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gurti30

@gurti30

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

beautiful story dear

loved all the parts

maan and geet always ready to fight chalo maan ko koi to mila usse gusse mein takkar dene wala😆

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Superb update !!

Good going my Sherni Geet ..in nxt crash she didnt gave him chance to speak much & khud hi maan ko suna diya ..😆

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Part 3 Fantastic update !!!!

"aap hat jaiye warna aapko pata nahi mein gusse mein kuch bhi kar sakti hu" Yeh kya geet ki dhamki ka toh koi asar hi nahi hua maan per😆 ..ulta mr.khudus is flirting "kya karogi marogi peetogi yaa kiss karogi" 😲

aww bcoz of maan geet missed tht saat pheras ..koi baat nai geet puttar nxt time dekh lena khadoos ko ..😆

I really loved it & thanks for 2 updates :) dil khush kar ditta 😛

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

geet ka gussa uff uff

maan enjoying

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akanshya

@kingofme

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

awesome part 1...

sry for commenting late...

was held up...

pls cont soon...

thanx for the p...

and ya dnt forgt to pm next time too...

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akanshya

@kingofme

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

part 2 and 3 were just superb...

and the crash part was just too get and then maan not moving coz she dnt say pls..#

geet fikar not tumhe tho uski shakal har din raat dekhni padigi aur tum chahkar bhi usse gussa nhi hogii.. ;)

pls cont soon..

thanx for the pm..

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

part 3
awesome...
nice one...
shes so different...
and that dialogue i think Maan will always remember or till at least their marriage is over...
cont soon dear...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

hmmm so this one will be over soon
shame i liked them crashing into one another
wonder whats going on in his mind
i mean maan of course

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mauaa

@mauaa

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

hey bb.. 2nd part is also fab.. nice story dear!!👏

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Deelight

@Deelight

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#100

shocked to suprise again bak to shocked
Shocked isliye cos u hv strtd a whole new SS while u hv 2 on-goings
suprised as its gonna b a fab one as d othr two, n it indeed is
shocked again cos do FF ke update dene ke liye apna readers ko itna wait karati ho ab ek aur add ho gaya to... uff
bechare readers😭
cmg 2 d SS i jz luvd it... its superkool.. but yeh kya sirf do ya teen para ka short update hota hai... not happenin...sare part ek saath daal deti but nahi readers to tadpana hai na😔
u noe yeh SS to padne se pehle hi khatam ho gaya...i really lykd it.. Maneet 1st crashin thn d nxxt n d last argument "kyunkki tumne PLEASE nahhi bola" hillarious... totally mindblowing! jaldi nxxt wala update karna... waiting. . . . . .superb SS😃

Edited by Deelight - 11 years ago