, speak to me warrior, speak," Geet yelled up, "Hello, Ms.Geet, you are not suppose to me in here, please go away" a nurse entered in, "no I am not going anywhere" Geet yelled again, "Mister" Nurse turned to Breej who was standing there frozen up, hearing everything which Geet said,

"Mister" Nurse called and Breej looked at her as if pulled from sleep, "please take her out, it's ICU, you are not allowed here" nurse said and Breej went and held Geet shoulders, "come on Geet" he said, "no, no," Geet yell, "leave me with my warrior," Geet shouted and Breej forcefully pulled her out of the ICU, "Warrior, Warrior," Geet screamed as Breej pulled her out, and he hugged her up, to control her, "Relax Geet, relax, calm down," he said trying to calm her down,

Geet held him tight and cried her heart out, she felt an soft comfort, and she wasn't sure why as Breej is still an strange to her but still she didn't care, nothing mattered for her now, then Maan, and the doctors words was scaring her more, Dev came up towards them and his heart ached, he felt struck, his bro, his Dadi maa and Geet all were weak, and he had to push himself to be strong, but he don't know how, he never had this situation and he stood near the ICU door and looked inside through the small glass,

"Bro, please, I can't handle this, please, don't do this to me, I need you bro," he said and went near Geet and Breej pulled her up, seeing Dev her tears only got deeper, "ji, can you take care of Geet, don't take me wrong, I wish to stay by her but Dadi maa," Dev trembled and Breej nodded up, "I understand, you go, I will take care of my sister;' he said and Dev thanked him and went way, it was 8.00 when the doctor called them all fianlly, Dev, Adi, was so freaked out, Breej too stood there holding Geet by her shoulders supporting her,

"Look I am going to lie, it's been 4 hours and we didn't find any reaction for our treatment, if we didn't find any reaction even after 2 more hours than it will be an brain dead situation, I hope you understand, if his brain cells deactivated than no use of him even being alive" the doctor said and everyone frozen up, "no, no, no this can't happen to my bro, Bhai," Dev shouted, "Mr.Dev please, we will see for 2 more hours, keep faith, keep faith" doctor said and Geet suddenly started running from there, and Breej followed her, "Geet, Geet stop" he run behind her,

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Geet rushed inside the nearby temple and as it was late no one was there, it was Devi Durga Maa's temple, and Breej too followed her, and stopped a few feet's away when Geet stood before the massive statue of Devi Durga, "what did I do, what did I do, that you are doing this to me, tell me, from my childhood, I always asked only one thing and that's my Maan, and now, he is struggling between life and death, why, I never asked you anything more, you took my mom, dad, brother, my happiness, but still I lived for my warrior, just for him, and now, if that too you can grant me, than I don't want this life you gave me,"

"I don't want this useless life without my warrior, Maan should turn ok in two hours or else after two hour, I will lay down my life before you, on your feet, its Geet Handa's promise, Geet said aloud and it echoed up the whole temple and Breej was standing there frozen. " and only you will be responsible for my death, for the first time, you will be responsible for the dead of an innocent girl, if you ever think I loved my Maan with all my life, then give him back to me," Geet shouted crying up and kneed on to the floor, "please, help him, please" she said, looking at the pretty goddess begging for Maan's life,

Breej sat far away but her words were so clearly went inside his ear, "Geet knew MSK from childhood, then how did she end up in USA and in ghost, what's her story, and she said the name Geet Handa as if it's her own name, is it," Breej was confused but he knew this was not the right time to ask, he was sacred whether Geet would something like she said, he was ready to stop Geet if she does something to harm herself,

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It was one hour and Geet was still crying up, thinking about Maan, and as the minutes raised up, her fear and prayer deepened up and Breej too was feeling scary, "God, atleast for her sake, Save MSK," Breej prayed and he himself can't believe that he did so,

Maan was lying on his bed, feeling nothing, somewhere in the corner of his mind which was still alive showed his the blurred memories of his soul, his Geet, his heart beat was taking her name in it every beating, his mind was saying the only name it recalled, "Geet", the darkness was not so far and he struggled,

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera
Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Maan sense started to get active as much as he thought and fought for his Geet, Maan remembered the blast, and as his sense came up, he felt the deadly pain in his body, it was piercing him like cold knifes everywhere, he can feel that his body is cold and rock hard, he wasn't able to do anything, he can't open his eyes, move his fingers, nothing and it scared him, "No, No, I can't die, not now, I have to be for Geet, I have to protect her, she needs me", his mind thought and try to open his eyes,

"If Geet knew I am like this, she would feel an huge pain, no, I can't be here, but where am I," Maan thought and tried his best to open his eyes, and he slowly opened his eyes and his eyelids felt so heavy, he was not going to give up, he tried hard, in spite of the pain, he opened his eyes, and he try to move his hand, which didn't help him, he tried hard, giving pressure and slowly moved his hands and then he try to shake his legs and for his surprise it moved with ease making him happy,

Now Maan can see that he was in an hospital and it was dark, "Maan, you are alright, you are fine, you no need this, get up, get up," he said to himself and he pulled the IV's from his body stood up, his body felt too heavy for him, like he turned into stone, the pain made him shout but he stood straight finally, "bro," "Mr.Khurana" the voices came up and Maan felt Dev holding him and looked at him,

"Bro," there was a shock in his face along with a happiness, "bro, please" Dev said, "I, I am" Maan said with no sound, and he adjusted his voice, "I am fine, I am ok," he said, "Dev where is Geet" He asked, "gone to temple" Dev said, "she knew I am here, did she cry so much" Maan asked and Dev nodded an yes, Maan then looked around, "and Dadi maa" Maan asked slowly, "she is in home," Dev lied and Maan looked at him, "we didn't inform her" he lied again, "good" Maan said,

"Mr.Khurana, please, you lay down" the doctor pleaded, "no, I need to see Geet" he said and Dev nodded an yes" I will call her" he said and called her,

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Geet was crying all most laying on the floor, at the same place, her phone started ringing and she looked at it, and scariness filled her and she didn't have the guts to take it, it was ring on and on, Breej who was sitting there, went up and took the phone for her, "Bro is fine, he wants to see Geet, will up please bring her here" Dev said as he heard Breej's voice and an smile came on Breej's face,

"Geet, MSK is fine, he is asking for you, he is fine," he said and Geet looked at him and an big smile spread in her face, "really" she asked her voice struggling to come out, "really" Breej said and pulled her up, "come on, lets go" Breej said, and pulled Geet up, she felt too weak, Breej called an taxi and made her to sit inside and rushed and got an water bottle and gave it to her, "refresh yourself, you look messy" Breej said and Geet looked at him, "he is ok, now you can smile" Breej said and Geet smiled,

Geet drank the water and when the taxi stopped she got down with Breej and washed her face too, Breej gave his handkie and she wiped her face, "Geet you go, I too need to go, bye" Breej said and Geet nodded and Breej turned away, "sir" Geet called and Breej turned towards her, "thank you," she said and Breej nodded and went up,

And Geet rushed in thanking all lords she can, she walked slowly, looking down, "Geet" a voice made her to look up, and saw Maan standing there, her heart jumped in joy, all her fears, worries, vanished as an dew drop, "Maan" her lips murmured without any sound, Maan can see the pain in her eyes, and stretched his arms and signed her to come close in to his hold,

Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikala
Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda
Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm..

Geet hugged him close as she came in to his arms, he was feeling a happiness unexplained, as she got her life back, she felt alive and held him close, Maan too felt an happiness and bliss and he wasn't feeling any pain now and they stood there frozen up in time,

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

After a long time, "warrior," Geet whispered in Maan's ears and he got shocked and pulled from her and looked at her, Geet too looked into his puzzled eyes, "what, yes I knew, everything, I knew you are my Warrior, the truth you wanted to hide, was no more an secret to me" Geet said shocking Maan more...

Precap: now Maan knew Geet known who he is, so what will he do... (some more truth to come out) (next update Wednesday)

Edited by Maya_Maan - 11 years ago

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NoshiMaaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Wowww mind blowing update

Very well written Maya

👏

So my guess is right, Breej is actually Ranveer and he lost his memory due to some reason in past and he is clueless why he feels so much love towards MSK and his family. And why he feels so attached to Geet.

Geet's prayers made Maan come back to life it was her love which pulled him back from his almost irrecoverable condition. Awww this is pure love 😊

Maan had nothing else in his mind except for his Geet the moment he became able to think again. And he used all his strength to get up and look for her. 😊

U have enacted the hospital scenes and emotions so well awesome job done girl 👍🏼

I hope nothing happens to daadima now she should live up to see how happy her children are

Maaneet's hug in the end of this chapter awww

This is of course one of my favorite scenes in the play and here u used it for such a perfect situation and made it more epic. Lovely beyond words! 😳

Finally Geet uttered Maan's name "Warrior" in front of him. The moment I had been so desperately waiting for! I hope she actually DOES confront him about it now its already late they were hiding their love from each other for so long.

Waiting for next update

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-Gemini-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Amazing part

Dadi in ICU

Thank god maan is fine

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kamna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#466

😭Amazing update.

after reading d update felt lyk crying.

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minelove24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#467

awsme update..emotional update..so geet knew warrior and maan also..loved update

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Krupa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#468

oh my god such a sentimental update poor geet kya hal bana diya ro roke...chalo akhir maan ko hosh aa hi gaya and now he came to knew that geet knows truth and even brij will also find out truth...waiting for next update soon...