MG OS updated concluding part pg 4 april 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
wow di
that was beautiful writing
geet's pov was explained beautifully
her feeling her emotions
it was almost as if we were standing at the station experiencing it
i just hope maan comes and takes his geet away
n i m sure he will too
update soon di
waiting eagerly
muahhh
luvvv yaaa
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Short start.. but loved it.. it wil be good if u update this one 5th april GHSP anniversary .. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
heyy...i thought this one n more sayyain are same...
bt glad they are not 😉
now there are two for me to read
waiting for update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow,nice part.
Waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was not the day that intended to have.. my eyes were glued to the path where she left .. her tears that soaked my heart.. her trembling lips.. her pain that she went through... unknowlingly his own eyes were wet .. it was that undue pain that was till now deep buried in her heart and now it has started to pour out of his eyes... unknown to his conscious he broke the glass that was infront of him and let the pair of his heart flow in the form of the red water that was his blood..

it was some minutes that he realised that she wasnt in the room.. he can fee lher presence though somewhere each ounce of his life his each vein know that she is the only one.. it doesnt mean anything to him that she sometime belonged to someone but what harmed him most was the pain and the sourness that had resulted in the form of that unwanted and undue betrayal...

her each and every word was still ringing in his mind..

her eyes which were wanting him to listen to her to trust her ..she knew that she wasnt the one for him yet she had given herself to his mean self. yes MEAN .. he was the biggest selfish when it came to himself..

wasn't he one who forced her to let out all the pain and sorrows of her hurting her most in the process.. each and every wound got green with the mere rememberance of those mean night and days.. her suffering those accusations ...

he ran in search of his dear life.. he knew that it will take lots of promises and amends to make her believe .. though he knew that she doesnt need him but he is in the mere need of hers..

he is the one who need her and will make sure that he will never let her feel that he is having any kind of grudges for her..

he smiled bitterly when he encountered her words..

he words were dripping with the longing and the loneliness that sometime were the part of his life.. he closed his eyes and let out a sigh ..

he need to be strong..

clenching his fist he hold her hand and stopped her from going away from him and his life... the noise and the hustle bustle of the place didnt let him dont but it only strengthened every nerve of his telling to go and make her yours.. she is just a princess and she is needed to be preserved and secured..

kneeling down and bowing his head he slipped the ring in his hand kissing her hands asking a silent apology...

she looked away with the tears but his rough hands didnt let her shed those pearls..

at least not for the jerk like him.. she glared at him like she listened the silent cursing of his hand and he let her go ..only to come to him and be her for ever ...

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so this was MAAN's POV that my dear friend made me write as we had lots of MSK talks yesterday in lab ...

signing off here with this short emotional up heveil of two hearts ..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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😊
Edited by leenukiguru - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ahhh yes he too realised that she is the one
shame he almost lost her
but then found her
though he did find her
and said sorry too
they both need one another
that was beautiful
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome
he realised that he need her and then found her
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
nice n emotional parts dear...finally maan ne realize kr liya k geet ki kya importance h uski life me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome di
maan has realised it and made her to werar the ring

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