MG~ SS~The Torment-Thread- 7~ UPDATED Pt 59 / Pg 139/ 11th Apr........ - Page 60

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

hai

patha nahi kithne time ke liye hoon mein... my net bal is down... aur mujhs ab patha chala... kabhi bhi gayab ho sakthi hoon...



lo aaj main poori raat free hoon ghanti bhajne ka tension hi nahi tha aur yeh news diya tune
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Posted: 11 years ago
me too sad ... this time patha nahi kya ho gaya... for the past 2 weeks... iska charge jaldi khatham ho raha hain... though am using it as usual... mostly will be changing this...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

koi haii???? bahott andhera hai yaha.. maan, muze bahott darr lagta hai andhere se.. plzz aa jaaoo..😉


😆😆 lo aa gaya Maan,, mombatti leker..😉


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa


babbie, apni list din badin lambiii hoti jaa rahi hai.. ani😆



aur meri naam mein se letter kam hothi jaarahi hai😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


😆😆 lo aa gaya Maan,, mombatti leker..😉


abb jaan me jaan aayi.. wese to priya ne torch bheji thi.. pr maan ho to baat hi kya..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



lo aaj main poori raat free hoon ghanti bhajne ka tension hi nahi tha aur yeh news diya tune


🤣 dekho maan aaj priya ki ghanti nahi bajegi ,, kitni khush hei..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.





Part - 56



Next day was d usual day for all ,, Geet was sleeping peacefully in her room ,, Maan looked at her nd mouthed GM princess nd went to freshen up then hit his Gym ,, he gen spent one hr there ,, on Dadima's request he didn't say anything to Geet regarding classes nd KC ,, after his routine exercise Maan went to take bath in his washroom ,, he was under shower when d flow of water started reducing nd then water stopped ,, he was surprised what happened to this shower ,, he checked d valves but no use ,, he became angry coz he was in d mid , whole wet so how to come out from washroom ,, helplessly he put on his bathrobe nd called Nakul .

Nakul : hello , ji chote saab?

Maan: Nakul what happened to d water ? mere washroom mei paani ki supply nahi hei ,, jaldi jao aur check karo ,, mujhe der ho rahi hei ,, move fast.

Nakul : ji saab , abhi dekhta hu.

Nakul run to check d valve nd said to another servant to check d water tank ,, both run out without wasting any second ,, they knew that every sec delay could increase Maan's temper .

Maan was watching time nd cribbing ,, this lil disturbance in his set routine making him annoyed ,, after 2 min he called Nakul again but he was out ,, he checked d shower again but still no water ,, he was roaming angrily in d room ,, after 5 min his phone buzzed nd that was Nakul .

Nakul : saab check karo shayad aa gaya ho ,, wo main valve band tha overhead tank se .

Maan: OK ,, lekin wo band kaise hua ? mrng mei to theek tha.

Nakul: kya pata saab?

Maan: pucho kisne kiya ?

Nakul: saab mei aur satish hei aur hum dono neeche thy..

Maan: hmmm. Dekho kaun gaya tha upper ,, koi kam theek se nahi kerty .

He cut d phone nd went to take bath ,, got ready in hurry nd came down to take bath watching Geet on screen who was still sleeping . Maan came down to take BF ,, Dadima was waiting for him ,, he was late as his usual time.

Maan: GM Dadima.

Dadima: GM Maan, what happened ,, u r late today?

Maan nodded his head annoyingly nd shoot an angry glare to Nakul who was serving him pasta in his plate nd then juice.

Maan: nothing Dadima , there was water prob in my washroom .

Dadima: OK , i'll call d plumber to check that.

Maan: now it's OK Dadima , there was some prob in valve.

He started to eat ,, took 1st morsel of pasta but stopped at his place without chewing it ,, got up nd run to puke in basin ,, he came back in fury nd roared st Nakul.

Maan: what d hell is this ? kya banaya hei ye tumne ? Dhayaan kahan hei tumhara aaj ?esse pasta kahatey hei ?

Nakul : sab , roz jaise hi banaya hei ,, ku kya hua?

Dadima: essa kya hua ? ku gussa ho rahe ho ,, kya hua Pasty ko , accha nahi hei kya?

Maan: nikamme ho gaye hei sab ,, Dadima aapne enhe ser per chadha rakkha hei , koi kam theek se nahi kerty .

Dadima: theek hei hum dekh lenge ,, mood off matt kero . pasta nahi pasand to paratha kha lo . Dadima served him paratha to eat .

Maan greeted his teeth at Nakul nd started to eat paratha ,, he took s 1st sip of juice nd run again to puke ,,, now Nakul gulp hard nd Dadima looked at Maan nd then at Nakul confused .

Maan came back after rinsing d mouth ,, he was boiling in anger nd looked at Nakul like wanted to burn him alive ,, Nakul gulp nd looked down in fear .

Maan lift his bag to go saying ,,, mai tumse eve mei baat kerta hu ,, din pure ho gaye tumhare lagta hei ,, he was getting late today which was not his habit ,, Maan moved out without taking his BF . Dadima nd Nakul wr very confused why he was behaving like this?

Dadima: Nakul dikhao zara hume pasta nd juice ,, hum bhi dekhe kya hua hei esse? Dadima took a spoon of Pasta nd that was sweet in taste with salt ,, then she took a sip of juice ,, that was very salty ,, she gave a disappointed look to Nakul .

Nakul: kya hua Dadima ?

Dadima: Nakul pasta meetha hei aur juice mei namak hei .

Nakul : nahi Dadima maine roz jaise banaya hei ?

Dadima : accha to tum khud khaker dekho .

Nakul taste both d things nd he was also very confused nd shocked ,, how cd it happen ? He said sorry to Dadima nd said that he made that properly but didn't know how it happened ? He called satish nd asked him if he added something in d dishes but he too denied * helplessly Nakul went to kitchen praying to god to save him from Maan's wroth . He checked d juice from container nd that was also salty ,, poor soul was sure that he was going to get a good scold from his Choty saab .

In office Maan was late today nd he was in foul mood ,, whole day he scold every ppl on their minor mistakes ,, all d employees wr praying to their god to keep them away from his wroth.

Geet came in KV much after nd took her BF silently ,, she talked to Dadima a lil nd then came back to her room but seeing Nakul nd satish's hanging faces nd dull mood she understood d situation ,, a glint of evil smile crept on her lips thinking about d change in situation .


To d fearful it is threatening bcoz it means that things may get worse. To the hopeful it is encouraging bcoz things may go better. To the confident it is inspiring bcoz the challenge exists to make us strong.

Precap --- no relief for Maan...😉



Part - 57

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



aur meri naam mein se letter kam hothi jaarahi hai😆


😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
priyaa ki badolat me 1st aa gyi...😳

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