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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

hi thanks 4 da pm n double rocking fab updates! Part 2- another crash! Its in ur destiny Geet lol! Maaneet again arguing! Geet vows revenge! Part 3 - try as much as she wants bt they end up again next to each other! Fireworks!! Maan refuses to move! They argue yet again! She misses the saptapadi! Geet incensed! Maan seems to be flirting with her! Geet shocked! Maan teases her n leaves! Geet cutely cribbing to her babaji! Geet u to are emant to be together so will defn meet again! Ahh y so short updates???? Cannot wait...want more! Pls update soon! 😉Thanks! Well written😊

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: g-for-geet

Nice parts...

Lekin yeh chotu updates kyun...not like urs...

So aur do encounters hue...Lekin geet ki samajh saari ki wajah se DD Nahi hua...

Par yeh title ke khilaf jaa raha hai...mujhe DD chahiye...

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Chotu updates isliye coz this was supposed to be a one shot which I divided and wrote it as five parts SS!

And Dhoom Dhadakka does not just mean crashes and bangs. It also can be used for non stop jhagda! It is like using Shor sharaba, halla gulla! Dhoom Dhadakka can be used in many ways! When two people are fighting you use that phrase. It literally means lots of bangs and crashes! And even fighting and arguing symbolises bangs! Samjha? Or did I confuse you more?

Aur waise bhi aam khaao gutliyaan kyun gin rahi ho! Enjoy the story, why worry about the title!😉

Thanks for the review!

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KReyAS

@KReyAS

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

awsome dear

love maaneet nok jhok

thx fr pm

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

KIS GADHE SE PALA PADAYA GEET KA

AB GEET KO KAUN SAMJHAYE

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

awesome update...par ye maan geet ke peechhe hi kyun khara rehta hai??..kahi jan bujh ke to nahi rehta??😆

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

both parts are amazing, but why so short parts.

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flowing_river

@flowing_river

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

loved their tu tu main main...

kya bomb fatate hai inke milne par..oops crash hone par...😆😆

pls PM me for next update...

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

nice part
loved it
geet wanted to see her sister's saptapadi but she missed it because of maan
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i have doubt is maan has any feelings for her by any chance he fell for her in their first meet itself
eagerly waiting for their next encounter
hope we get long updates...😊

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

part 2
awesome...
hahaha nice...
Geet is always cribbing...
and once again they clashed...

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

kya chun-chun ke gaaliyan de rahi hai Geet...

and Maan so stubborn but I loved when he whispered ---Kya karogi mujhe maarogi, peetogi ya fir kiss karogi...hayee Maan ko Geet se kiss chahiye...woh to bechara hints de raha hai Geet hai ki maanti nahin...

wonderfully funny update...

waiting for next part...