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(Sorry Guys for the delay.. a long update for you... for making you wait... sorry again for making you wait, spl for you, Nosheen4MAANEET)


Mission Impossible: The Don N The Diva

Part 35


Maan was in the hall when Geet's friend came up, and asked for Geet, and Geet too came down, "Come on Geet, let's go," she said, "But Chuni, I didn't even change my dress," Geet said, "It's ok, can change there, come on," she said and Geet looked at Maan, who nodded her to go, and Geet too said an ok and took her dress from upstairs and walked away, "Sir, Mr.Malik," Geet stopped suddenly in the middle, and looked at Maan,

"Don't worry, I will take them there," Maan said and Geet too smiled and went away, and as the time ran up, Maan and his clients too went towards Marriage house, and as they reach the house they were welcomed so warmly and Mr.Malik was so very happy, as Maan walked in he was looking for Geet, "Excuse me, where is Geet," Maan asked to the girls gang standing there with Chuni, "In upstairs first room, she went to change her dress," she said and Maan nodded and stood there waiting for her,

Maan looked at the time and went upstairs to Geet's room tired of waiting for her, "what is she doing still" Maan thought as he rushed to the room and opened the door without even knocking, and stopped frozen as he saw Geet dressing up and was trying to put her hooks of her tops, as it was back hook, Geet was trying hard, and Maan was staring at her, feeling frozen suddenly, Geet felt like someone watching her and turned around and was shocked to see Maan standing there and she started to shiver and turned away,




Maan too thought to leave when he saw Geet trying hard to hook her back, which her hands were unable to reach, "Geet, come here," Maan called and Geet looked at him shocked and nervous and yet she started walking towards him, "Turn around", Maan said and Geet felt a shiver hear his words, "No sir, I will even," Geet said slowly, "Geet, turn around," Maan said again stressing up, "Sir, oh," Geet felt shy,

"Geet, it's better that I see your back rather than the world down there seeing it," Maan said and something Hit Geet's mind and see started into Maan's black shining eyes, "Choti Rani, come on, everyone is waiting down stairs, and I am telling you, you can't wear those hooks yourself, so come on I will do it," Her warrior called her, "No, I am feeling shy, I will not show my bare back to you," she said with a cute blush, "Oh, My big girl, Choti Rani, think about it , it's better that I see your back rather than the world down there seeing it," her warrior said and smiled up big,




"Geet," Maan voice pulled her back and she realized she was staring at Maan, "why is that his words always similar to my Warrior, it makes me confused as I don't know whom I standing before" Geet thought still starting, Maan realized Geet will not moved so he held shoulders and turned her back, and Maan slowly took her well tied hair and put it in the front, his fingers slightly brushed on her skin, making her to gasp and she closed her eyes, unable to bear the excitement racing in her body,

She can't hold on to the feeling that Maan is looking at her bare skin, Maan held the hooks and pulled it close and hooked it up, and Geet was standing there shiver up and burning even by his small touch, she was breathing high, Maan hooked the top and looked up at Geet and saw her, standing with her eyes closed and breathing high, and her lips were shiver making him go mad, he can clearly see the effect he was having on her, and it pulled him close to her more,




"Geet," Maan called as he stood close and his hot breathe was hitting her ears, Geet was stilled, she knew she had to answer him but she felt that she was paralyzed now, "Geet," Maan called as he took her well plaited hair and put it back again, and Geet used all her power to turn around and look at him, as soon as she saw him, she felt hypnotized by him again, and Maan too saw her and his eyes clearly show his love for her, "Geet, now you can go," Maan said and Geet nodded up and walked away,

Then Geet came down and as she was getting down the stairs her mind was getting bit relaxed from her restlessness, "Baba ji, what am I doing, first I had to find something about my warrior," Geet thought, "I have to find something which will lead me to him, anything," Geet thought, and suddenly she saw Ratan ji, "Will ask her, she must have known something about my warrior and his family" Geet thought as she went towards Ratan ji,




"Ratan ji," she said with a big smile, "oie, Geet, come on, you are looking so pretty today," she said and Geet nodded and smiled and sat near Ratan ji, "Ji, can I ask you something," Geet asked slowly looking down, "sure dear, what do you want to ask," she said holding her hands, "o, o, actually, where is Mannat Maa Ji and Parambir ji" Geet asked slowly, "Oh My Sweet girl, after these many years, you still remember them," Ratan ji asked holding Geet face,

"why would you, you were always seen in that house only na, you were so dear to them, and Mannat had been such a sweet girl, helping everyone and so as Parambir, never knew that they would have such an ending," Ratan ji said freaking Geet out, "what happened to them," Geet asked slowly hiding her fear, "What will I say Dear, everything happened in that one night, you, your mother, brother gone missing and in the morning we found Mannat and Parambir dead, in the house, someone had killed them, Baba ji,"

"That was horrible, that was the worst day of our village," Ratan ji said, "And, And Their son," Geet asked as her tears already filling up, "don't know, don't know where he went, he too was gone missing, and after that we never seen him, he didn't even come up for their parents final rituals, only we villages people did it, but I remember," Ratan ji thought for a minute, "I remember someone saying that they saw him in all blood, and I can't remember clearly," Ratan ji said and Geet's tears flowed up,

"No dear, no, you had come here, after a long time, don't think of those things, I am happy atleast you and your brother are safe, so don't spoil your mind, by thinking about the past," she said seeing Geet in tears and Geet too wiped her tears, "Ratan ji, what's his name," Geet asked slowly, "Whose name dear," she asked looking at Geet, "Your Chota sher's name, his real name," Geet asked slowly,

"Oh, Chota Sher's name, his name is M..."; "Geet" Maan's voice stopped Ratan ji before she could complete and Geet stood up looked at Maan who was looking at her puzzled, "Sir," Geet said slowly, "Oh, your friend is calling for dinner, so go and eat and come back, let's get back to home soon," Maan ordered and Geet looked at Ratan ji, "go," Maan yelled and Geet nodded and went away, looking at Ratan ji, so close and yet so long from her warrior, Geet thought as she went away,

As soon as Geet disappeared Maan went near Ratan ji and asked her what Geet was asking and she too said it, "Ji, will you do me an help," Maan asked sitting down near her leg, "What dear," she asked slowly, "you have to lie to Geet," Maan said and she looked at him puzzled, "Geet is young and he had a long life to lead, but she is trying to waste it on searching for that lost guy, now her brother is here, she is in a nice job, next she needs to get settle in life and live happily,"

"But instead she is thinking of spending her whole life, searching and wasting it, for something she can't get, so if she come and asks you again, tell her that, that boy is dead and there is no use in searching him and ask her to forget about the past and lead an normal happily life, please, it's for her own good, she already had enough troubles in her life, please," Maan said and Ratan looked at him deeply, "please," Maan pleaded and Ratan ji nodded,

"When you yourself, wanted to tell me, that you are dead, then I will Maan," she said and Maan looked at her shocked, "you can lie to her, and to the whole world, but not to me, I am the one who attended your mother and delivered you in to this world, with my own hand, I am the first person to see you with these big eyes staring at me, and I am the one who treated you from your childhood, even I millions I could Identify you Maan," she said and Maan eyes tear up and he hugged her up, "Ji," Maan said crying out,

"It's ok Maan, I understand that there must be an reason for what you are asking me, will do as you say, don't worry," Ratan ji said, "Ji, not only to Geet, but to everyone, please" Maan said and Ratan ji caressed his head, Maan then wiped his tears and stood up and took his purse and took his card, "Please, have it with you, if you need anything, any help just call me, and come to Delhi to my home, Dadi maa would be so happy to see you, please," Maan said,

"Ok Dear, will come, come on now, will go for dinner" she said and Maan helped her and walked her to the dinner place, Maan felt happy to be known as himself and went on, after dinner, Maan joined Mr.Malik and then his friends and when they decided to go, Maan came and looked for Geet and he stopped as he saw Geet talking to Ratan ji and he was wishing that Ratan ji would lie as he said and suddenly Ratan ji looked at Maan and Signed to be calm and Maan nodded and walked away,

"Geet, it's gonna be painful, but it's for your own good only, you have to get away from your past," Maan thought and went away to Handa Mansion with Mr.Malik and his friend, everyone went to sleep except Maan, as he was waiting for Geet, suddenly he saw Geet running in to the house and rushing up the stairs crying and he understood it's because of Ratan ji's words and Maan followed her up, to stop her tears,

Geet stood there looking at the sky, and her tears flowed down, she can't believe what she heard from Ratan ji, "No, My Warrior is not dead, my warrior, can't leave me like this," she thought looking at the sky, "Why Baba ji, why, why are you doing this to me, what sin did I do to get this punishment, the only reason for my life was my warrior and you took him too with you, no, no," Geet thought crying up

And Maan came and stood behind her and saw her tears rolling down, he tried to hold her when her voice stopped him, "why, why me, all I wanted was an little happiness and love, then why Baba ji, you had taken everything from me, my mom, my place, my life, everything but still I lived only with a hope to see my warrior one day, only for the him, to see him but" Geet said making Maan feel the pain in the heart, and he closed his eyes,




" what sin I did , why couldn't I have an normal life, with loving and care father, with my affectionate mother, fighting with my brother, who cares for me and a sweet life with my only and only love, why Baba ji, why, why are you punishing me like this, how could you take away my hope for living in this world," Geet said and Maan looked at her pain killing him inside out and an slight fear raising up. "I have no one for me now, I am all alone now, no meaning for my life now, Baba ji, please take me too with you, as you took my warrior, I don't want to live," Geet said crying up,

"Geet," Maan pulled her towards him and Geet looked at him shocked with her teary eyes, "What are you speak Geet, don't you dare speak like that," Maan said looking at her, "But my life is over, then why should I live, everyone left me, no one care for me, my warrior, he was only one I was keeping my hopes on and he too left me all alone," Geet said crying up, Maan saw an blanket hanging on the string there and took it up and covered Geet,




"Geet, if you are alone left here, it means you are suppose to live, you will be having a life before you, which you might not see now, but soon you will find it, and you would forget your past and present and live happily and even would feel thankful for that life, what happened can't be changed but future can be designed by us, I am there for you Geet, I will try to get back you an happy life," Maan said and Geet nodded a no, "I don't want anything, I want only my warrior, and if he is not there, then I will also not live in this world," Geet said crying up,

"Go, go and kill yourself," Maan voice raised as Geet stopped and looked at him, "Do you think this is want your warrior wants, this is why he shed his blood for, this is why he lost his family for, just to see you dead, those pains and suffers are for this, this is why he is dead, listen Geet, if you die, or even if you think of dying than that will be the really dead for him, do you want to make him die for nothing, if you live, he will to live, so live for him, live happily and I promises that's what he always wanted," Maan said and his words made her warrior alive before her,

Geet broken down crying up high and Maan held her close, and pampered her up, "It's ok, it's ok, everything will be fine, try to accept the truth, be brave, be brave, Geet," Maan said as he pampered her, "just think of your present and future now, don't worry about anything," he said hold her and Geet suddenly felt her pain reducing even without an reason and was feeling comfort and peace in his hold,




Maan then slowly walked her to the room and Made her to lay down and covered her up, "Good, night Geet, sleep well, everything will be fine tomorrow, and new begin for your life, just relax, and sleep," Maan said and went away from the room, Geet was simply lying there slowly getting hold on to her emotions and her mind got clear and she slept there staring at the walls and suddenly her thought went to Maan,

"How well he is taking care of me," Geet thought and Maan's words came back to her mind, "Go, go and kill yourself, Do you think this is want your warrior wants, this is why he shed his blood for, this is why he lost his family for, just to see you dead" Maan's voice echoed in her mind, and Geet mind suddenly turned alter and sat up, "wait, how did Maan sir, know about Warrior, and the fight, and his family, he was saying as if he knew my warrior, and about the bloodshed,"




"No one knows about it, then me, my brother, my mom and my warrior, then how Maan sir," Geet thought confused, she felt her head spinning, and she stood up and went to Maan room, as she was walking to his room, she saw Maan coming out of his room and going down stair, "Maan sir, at this time, where is he going," Geet thought and slowly walked behind him, it was dark except for the moon light, Maan was walking as if he knew the paths correctly,

After a few minutes of travel, Maan stopped before a small house on middle of an farm, and Geet too stopped in a few yard difference, but she was shocked, as Maan stood before her warrior house, Geet don't know what to think, her heart started to beat high, she saw Maan entering into the house and she too rushed and stood outside and looked through the small window, but it was so dark inside, she can't even see Maan,
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Maan went inside the house and a disgusting smell hit his nose, and he held his nose, and it was too dark, Maan felt an sudden owning towards the house, it's his house, the peace and comfort which that big mansion refused to give him, he got it here, it was all his, Maan knew where his mother would keep the candles and so he walked a few steps and found an small draw and he opened it and searched inside it and found the candles and matches, Maan took three candles and lighted it and the lighted view gave him pain immediately ,

The Spider webs were all over, and his eyes tear up, "Maan, can't you keep this little place clean, clean up the mess," his mother voice echoed in his ear and he started to clear the webs with hands like an manic with all those stick web covering his hands, he was rushing around and in no minute all web were gone and Maan too turned tired and he kneed down on the floor breathing high and crying up, and as his tears cleared from his eyes saw the floor and his heart beating stopped for a second, "No," Maan screamed as he saw the blood on the floor, and jumped up and closed his eyes remembering that day,

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"Go Beta, Go, Rani maa and her daughter need you, go, go, away," His mother was screaming at him, "yes Maan, your mother is right, go we will take care, go, save them," his father too said, and they heard the noise at the silent night, he turned to see Rani maa and his Choti Rani looking at them scared, "Go, save them, it's an promise on us" His parents screamed and Maan nodded with no other go and scooped his little princess in his arms and held Rani Maa's hands and started running away,

And Maan knew if they run they will find them as it was an vacant farm land with an clear view ahead, so he looked around and saw hay loaded in a cot there, Maan pulled the hag away and made Rani Maa and his Choti rani to lay in it and cover them with dry hay, Maan was not feeling ok to leave his parents there, so he said he will be back and asked Rani maa to hide here, until he comes back, and Maan rushed towards his house, and rushing into his house,

And that was most heart crushing scene of his life, "Maa, Papa," Maan screamed as he saw his parents in the blood pool, and rushed towards them, "Maan," they both said half conscious, "Maa, Papa what am I going to do now, I am sorry, I should not have leaved you, Baba ji will not forgive me," Maan said panicked, "Maan, Maan, please, we are not having any regret in our heart, we are happy, and we will be with you where ever we are," They said slowly, "No, No, please," Maan begged,

His mother and father kept their hand on his head as if blessing him, "Let the lord be with you always and protect you," they blessed and Maan cried closing his eyes, and suddenly he felt their hands falling from his head, and he opened his eyes and looked at them, "Maa, Papa," Maan screamed as he saw them dead, and cried up sitting there frozen, "damn, they are not seen anywhere, come on lets go there, we have to somehow kill Rani and her daughter or else Handa ji will kill us all, come on" Maan heard a voice, outside,

Maan looked at his dead parents and he thought about Rani Maa and his Choti Rani, he looked at them his eyes filling up, Maan kissed his dead parents and stood up and walked away as she knew they wouldn't come back, but there is two life's there he need to save, Maan slowly opened his eyes and he was in the dimly lit room looking at the dry blood, "Maa, Papa," Maan said and stood up and walked to the wall, and rubbed the dust there to see an drawing there,

It was his Choti Rani's, "Warrior, it's you, and this is me, and this our big castle and this is our big garden, we will live happy here and, and ah, lived happily ever after" the small voice echoed up, "Geet, I am sorry, you were right, what sin we did, to live like this, so close, yet so distanced, and it's my mistake only, my mistake, I am sorry Geet, I am sorry, but I promise you, you will always be my Choti Rani, and I will always be your warrior, and I will not allow anyone to enter into my life and we will always live together in my dreams in your big castle, I love you my little princess and I will do anything for your happiness," Maan said aloud as he leaned on to the wall tears rolling down,

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"Warrior," Geet thought as she was hearing Maan's words standing outside the house and looking at him through the window, seeing his tears flowing down "Maan, My Warrior," Geet thought as her tears flowing down her eyes and a smile appearing on her lips.

Precap: Geet n Maan...
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Posted: 11 years ago
yes!!! geet got to know that maan is her warrior!!!
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Wow,nyc part.
Atlast geet knows that maan is his warrior.
Updt soon.
Waiting.
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Beautiful update👏👏 ⭐️⭐️WOW!!!Finally Geet get to know about that Maan is her warrior😃Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 33

Superb update !!!!
Geet back in km guest house & dev worried n confuse why maan avoiding geet ..
Maan avoiding geet in day time bt coming to see her in night when geet is sleep ..
Land visit in hoshiyaarpur 😲 both maan n geet shocked ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 34

Awesome update !!
This DCP is such a kamina he planned to kill geet if she didnt complete her mission ..😡 bt looks like brij is nt happy with this ..
Maan & geet in hoshiyaar ..wow ratanji recongnised maan at once bt geet didnt took her seriously ..
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Part 35

Fantastic update !!
Yippee finally geet knws tht maan is her warrior ..
Maan's parents death was horrible ..
But why the hell Mr.Handa wants to kill his own daughter n wife ?? 😡
Im waiting for geet's rection nw ..
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happy that geet come to know maan is her worrior
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just loved this update so very much.finally geet came to know @ hr warrior. Past was so painful.. :'(
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awesome update...
finally geet know that maan is her warrior...
waiting...

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