MG OS updated concluding part pg 4 april 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I was standing at the railway station my eyes were clouded with tears , there was the pain the longing of leaving him i am going away far from him it will be the best the best decision that i could take for him
a fresh layer of tear gushed out of her eyes she was very hurt the pain of leaving the man she loved she was leaving MAAN SIR
THE MAN WHOM SHE LOVED WITH HER HEART AND SOUL
HER MAAN
just hers
she so much wanted to shout out and say to the whole world out there that finally she experienced the beauty that was always hidden in the deep recesses of her heart her man , her maan had made it possible that she is able to experience the beauty of life inspite of the trials and tribulations of her life
he made her feel that she was indeed not used he made her feel that she can too love life inspite of having the responsibility of her baby
she can love
she can feel the love in the form of him
she wiped her tears and smiled a painful smile
it was the time to let go
it was the time to let him have the one who is truly for him

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a short pov of geet
which happened when she left maan after demello's scene
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one doll par itna chotu sa diya bada diya hotha tho dil aur bhi khush hojathi😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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bas ittu sa OS i wish bada hota aur maan apni geet ko le jaata
but phir bhi I love Geet POV
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahhh what she felt when he didn't listen to what she wanted to say
and left she left BIM
Well tried too
Waah kya baat hai
That was beautiful for sure

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow geet shoe k sceq pe phir se bew os ..
I m waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: preeti.1

Wow geet shoe k sceq pe phir se bew os ..
I m waiting



thx di
but there is no continuation of this
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its really nice...though its short, its too effective I felt

Liked her POV...her true love is shown so beautifully by u dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey its lovely
pls update ur other stories too...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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heyy Suhana
nice concept...
n different jst like all ur stories...i really like thm...
the baby thing is the bigg twist aftr the prologue...n tht ws unexpected
bt makes the story more intrsting...
waiting to read more ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi dear! Emotional OS! Loved it! Well written!
Edited by khwaishfan - 11 years ago

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