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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
very emotional
sameera was actually a witch who ruined a happy family for her wish for money and fame
hope vicky comes back soon
so finally real identity of aysha is revealed and she is maans neice
looking forward for maans confession and confrontation between maaneet
waiting for the next update
please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update
Made me cried
I just hate tht sam
It all happened coz of her
Rahul warned anju but who can stp the future

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Posted: 10 years ago
yaar waiting to read the next chapter... i know I'm you've just updated a few days ago, but what to do its so hard to wait n i'm very eager to read more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I seriously cried so hard while reading this chapter
I know ... everything is imagination but you wrote it so beautifully
That I could feel that pain direct
Hatts off to you
Sammera ... ohh I will not destroy my comment with her name so mouth zip
Anju, Vicky, Annie all are suffered a lot
Now at least there is a hope for Vicky to get back to his family
So why did maan said ... he is married
Marriage doesn't happened
Is this related to one night when sameera took maan out
Is she try something and maan denied it
Than in last she was tanuting him for it ... that he cant pleasure anyone
Ufff so much interest and question
So waiting for further updates
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yaar... when do you think you can update the next chapter? actually can't wait to read the next chapter
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waiting😭 waiting😭 please update0
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Waiting for my prince
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are u going to update this one too waitng for the update
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THANKU FRIENDS FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS AND LIKE..LOVE U ALL.. SORY FOR TE DELAY
Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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( THANKU SHRUTHE DIDI FOR TIS LOVELY BEAUTIFUL BANNER..LOVE U)











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Maan got stamble: Anju Anju pls open ur eyes..he gave Ayesha too Dadi and started to shake Anju..Dadi and Anni started to cry thinking Anjali left them forever



Maan shook her: Anju get up pls im sory i will accept all ur demands pls wake pls..pls dont leave me .. he was crying, wat i will do without u ..pls wake up..shouted his lung out.Anju ..no u cant leave me..he broke all things in te room..



Dadi hold Ayesha and started to cry thinking abt te small soul who lost her parents and crying
Geet froze to hear.. she cant hear any thing more..she can feel wat they all could went thru..Maan no how could he have beared everything and behaving normal..if i was in his place, i could have not cum out from te pain..but tis family how they console themselves.. she cried holding Dadi.. Anni too crying hugging them..All three crying thinking abt tat fateful day which turn they life totally upside down


Dadi: we have lost everything Geet...Ayesha lost her parents before she open her eyes..i have seen everything..first my husband,then my son and dil..then my grand kids..but still im living seeing they end in front of my eyes
Geet: dadi



Dadi: tat is last time Maan showed emotions..after tat he he closed himself..he became arrogant..little emotions too died tat day from him..he did all te rituals of Anju mechanically.. then he closed tis side of rooms.. Maan thought to destroy Sam and stopped all her contacts..he want to destroy her fully,but i stopped him thinking abt Ayesha..wat is her fault wen we didt see her true self..Padmini and samer came and ask sory but Maan ask them to get out from our life and not to show they faces ever..He became so rude..he hate girls..he engrossed himself in his work to forget his pain and brought kc to top..kc grew huge coz of his hard work..he achieved everything, we got everything but in all tis we lost our Maan..

He was repenting in his guilty thinking becoz of him only we have lost everything.. wenever he hold Ayesha he thought tat Anju born again for him.. he will sleep with her, but slowly he started to withdrew himself from us...he didt back out form his responsibility and did everything for us, but he became alone...he try to maintain a distance from us thinking his fate will cause us pain...he just forget to live..he lived for us drowning in his guilty..

Ayesha grow ,due to Anju hit her stomach and she is premature baby..she cant able to talk like normal baby..we came to know tis wen she was 2 years..Anni became silent..

she lost her bhai..who will run behind her and pamper once,..Maan will make so many surprise and specail for every raksha bandhan, he will fulfill all wishes of his two sisters, but for past four years Anni didt celebrate RB..he wont talk with her..we lost everything..tis km surrounds by darkness..we thought we wont get light till u enter


Geet look at Dadi

Dadi : u have changed Maan..u taught him to live..u open his heart..i thought our old Maan is back..so tat only wen i saw ur phote i decide u r te one for Maan

Geet confused : phote

Dadi: yes Geet Nakul mailed ur phote wen u came to chennai gh..and then i ask Adi to collect details abt u..holding Geet's hand im sory Geet..then i planned to make u work in delhi , but i didt imagine u will stay with us..tats our destinty..i was so happy, tat day wen u enter i imagine u both are entering like brides...i thought beind together u both fall for each other, i cant directly ask u, as i was scared to ask u for Maan..how u will react after u know te truth..so i talk with ur parents first and told te truth
Geet gasped: appa amma know



Dadi nodes yes: geet pls bring Maan before he burn himself in his pain..pls only u can do it
Geet started to cry loudly: im sory dadi im sory ..she was crying her lungs out
Dadi got confused with her words but hugged her..all are crying... After some time they subside..and broke they hug
Geet: im sory dadi im sory
Dadi: Geet


Geet: im sory i was not there wen My Maan need me most..u all drowning in pain but im enjoying my life there..my kutty my baby..im sory dadi
Dadi was overwhelmed with her words: wat u will do Geet its our fate
Geet: but now onwards tat fate have to ask permission from me to touch u..if it cums i wil
l break its nose

Dadi and Anni look at her like she is alien
Geet wipe her tears and then dadi's and Anni's: tis is last tears u r shedding..till im alive u should not cry
Dadi and Anni stare at her and node yes.
Dadi : Geet Maan is thinking he is te reason for Anju and vicky..tats why he is locking himself
Geet : i know dadi he is fearing thinking he will hurt me..tats why he is avoiding me..but he dont know abt his Geet who know him more than himself
Dadi shocked and surprised to see her love for her grandson..she hugs and kiss her..
Dadi: Geet u love him so much
Geet: i dont know dadi wat made me to fall for him..but now without Maan, his Geet is incomplete..im nothing
Anni and Dadi look at Geet as a angel who came to get rid of they dark..Dadi now know she will bring her old Maan out of his shell


Dadi hold her hand : thanku Geet
Geet: My Maan is mine..only mine..i will not let him to ruin his life..his life belongs to me..i know dadi he will hurt me to avoid..he will go to any extreme..after all he is te great Msk..but i also Geetanjali pandiyan wont leave him..not only tis birth but all births he is mine..Ayesha is my daughter..
Dadi hugs her: i know Geet u will win but his gussa
Geet:dadi dont wory abt tat idiot .. i will make him to confess his love..i know dadi he loves me but not ready to open his heart..so i have to keep bomb to break his wall and smirk
Dadi and Anni giggled
Geet: for tat i will go to any extreme..be ready to celebrate te day,wen u see ur old Maan
Dadi got emotional
Geet: Dadi now only i said no more tears..i hate tears in dramatic way..or naa i will call tandon uncle to console..he will be ready to do tat and hi five with Anni
Dadi smile : naughty girl
Geet kissed her cheeks : i love u sexy
Dadi: i love u beta
Anni : me pouting her lips
Geet hugged her: love u Anni
Anni: if u give all ur love to us wat u will give for bhai
Geet: i have to give him so much..he made me cry..u know Anni GeetAanjali Pandiyan cried so much for first time..see my eyes, it look like ghost..and coz of him i scolded my fav babaji..twisting her nose high..for tat he have to pay..revenge Geet



Anni: bechare my bhai have to bear all ur nautankis
Geet smirk : its his fate
All giggled
Geet: dadi its late u go and sleep..anni take her and sleep with her today..i will see Kutty
Anni : hmm Geet opps bhabhi
Geet glared : dont call me bhabhi yuck..im not tat old
Anni: but u are naa
Geet : Anni ki bachi..dadi see her
Anni hugs her: love u
Geet: dadi sleep today no more tears or remember abt tandon u will smile..seeing dadi ki face..omg u r blushing
Dadi pat her cheeks : besharam and went with Anni, feeling light
Geet look at Anjali's phote.. didi i know u will be watching us from some were..bless me to win my Maan..dont wory i will look after everyone..now tis km have faced so much pain, but now tis km will only see happiness and vicky soon u will see ur family..for tat first i have to know his pov..Geet dont be hurry or he will go away if cums to know tat im related to khuranas so better take slow steps..


Seeing Maan's pic: u made me cry naa i will see u Mr.Khurana..
she closed te door,wiping her tears went to see her kutty..

Ayesha was sleeping in her bed..Geet lyed beside her hugging her..Geet kissed her forehead, caressing her face thinking abt her life..Geet hugged her hiding inside like protecting from tis world, Ayesha too snuggle closer to her , Geet slept with her..



It was nearly 2 clock, she heard some noise outside..she covered Kutty with duvet.snuggling pillows around her and went to see wat happen


She was shock to see Prithvi is holding Stumbling Maan and Raghav was trying to hold him..she know he was heavily drank..Maan was blabbering something.. both took him to his room and placed him on his bed..Raghav was worried for Geet and stare at her..Geet sense wat he is thinking..she smile at him
Geet: dont wory im fine bhai
Raghav can see a new glow in her face..he didt ask further and both left Geet to handle him..Geet saw him who was blabbering something.. Geet sat near and kept her ear near his lips to hear him
Maan: im sory Geet im sory




Geet gasped hearing his sory..in tis state too he thinking abt her
Geet caress his hair bending on him: its ok Maan u sleep
Maan: im bad..first vicky hate me then Anju left me and now Geet too left me..she left me..tears were flowing from his eyes
Geet heart cried seeing his pain..she cant see Maan like tis..he is very hard out but inside he is crying each sec..she wipes his tears, kissed his forehead
Geet : i wont leave u Maan.. i will sooth all ur pain caressing his heart..
She made him lye properly,removed his shoes and shirt..sat beside him watching him, capturing his every features..she lied on his chest hugging him,half lying on him..
Maan hands hold her: Geet

Geet look at him, he is sleeping and hugging her..she thought he woke up feeling her but seeing him sleeping , thought in his sleep too he can recognize her but hiding it..



Geet rest her chin on her hand which is placed on his heart: Kallulimangan.. kissed his heart and watched him..then she slept hugging him

Morning

Geet wake up and saw she was lying on Maan..she blushed and saw him sleeping..she kissed his heart, she want to be like tis forever but thinking his gussa wala red face , she smirk and left to see Ayesha
Dadi was sitting in hall.Geet came and sat beside Dadi with te album in her hand :Geet wat is tis
Geet: dadi i want to know more abt Maan..then only i can proceed
Dadi smiles: hmm were is Ayesha
Geet: She is playing with Anni..dadi sory if u dont want its ok



Dadi took te album: u know Geet Maan was very naughty in his childhood
Geet got excited and sat on te couch folding her legs : really dadi
Dadi: Anju loves him so much..one day Ranjith friend came to see him.. without knowing he hit Anju's fav flower pot..Anju started to cry..he said sory but Maan didt like some one making Anju to cry..u know wat Maan did
Geet: wat dadi
Dadi: he pee on his car..oh god he is so naughty
Geet fall on te floor and started to laugh..Dadi worried seeing her falling down and hold her but smiling seeing her smile..



Geet suddenly stops: Dadi tats why he is not calling me with full name Geetanjali as he rememebers Anju dii

Dadi felt overwhelmed wen Geet said Anju dii and open te album :Anju always capture all his moments..tis album have all his photes except few
Geet: why
Dadi: u should not ask him or else he will do rudrathandav
Geet: why dadi its anything special
dadi: he will be nangu pangu and few in frocks
Geet eyes popped : wat and laughed ,dadi enough my stomach is paining..dadi too laugh with her..All servants felt happy seeing dadi ki smile..soon Anni too join hearing abt Maan she too started to laugh..Ayesha was watching them like they are alien..
Dadi: Anju and Maan will love to play basket ball..if both team they will always end in tieing..



Geet : tie up

Dadi :coz both wont let other to lose..he was captain of his foot ball team in his school
Geet: oh dadi wat abt his friends
Dadi: he had so many friends..he will be enjoying with them, always outing till his parents die, then he left all they contacts.. they sometimes call me to ask abt him..they often try to talk with him..but he avoid them..so they too stop disturbing him thinking abt his pain
Geet: dadi wat abt tis pic..dog
Dadi: Geet dont say dog or he will get angry..he is his baby his dextar..he brought as small puppy..he and dextar will always annoy Anju..but dextar was like our baby.. we love him so much..Maan love dextar so much, it will always sleep with him and be with him, wenever Maan was in home, he wont leave him for a sec too...wen he went to london for higher studies he took it with him, u know becoz dextar cried for his departure..
Geet: wat , then now were he is



Dadi became emotional
Geet hold her: dadi i said no tears or else i dont want to know anything
Dadi: sam have thrown him out
Geet gasped: Maan didt say anything
Dadi: he was in simla tat time for a meeting no ones know abt it..she hate tat creature tats wat she will call him..but she lied tat dextar was missing..later i came to know thru nakul..Maan broken so much for tat
Geet: now u know were it is
dadi: dont know Geet
Geet: say me more dadi like his favs, dislikes
Anni giggled: i will say one thing u should not get angry
Geet got curious: wat Anni
Anni: bhai love Kareena.
Geet eyes popped : wat
Anni: bhai was so much crazy for her..he had all her collection..he will watch all her films first day first show..his room was full of her photes..he will say his bebo and will marry her wen he grown up


Geet fumed hearing tis: wen i talk abt my Gurmeet he will get angry but his bebo..i will see him
Anni giggled: poor bhai
Dadi: he play guitar very well Geet..Anju ,Maan and vicky composed a song together but before they play, tat everything over..he love to do camping.. once camping was his passion but later to bury his pain he went to camping.. tis phote in our farmhouse..riding horse
Geet saw a pic were he was sitting in a bike: dadi he know to ride bike
Dadi: why u asking like tis
Geet: i saw him only in car so thought he born with car like karan who born with kavasakundalam
Anni laughed: Geet seriously yar..u know Bhai is crazy abt bikes he have a collections
Dadi: and vicky for cars..wat ever car, Maan will buy for him before it cums to market..now too him he buy cars and kept it in garage thinking one day vicky will cum and use it..but he wont touch it
Anni: u didt see te garage naa..after seeing it u know they will be car mela
Dadi became sad: we miss our vicky
Geet(st): sory dadi for hiding te truth.. but first i have to know wat vicky is thinking..or else we will lose him again

Chennai


Srk was sitting in his chair in his office but suddenly felt something tat some one calling him..he thought abt his family and felt sad..his eyes welled up: bro

Km

Dadi : i want to see my Maan Geet
Geet: soon dadi, tat day is not far yet
Dadi : were is he..still he is sleeping
Geet: hmm hero came late night and more over drink heavily
Dadi became sad: drink
Geet: hmm but dadi no sad sad thing..i will see him dont wory..but
Dadi: wat Geet
Geet : dadi i need u help..i cant do anything alone



Dadi: Geet how can u think i will leave my daughter alone to fight..obivously im ur team,holding her hand
Anni placed her hand on theirs: me too
Trio look at Ayesha..she was staring at them


Geet: Kutty u wont help ur maa to make ur appa to smile
Ayesha nodes and kept her hand on them and nodes
Geet hugged her: tats my kutty..love u baby
Dadi: so mission Maan
All giggled..They started to continue they Ram katha no no Maan katha

Maan's room

Without knowing te girls planning to make his life hell..Maan was sleeping due to heavy drinks..he wake up and hold his head
Maan: ahhh...damn with tis head ache..he yelled for Nakul.. down trio heard his yelling and thought jawalamuki woke up

Geet: sher is roaring



Nakul came with lemon water.. Maan drank it ,he got little bit relief..he was shock to see himself on his bed..he remember last night..all incidents flash in front of him..he throw glass which shattered into pieces.. Nakul run away seeing Maan..all heard and gasped..
Maan felt some frangnace on him..he smell it..he was known to tat but wat is..he snap and thought to hit gym to pour all his frustration


Maan was punching his sand bag vigrously..his eyes was red in furious..he was hurting himself for hurting his angel..how will he face her..he lie to her..her tears...his each punch shows how much he is burning inside
Prithvi came: baby ur phone
Geet: thanku bhai i forgot,then saw there so many missed calls from her home..she at once call them..she too need them now..Meena took te call with te first ring itself as she was waiting for Geet's call
Meena: hello Geeta wat happen r u fine..why u didt take te call.everyone are fine..its everything fine there..
Geet: maa pls hold u breath..



Meena pout..Prabhu laughed seeing her non stop questions..from morning she is making they life hell thinking Geeta didt take te call..now she is relife and fired her questions
Geet: maa im fine.. and every one are fine here
Meena got relife: then why u didt take ur phone
Geet: oh i forgot it in office
Meena: hmmm u scared me
Rajji: Geeta maa got a bad dream ,so from night she is worried for her..they were talking in speaker
Geet: tis is too bad wen im there how u got bad dream
Meena: vallu ponnu (naughty girl)
Prabhu : how r u Geeta
Geet: fine appa..appa
Prabhu sense something: hmm
Geet : appa u know who is kutty
Prabhu look at Meena..


Prabhu: hmm..Geeta look after maaji Anni ,kutty and Maan
Geet: hmmm
Meena: did u talk with Maan
Geet: hmm he denied
Prabhu: we know he wont accept
Geet: appa im ur daughter i will make him to open his heart
Prabhu: i know abt my daughter

Meena : Geeta for tat u don't go beyond, don't make him irritate

Geet ; oh worried abt ur son, no way maa he have to bear all my tauntrums
They talk for some time..then Dadi,Anni and Ayesha talk with them and cut te call
Nakul gave Geet tea as she need it and took another cup for Maan
Geet: kaka for whom tis one
Nakul : for Maan babu..
Geet: were is he

Nakul: in gym
Dadi got worried :wen he will change his behaviour..wen ever he was angry he will hurt himself
Geet hold her hands: i will see dadi..kaka give te tray to me



Nakul was hesitating: baby morning itself he broke te glass..he is very angry
Geet: kaka its ok give to me
Nakul signed and gave te tray to her..Geet placed her tea cup in te tray and praying to her babaji she went to meet her lion in his den














THANKU NELUFAR FOR TE PIC


PRECAP : FACING TE LION OR LIONESS?

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Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago

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