MG Fate of the unfortunate part 11,12on102 teaser and Note 141,155

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sakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

very emotional no word there to discribe the update

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spicyartist

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

I got tears while reading dis

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monika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Painful but amazing love it geet saved her muskaan now maan will look after them

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

hi thanks 4 da pm n emotional update! Maan confronts Veer! Painful past! Poor Geet! At least nw she n her baby have Maan! update soon! Well written

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IheartUSoMuch

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Painful part but Maan came to the rescue of Geet .

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

GEET MANAGED TO SAVE HERSELF AND MUSKAAN THIS TIME

BUT WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN DEV CATCHES THEM

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hira2010

@hira2010

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

so pain ful update yaar

maan ko kitna painfull chilhood tha

usk father nai apna hi bete k sath aasa kiya

aur his siblings is also forget maan

how can a father forget his own son

how can sister marry without informing her brother invititon brother ko invite nahi kiya jata yeh haq hota hai

geet y she bear dev y cant she left him

money sooo important k a father forget that his blood is in pain

maan father n dev both r same

maan aur veer kis ki bath kar rahi they dadi ki ya maan k imom

poor baby suffer too much hope she will be fine waiting for next

plzzz continue soon waise yeh kana ki zarort nahi u regularly update ur evey storyies one bye one

thanks for update regularly n pm

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gill123

@gill123

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Maan and geet both r in pain and geet baby is ill so emotionally update

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luvmg

@luvmg

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

I have read ur other stories too.i like ur story line.just a suggestion plz take care of punctuation marks.it will just enhance impact of story

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deep002

@deep002

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#140

sad update hope mann help her

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