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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all let me celebrate ...🥳...Geet came to know that maan is her warrior...😃...
But I have still some doubts...why handaji wanted to kill geet's mom & geet??...where is Ranveer??...& how maan became don??...Why can't he just quit??😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my God
First of all. I must say. Thank u so much😳 thank u thankoo sho much u specially mentioned My name i felt so dearly overwhelmed. a big biggg hug for u 🤗
I so dearly loved this whole part so much. Maan taking care of how nobody else should gaze at her skin. His possessiveness and how amazing and sweet was the scene when he did her hooks and the flashback when he spoke in similar way to pamper his Choti Rani 😊
Ratan ji recognised Maan oh this is so extremely sweet how dearly her eyes justtt didn't do any mistake for once and found the Chota Sher so quickly. My heart beat up so sadly for Maan reading this scene when he asked her to lie to Geet and Ratan Ji recognised him
Geet crying up for her Warrior and Maan consoling her. How painful it was he was asking her to forget her biggest sadness in life , asking her to live where he himself is the cure for her sadness and her problems.. And in his emotional flow he repeated the incidents of the past without realising what he was saying.. Aaahhh.. 💔
I first thought Geet bought it all and would remain crying but she decided to think properly and joined the dots. And she saw and chased Maan going to his house... What he went through in his heart to see his old house.. The way he felt "home".. The memories of his parents and everything God... Its put in such a superb way Maya i went through all emotions reading it and my heart filled up for Maan and Geet.. Lovely beyond words👏
Geet finally found why did she always feel so connected to Maan Sir.. Why would he make her feel the same way which she used to feel only with her Warrior.. Why did Maan Sir say the same things as her Warrior used to say.. Finally Choti Rani found her Warrior.. But she also heard him saying he won't tell her.. Oh how my heart cried when he said he would not have anyone in his life because he loved only her, his little princess his Choti Rani.. God 😭
So well written. Looking forward very eagerly for what happens now.. Will Geet confront him "red handed" that she has found who her Warrior is or like Maan she also will remain silent.. But i dont think she will or she should.. Because she was madly searching for him for her whole life and she was thinking of saving Maan Sir with her love.. Its all such an interesting and thrilling turn of events.
Update soon. And once again a big hug for making me feel so dearly loved when u put my name at the start :)
Waiting for next update
Lots of love
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 35
awesome dear...
excellent...
Maan didnt want Geet o know about him...
but Geet followed him and came ot know about her warrior...
what will she do now and Maan?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
MAAN TRIED HIS BEST TO KEEP GEET AWAY FROM FINDING ABOUT HER WARRIOR - BUT FATE HAD OTHER PLANS
SHE KNOWS HE IS HER WARRIOR
BUT WHY WERE HIS PARENTS KILLED AND WHO WANTED TO KILL GET AND RANO
WHERE IS RANVEER
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow thats awesome
geet got to know he is her warrior happy i am

uff this is not done past is soo terrific oops he lost everything but who are they??

why they killed them>??? many questions me waiting to clear off them now

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum fab update! Superbly written! Sorry 4 late likes n comments! Maaneet in HP! Geet wants to find her warrior! Lovely pics - reminded me of GHSP! Maan tells nt top let Geet knw! Geet follows Maan n knows he is her warrior! update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting for the update impatiently. Aaj nahi milega kya😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mission Impossible : The Don N The Diva

Part 36



Geet was crying out holding her mouth stopping herself from screaming out in happiness, she wanted to rush towards Maan now and hug him and scream high in happiness, but something stopped her, she suddenly stood up and rushed down the stairs, she went back into the Handa Mansion and went inside her room and locked the door, she was feeling an sudden suffocation in her, "Maan is My Warrior, and he is not only my warrior but also he is an don, and I am spying on my own warrior,"

"What the hell is happening Baba ji, what is this," Geet thought sitting on her bed, how come her warrior be an don, no, no this can't be true, Geet thought, "My Warrior can never do any wrong thing, no, he can't hurt anyone, even his enemy, no, no, and drug and smuggling no, no, my warrior can't do it, no," Geet thought, there is more to it, Geet thought,

Geet reached her Mobile and took it and called Breej, "Geet," Breej was seemed worried as she called at this time, "Geet, are you ok," he asked, "I am fine, actually I need one information," Geet said, "sure, what is it," Breej said getting serious, "I need the contact numbers of the previous agents who spied on Wa.. I mean Maan sir," Geet said putting Breej in a puzzled mindset, "Why?" He asked slowly,

"I need some more information, apart from their reports" Geet asked and Breej turned silent, "Atleast Give me anyone's number, it's been five guys before me right, now atleast give me one agent's number," Geet asked agitatedly, "Geet, we can't give it to you it's rule," Breej said, and Geet lost her patience, "Look, I too knew the rules, in an follow up mission, I have all the right to contact my previous agents who was handling the mission before me, so don't give me the rule thing, just give the contact number," Geet said aloud in a strict tone,

Breej was confused hearing Geet, she never was so serious and demanding nor tensed, "Geet," Breej said, "Don't give me an reasons now, just give me the number, why the hell are you so hesitating to give the contact numbers, don't you believe me or don't you believe them or are you hiding something from me," Geet yelled up, "Yes" Breej too yelled making Geet freak out and turn silent,

"Yes, we are hiding the truth about the previous agents from you, we don't want to scare you," Breej said and Geet turned silent and an fear raised in her heart, "what happened to them," Geet asked slowly, "Don't know, they disappeared," Breej said and Geet eyes widen up, "disappeared," she asked, "yes, every time when an agent gets close to MSK, they disappear without a clue, no information about them will be there, they would vanish in thin air, without a clue where they are, we had used all our power and technology to trace them up but no use,"

Geet was hearing this as if an mystery story, "but we all knew there was only two way that they would go like this, one MSK who have found about them and would have killer them nor would have held hostage" Breej said and Geet heart stopped for a second, "No, No, he can't kill anyone, not even in his dream," Geet said slowly but Breej heard that, "why not Geet, a man, who deals with drugs, weapon smuggling, can't he kill someone, and we don't even knew how he is supplying the drugs outside and don't know how many life he is endangering and weapons, don't know whom these weapons are sold too, which group of terrorist," Breej said,

"No, No, he will never harm anyone, no," Geet said again, "Really, really, you think he wouldn't," Breej asked, "Yes, I know it, he can't do anything bad," Geet said as her tears flowed down her eyes, "Then prove it," Breej yelled up, "Prove it Geet, what the hell he is doing in those underworld dealings, what is he doing with the drugs, and weapons and diamond," Breej yelled again,

"Prove it that he is innocent, can you do it Geet, can you, can you prove he is not an Don, and what we all were thinking is false and the proves we collected are fake and only your idea about him is true, can you damn prove it," Breej yelled into Geet ears, Geet closed her eyes and her mind showed her the time she spend with Maan from the childhood till now, "Yes," Geet said in a loud and clear voice, "Yes, I will prove he is innocent," Geet said, "What if you found he is really an don instead," Breej asked slowly,

"Don't worry sir, I will only submit an true report only, someone had thought me how ever the pain the truth gives you, doesn't matter, yet we had to be strong to stand by it, if he is an don you will find it when I quit my Mission on him," Geet said, and Breej knew what would happen if she does that, DCP already had an plan, "Geet, relax, just tell me your decision before you say it officially" Breej said and Geet said an ok and cut the call,

Geet's mind was totally blank, she went inside her bathroom, refreshed herself and calmed herself and tried to get her mind out of Breej's voice, and came and sat on her bed, and tried to relax, now her mind was bit cleared, "Maan sir, is my Warrior, and he is with me, for some reason he is said to be the don of underworld, and the CID team too thinks so, and I am spying on my our life, my warrior, Baba ji, didn't you find another way to make me and Maan together, it's like he is close but we are like east and west,"

"But why is he trying to go away from me, even after knowing that I am his Geet, why, and why he said he is Don," Geet thought frustrated and confused, "I don't know what's going on, I don't whether it's all true or not, I don't how you got into this life, but I know one thing, that my Warrior can't be a bad guy, I can bet my life with that, the man who taught me what is right and wrong, can't go in an wrong path, the man who taught me to walk in the path of truth, can never be a forged guy, no, I will find what is happening around",

"How much he tried to hide the truth from me, but Baba ji, you showed the truth before me, you showed my life, my warrior before me, you answered my prayers, you blessed me, now, I will do everything I can, to get him back as my warrior, as my love, my life, now, I will not let him go away from me, I had left every hooks of my life but I would not let him go away from my life now, for any reason," Geet said and her mind was so determined,

Don't know how long Geet was thinking what to do, but when she saw the clock it was 2.00, Geet got from her bed and walked towards Maan's room and saw that the closed door, but it was not locked, Geet slowly opened the door and went inside, she saw Maan lying there, sleeping peacefully, Geet went and stood there looking at his innocent face, so calm and peacefully in sleep,




"You know one thing, all this time, I was in a confusion why my mind was thinking about you, why I love you, why I got feeling for you, and I was feeling so guilty too but how foolish I was, the truth known to my heart was hide to my mind till now, so only my heart was registering your each words and actions, and my body, my each cell knew you, that's why it was so comfortable in your hold, and when you," Geet thought about the kisses and immediately blushed up,

"You wanted me that much yet you were doing so much to keep me away from you, but what to do thought you were hiding it to me, My Baba ji showed your truth before me, and you know why, that is because we are meant to be together, I don't know why the hell you are doing this, for my safety, or whatever the reason may be, Maan this time, your princess, is going to save you by finding what is going around you and your life, I found you Maan, I found you, now I will not lose you, never, ever,"

"Maan as you promised, you belong to me, and me alone, Geet ka Maan, do you get that, you wanted to hide the truth na, ok, I will also not confront you, two can play this Game, warrior and now let me see how you are keeping yourself in control and how long you will hide your identity, I will make you say that you are my warrior," Geet said with a naughty smile looking at her sleeping beauty, "Oie Geet, you too have to control yourself, he shouldn't get any doubt that you knew the truth, know, it's gonna be tough, but still," Geet thought looking at Maan,

"All because of you, and your Don thing, you better be innocent, Baba ji, he will be innocent only, he is my warrior na and My Maan too" Geet said with a smile, "Good night Warrior," Geet said a bit aloud, Maan who was in the half sleep, heard those sweet words clear in his silent night, "Geet," Maan said opening his eyes and Geet sat down immediately, Maan looked around his room was empty dark room but he saw nothing, Geet was slowly moved curling on the floor on her fours, and saw Maan getting up,

Maan sat up looking at the wall opposite to his and thought for an minute and Geet was thanking for it and vanished out from his room in the darkness, Maan wasn't able to sleep, the voice was too clear to be an dream, so Maan got up and walked to Geet's room, and saw that her door was not locked and so slowly went in, and saw Geet sleeping there peacefully in her bed, covering herself fully, Maan smiled looking at her,




"Such an sweet and beautiful creation of god, so innocent and so loving," Maan thought looking at her, "But he placed you in the wrong place Geet, but no problem, I will put you in the right place," Maan said slowly and went and sat near her, looking at her, "Geet, looking at you like this, I feel like scooping you up and running away from here, from everywhere and create our own place and live happily ever after, but" Maan stopped smiling, "I don't know whether to call, myself lucky or not, but still I thank god for bring you near me," Maan said smiling at Geet, "Good night Geet, my Choti Rani" Maan said and slowly walked away from the room,


As soon as Maan went away, Geet rose up from the bed, "Baba ji, that was close, and what did he say, that he will find me an right place, hell or heaven, your heart is my right place Maan, place where I belong and I will get my place for sure," Geet said and smiled and slept away thing about Maan,

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The morning sun shined in the Handa Mansion, and Maan woke up and came down all freshen up to see, Mr.Malik and his associated, they all had an small chit chat and went back to get ready for today, and it was 8.00 when everyone came for the breakfast, except Geet, "Mr.Khurana, where is Ms.Geet, is she alright," Mr.Malik asked and Maan stood up, "Hmm, you guys continue the breakfast I will check on Geet," Maan said and went away,

Maan went to Geet's room and saw that she was still sleeping, "Poor girl, had undergone, so much of hard emotions yesterday and was crying so much, must have be tired," Maan thought thinking about Geet's crying in the terrace and went down, "Mr.Malik, I think she needs some rest, as I already told you she was under medication and she only came here for us," Maan said slowly, "NO problem, Mr.Khurana, let her take rest, we can carry on," Mr.Malik said and they got ready and went off,

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Geet got up from the bed and an smiled appeared on her face as her heart was so happy, she jumped from the bed and went to the wash room and refreshed herself and slowly went to Maan's room, but she found it empty and then she came down stairs and found no one there, "what is going on, where is everyone," Geet thought and turned around and look at the clock, "Baba ji, it's 11.00" Geet thought, it means they had left to the fields,

Geet then rushed out as she knew where the field is, as Geet reached the field, she saw Maan and his client's standing in the middle of a dry vacant field and discussing something holding an blue print in their hands, Geet walked towards them and Mr.Malik was the one who saw her first, "Ms.Geet" He said looking at her and Maan turned and saw her walking slowly towards them,

Maan gave the blue print to Mr.Malik's associate and rushed to Geet, "Geet," Maan called and before he could say anything, "Why did you leave me there, would have waked me up na," Geet said in an cute anger tone suddenly making Maan speechless, "Geet, you were sleeping and you are tired," Maan said in his low voice, "And why did you come here in this hot sun, go back home and take rest," Maan said a little bit bossy now, "No, I won't go away from you, I will too be here only," Geet said stubbornly,

"Geet," Maan yelled up and Geet looked straight into his face with no fear, "No, I am not going, if you need, drag me to the Mansion yourself," Geet said and walked past him towards Mr.Malik, Maan stood there shocked and confused, the sudden boldness in her voice and her comfortableness in her act and the adamant nature, it was like he was looking at his childhood Choti Rani, "What happened to Geet, is this place making her act like his," Maan thought and he turned and looked at Geet who was now talking with Mr.Malik,

The heat was getting high and Maan saw Geet sweating up, "Geet, go home, it's getting hot here." Maan whispered into her ears slowly as Mr.Malik was standing near, and Geet looked at him and turned her face away, "What the hell is wrong with her, she never behave like this to me before," Maan thought looking at her, "anyways, she is not going away," he thought, "Mr.Malik, we still need to get some tests done right, and it might take some time, so if we go to the mansion for lunch and come back na, it will take time, so let's have the lunch here even, at the shades," Maan said,

"Sure Mr.Khurana, But Lunch," Mr.Malik asked, "Geet is there right, Geet, you go to the mansion, prepare lunch for us and bring here at 2.00, ok., now go, and also lassi," Maan said looking at Geet and Geet looked at him, "I know, he is saying this to get me out of here," Geet thought looking at him, "Go Geet, go, we will be waiting here" Maan said with a grin, Geet made her anger baby face and started walking away, Maan felt to laugh out loud, seeing her reaction but he controlled,

For some reason Maan felt an sudden closeness between Geet and him, the way she reacted and spoke, the way he reacted for her action, it was so real and so as themselves, for an minute, he was her warrior who would tease her and she was his Choti Rani, who was naughty and adamant, "May be it's the place, bringing our old self in us, but everything will be over, when we get back to Delhi," Maan thought, and got back to work,

Precap: Geet is back to Khurana Mansion not as Ghost agent but as his Choti Rani... (on Thursday)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome.. So nw geet also nt cnfronting maan n trying to prove him innocent.. Nice

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