MG Fate of the unfortunate part 11,12on102 teaser and Note 141,155

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

yes everyone have to complit circles now it is start of dev punishment

have you read note

Yup I did

And am glad they changed

Why make it more difficult for the victims

Make it hell for the ones who are responsible for such behaviour

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#222

painful update

but one think i liked the most is maan and muski's bonding , so cute!!😳

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Love2read

@Love2read

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Really painful update...poor geet...

In this mess an innocent child suffers...

Hope maan helps geet out of this hell...

Ur work is fabulous...

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rsusmita

@rsusmita

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

it was so emotional , felt very happy seeing maan taking care of geet

fially dev is out of geet life, now maan will taking care of geet

nice part dear loved it

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

superrr update part 3 n part 4...

very painful though...bt applauds👏 to u for taking up such a sensetive issue and doing complete justice to it...this is not just a story bt an eyeopner to be aware of our position in the society being a woman...

u'r doing really great job... cheers to u⭐️

n abt update...geet's blankness is scaryy...she may recover phsically...bt her mental state seems uncurable(bt nt to worry uske liye maan hai na😉)

bt it will take lot of time n patience frm his side..

n loved the way muskan responds to maan😊

Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

This story is too painful.

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deep002

@deep002

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#227

lovely update dear hope they broke devs legs as well so he can't walk for life time

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

This is truly one of ur best work!!⭐️

Well Written n perfect emotions. ..

Waiting for the next!

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#229

there is no words to curse that de..

poor geet..

maan took her to dr..

n seeing her murmer for muskan his heart bleeds

muskan too crying 4mother

n maan somehow fed her bottle milk

geet is so blank..

maan did r8 by breaking devs hands

veer n adi are ashamed of their acts..

maan crying before dadi..

hope dadi gets well soon..

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sakshi

@tanvi04

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#230

mindblwoing update loved maan n muski part a lot eagerly waiting for next part n for your note i think this two finger test has to be totally stop why it is in the test procedure it should be totally kept out from test procedure