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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
6
kameeni hai woh aurat
man she deserves to be killed soon
and so does her son kameene
they tried to kill maan
hawww kameeno tumhari toh aisi ki taisi
saalon sharam nhain aati
well if they can do this to family well they can do it to handas
poor maan man
he was just a child when they tried to kill him
not only that but they killed his dadi too
mann toh karta hai inki maut ki planning shuru karr doon
so maan tells his story finally
and its worse aint it
at least she had family till now
and poor thing didnt even get to see his dadi again
those kameeney killed her and he couldnt even see her
wow that was some story
hmm what was that with maneet flirting with one another
that was one light moment
and am glad for that
seems they have gotten to know one another
she sure is pulling him towards her
and thats not worng
but yes first they gotta escape that kameena
then all this can happen
so he sure did well for himself
when she was telling that story he must be remembering all his past
gosh that cant be easy
something brought them more closer
those kameeney dev and pammi
hmm they spent the night talking how cute
in between such situation they managed to do this
you were good to include it
when she said are you married and she was like what am i saying so funny right
both were disappointed that the other wasnt serious about the flirting
koi nahin if not know later
maybe when she works for him
that would be fun and rocking
his story was more sad man
but geet is in his life now so thats okay
well now we know who dadima was
and also that he has no family in delhi and he is all aone
good thing he encountered the handa sisters then
dude abb inse chutkara naa paa sakenge
as if he would wanna
he wants them safe and sound
they sure got along there didnt they
awww that was so cute to see
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: chavvi16



oh ho thoh mystery here too
ahh yes now i remember you love mystery stories too
no wonder your stories always have hints of mystery

I am crazy for mysteries! And you remember that? How sweet!
More mysteries to come!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
even i love mysteries
waise toh mujhe kuch cheezen yaad nahin rehti
as you know with your birthday and all
but some things i do remember
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: chavvi16

6
kameeni hai woh aurat
man she deserves to be killed soon
and so does her son kameene
they tried to kill maan
hawww kameeno tumhari toh aisi ki taisi
saalon sharam nhain aati
well if they can do this to family well they can do it to handas
poor maan man
he was just a child when they tried to kill him
not only that but they killed his dadi too
mann toh karta hai inki maut ki planning shuru karr doon
so maan tells his story finally
and its worse aint it
at least she had family till now
and poor thing didnt even get to see his dadi again
those kameeney killed her and he couldnt even see her
wow that was some story
hmm what was that with maneet flirting with one another
that was one light moment
and am glad for that
seems they have gotten to know one another
she sure is pulling him towards her
and thats not worng
but yes first they gotta escape that kameena
then all this can happen
so he sure did well for himself
when she was telling that story he must be remembering all his past
gosh that cant be easy
something brought them more closer
those kameeney dev and pammi
hmm they spent the night talking how cute
in between such situation they managed to do this
you were good to include it
when she said are you married and she was like what am i saying so funny right
both were disappointed that the other wasnt serious about the flirting
koi nahin if not know later
maybe when she works for him
that would be fun and rocking
his story was more sad man
but geet is in his life now so thats okay
well now we know who dadima was
and also that he has no family in delhi and he is all aone
good thing he encountered the handa sisters then
dude abb inse chutkara naa paa sakenge
as if he would wanna
he wants them safe and sound
they sure got along there didnt they
awww that was so cute to see
cheers for pm

Help me here Kittu! Did I mention anywhere in the chapter six that Maan is alone in Dilli? Not teasing you! I am seriously asking! Just read the chappy once and tell me if it is specified like that somewhere! I had checked just now and did not find any message like that but maybe I missed it! Please check once! If there is then I will have to edit that chapter! Coz it will jeopardize Khushi's entry!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: chavvi16

even i love mysteries
waise toh mujhe kuch cheezen yaad nahin rehti
as you know with your birthday and all
but some things i do remember

Same here!😆 One bhullakkad meets another bhullakkad!😆😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
doesnt say about khushi
just read it
chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
was it supposed to dear
oh teri if it did
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: chavvi16

doesnt say about khushi
just read it

Ok! But is there anywhere explicitly said that Maan does not have any family in Dilli! If it implied then fine! But is it explicitly stated that Maan has no family in Dilli or something like that?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
@ Chavvi! I rechecked it! There is no dialogue by Maan stating he has no family so my plot is safe! Bach gaye! Off to put up the next chappy!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
chalo acha hai
bach gaye yaar
so khushi can come in
woohooo

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