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suhaaana

@suhaaana

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Awsum update
loved MSK's entry
i m so luv wid it
plz update daily na

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Awesome

So Geet mom is alive. Does she know abt Geet state???
how Geet thinking abt her destiny.

Maan calling Geet. Wat does he want from her. When he knew that Geet has a baby he immediately left her. Uske dimaag me kya Chal raha hai. Want to know his POV.

Dev Manhandling her. Maan comes to rescue. Wat will happen next???

Continue soon.

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Awesome feeling kilk geet ka pati hope maan took her with him and saved her from all dirty things

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

the update was fabulous😊

thanx for making it early...was so much waiting for it

n thank god u made Maan's entry...cox Geet's pain ws becoming unbearable...can't believe the nerve of tht man(Geet's supposed to be husband😡)...infact he's not worth to be called as a man.

waiting for the next part eagerly..

And since u've not named this story...i would like to suggest some names tht are bugging me since i've read the prologue

only if u don't mind.😉

Do let me know...

Mirror😊

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: mirror1521
the update was fabulous😊
thanx for making it early...was so much waiting for it
n thank god u made Maan's entry...cox Geet's pain ws becoming unbearable...can't believe the nerve of tht man(Geet's supposed to be husband😡)...infact he's not worth to be called as a man.
waiting for the next part eagerly..
And since u've not named this story...i would like to suggest some names tht are bugging me since i've read the prologue
only if u don't mind.😉
Do let me know...
Mirror😊

First thanks for biggg comment , welcome to maaneet world hope in future also like my work , for name of story definitely , you can suggest dear , suggestion and criticism always welcome from me waiting for name Mirror

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

awesome update...the way u wrote geet's condition & her sufferings for her baby was heart wrenching...u did a great job ...👏...loved maan's entry...lets c whether he was a saviour or he was there for any hidden intension...