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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2

with shaking leg geet reach near door of house ...that monster just open door and ask my money , she just bend her head and nodded nooo, next second she feel tight slap on her face and she just fell on floor ,blood start come out from her mouth ...he raise his hand for another slap , but his hand stop in mid air with irony grip and , two eyes which spiting fire looking to him , his grip so tight like he broke his bone with only grip , geet husband say she is my wife hey who are you, he just smirk and say with attitude MAAN SING KHURANA ...dev trouble for second , he already fully drinks , and he never thought that any body come like this ...he just say mera hath chodo , he don't want to tamasha in society he just glare to geet and went from there

maan just come near geet and ask are you ok...

geet just bend her head and say yes

maan just give his hand to her for stand up ...

geet just took his hand in her hand , she need it when that dev slap her her feet hit on stone ...it cant help her to stand up ...maan just hold her shoulder and start to walk , geet just guide him to her room , and they heard light voice of baby , and first time maan saw some emotion in her dead face , she just want to run but her leg not helping her ,both come room and caretaker just give baby to geet and just went from there , baby just got her world she just glue geet like , if she lose her grip may be her mother vanish some wear , baby tearful eyes , crying red face just hurt geet , she just hug baby and say ... iam back beta don't worry , iam back she just forget that a stranger is also present their in their room , she just took baby towered bed with limping leg and settle muskan for feed om one leg ...baby is so want her feed she just start to pull geet top with her tiny hand ...and try to took feed with on cloth itself , geet just faintly smile ...baby action just pushing her in more and more guilt


Hear maan all looking amazing so many qus bugging in his head , when first he know about baby he just hate it for money she doing this , but now her reason of restlessness come in front of him , He just mistook her in hotel room , she just want S** Msk first time misjudge any person , and that ba... , he just want to punch him hard but his mind stop him because he get idea , it will be give bed effect on this women and her child/ baby





Baby is so beautiful just like her mother dimple smile white skin and big hazel eyes ,both mother daughter just lost in their world , that forget iam also present hear ,baby is so impassions for feed , but why she not protest to that monster now I am more than 100% sure , she in this business because of force , but WHY , only because of baby or any other reason ,don't know why , just than geet took baby for burp ...that time baby saw maan first she frown , who is coming in her and her mother word , but next moment she just give beautiful smile with quires eyes like asking Hey who are you ?


maan just chuckle with baby act and that brought geet back in reality she gasp that she feed baby in front of stranger ...next moment cold emotion back on her face and she just ask ...why you are hear till now ...sorry sorry , you want to finish your work na so tell me you want it in front of baby or in other room ...maan just fold his finger to control his growing anger with geet word ...he just admire baby and she accuse him like this he just come two step front ...and geet go back with fear ...he just closed to geet and say with angry tone ...i don't care what you think about me ...because Msk live on his own choice so ...he just bend toward baby and took baby in his hand , he could not stop himself



geet gasp with maan action ...she want to say something but give angry glare to her which make her silence ...maan just say hi baby i am maan sing khurana , and you are most beautiful baby till I saw ...and he just kiss baby on her cubby cheeks ...baby just frown with kiss because maan stubble touch her cheek and that irritated her ...she make such face maan just laugh loudly and baby also joined him with clapping his hand





...geet just watching with amazing look , because her baby never mist with anybody so easily and this stranger , just than baby start to fell sleepy ...maan just put some money in baby hand and say with cold voice it is for baby don't took other way ...if have guts /courage than show it to your so called husband not on me get it ...and he just went out after giving baby to geet



geet just looking like what was that ...but baby cry distract her and she just get busy with baby , next moment dev come in he room and took baby from her hand baby just hate his touch ...she start to cry loudly ...geet just beg her that give back her baby , but he just smirk evilly ,and say today money geet , now geet shake with fear , just than dev eyes fall on baby hand and he just took out money from baby's hand so harshly , baby wimp in pain , but he is busy in money , geet just took baby from him and ask him to leave the room

dev just went from there and say first I want to stop you from meet that msk but I change my mood I think he is big fish ...he show money to geet and went from there


Hear maan just went to hotel room and call some one , in 15 Minuit there is one person standing in front of him with bending head and shaking legs

maan just ask with angry ...who arrange this

Other man ...wo sir wo sir Veer sir ...

maan just took long breath and say you may go

Veer , I kill you


but he talk to himself why you blaming him , yes he arrange it for you , but he just want to enjoy for yourself , just relax from all pain , but you also flow with situation ...in your whole life you never touch women , you say her to strip and touch her like that way , he just punch on table , blood start to come out from his hand ... he just saw and smile sadly , veer want to give company fro some time but he don't know that i am so unlucky person , that I don't have any love , affection from any one , from my so called father , family also , and in whole world one person love me care me that become laying in hospital so life less , This Maan sing khurana world most successful business men is most unlucky person who never got any love, affection from any one ...

precap





name suggest by mirror1521 thanks dear

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
second part...fabulous👏

Maan's side of story is equally painful...though not much is revealed...but it can be guessed easily...now what fate holds for them is to be seen..

waiting for next part😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
nicre updt
feeling bad fr geet
maan and geet came face to face
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
awsome updt
love maan and baby interaction
cont soon
thnnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Awesome update...
hate that jerk...
Now he is messing with msk...
geet and baby lost in there world forgetting maan...
maan and baby interaction was cute...
loved it...
Ahhh!!! That jerk took money from baby's hand too...idiot
Maans past is so painful...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing and Emotional update👏👏...Maan's past is so painful😭😭...Loved Maan-Baby interaction...its so beautiful❤️❤️..Loved it..Thanks for the PM dear😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
very emotional eagerly waiting for more maan n baby interaction n muskan msk's angel loved the maan n muskan part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
nice part..
maan looking at geet n baby
who r in their own world.
maan introducing himself to baby is so cute..
dev..he is only after money
will maan find the truth behind geet n save her from hell..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
So he was saviour
He is right she should stand up against that man
Not him he didn't do anything
Awww that scene with baby and maan so cute
But not as much as baby and geet
She missed her mamma
What monster is he hurting the baby
Muski sure is adorable
It seems she. Won't do any thing with dev
Not just due to muski but her mother too right
Did maan mean his dadi or mom
Why isnt his family with him
Seems she is not the only unfortunate
He is too
Cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
pictures loved it baby is so cute
finally she was saved by the maan
nice part dear loved it

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