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Posted: 11 years ago
part 3
nice...
OMG what happened to the baby?
and Maan is here?
how?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
waitng sorry to distrub but cant wait next part
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fariya20

waitng sorry to distrub but cant wait next part




don't say sorry i try my best to give today or definitely tomorrow
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan




don't say sorry i try my best to give today or definitely tomorrow


thanks

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww did Maan came as a saviour gain?
Both are suffering from pain...
You literally made me cry...
So painful...
And this Dev should be hanged to death... how can a person be so selfish... and can do this ti his baby...
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Posted: 11 years ago
emotional & lovely update loved it and hate that dev
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please read this news


GURGAON: A teacher from an upscale school in the city has lodged a complaint with the DLF-I police accusing her husband of pushing her into prostitution for his business gain.

The accused was arrested on Tuesday. The 35-year-old physical education teacher told police that her husband had been exploiting her for the last four years.

The couple has been married for 15 years and has two children. The victim said for the last four years, her husband was out of work. The victim said the accused would get people to their home and then force his wife to get physical with them.


Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 4

Jeene ke liye socha hi nahi, dard sambhalane honge

Muskuraoon to, muskurane ke karz utaarne honge

geet just fail in chair hospitalized word hammering her mind she just mummer i don't have that much money Just than clam voice with authority tone come from door doc start treatment imm. don't think about money and he just went to muskan and touch her forehead with care geet just froze in her place , that person looking to baby with painful eyes , and give not so happy gaze to geet ...geet just want to denied but muskan condition she could not say anything

Dr . Naina , Thanks mr khurana

Maan nodded and say just add this case fee and all in my personal account , an don't say anyone anything and shift her to near My dadima room it clear he say in clam tone , maan turn to geet and app , appka naam ...

geet in low voice ji Geet

maan - you can stay with her but his word change geet face color

maan took big breath and say follow me dr start the treatment of Muskan and saying I want positive result in one hour got it , now hurry up , geet mummer muskan

maan they will shift her in room just follow me with that maan just give small pick on muskan forehead

geet in deep thought why this stranger helping me ,can I trust him ? trust she smile on word trust ialready paid big price of this so called TRUST on that monster , this time also can iget only damages ...she nodded in no don't think all this now , most imp is muskan health and wasi bhi ab tumare pass damage hone ke liye kuch bach hi nahi hai so

other side maan thinking about geet why she not protest to that monster at list for baby .baby oh she is so cute can't watch her like this on bed hope she will be fine

maan just enter in one room it is like VIP room ,and there is one lady in late 60 laying lifeless on bed surrounded by so many machine and all tube , geet eyes turn teary she just mummer who is , maan turn to her and say my Dadi

Bahot tang karti hai pichale 2 salo se dream land main kohi hai muje akela chodke ...geet feel some unknown pain his voice

maan say hai dadi look who is this Muskan mother Yes I tell you na about baby , that muskan having fever , please pray for her ...but no response from dadi ,just than maan got massage from dr. they shifted muskan

maan just say geet come and he just open adjustment door of room , their muskan on bed don't gain her conscious, geet just put duppata in her mouth to stop her cry so many qus coming in her mind , dev reaction , muskan treatment , bill etc etc , she want to cry took support of any one , need shoulder of anyone but destiny play so dirty game that she don't have anyone who console her , give courage her no one ...

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Tujhse naaraaz nahi zindagi, hairaan hoon main

Oo hairaan hoon main

Tere masoom savalon se pareshaan hoon main

I am not angry with you, Life

Simply baffled

By your innocent questions


Jeene ke liye socha hi nahi, dard sambhalane honge

Muskuraoon to, muskurane ke karz utaarne honge

Muskuraoon kabhi to lagata hai

Jaise hontonn pe karz rakhaa hai

Never thought that in order to live

I would need to hold on to pain

Never thought life would extract

A price for every smile

Now - whenever I smile

It feels like these lips are pursed in debt

don't know why but maan don't want to see her tear it disturbing him he just want weep that tear , another second just get angry that why she suffering like this just than dr nanina put hand on geet shoulder , like geet searching this touch she just hug dr naina and cry her eye and murmuring in slow voice i am so bad , i cant do anything for her , she is my life i can't live without her please please , do something , i just once want to hear her voice please , she just crying like anything which brought tear in dr eyes also

She just caressing geet back like sister just than geet mobile beep ...sms call on xyz hotel room no ... geet just bite her lips to control her pain , agony , helplessness , maan get that something is wrong he just to dr nania to went from there , dr just give glass of water to geet and went from there , maan just want to ask her what happen ...just than geet stood , weep her tear same blank emotion come in her face , maan just shake with her face like he watch some dead body and for surprisingly its hurting him


Zindagi tere gum ne humey rishte naye samajhaye

Mile jo humey dhoop main mile chhaanv ke thande saaye

Life, the trials you threw my way

Have taught me relationships anew

The comforts of shade I only found

Under the bright scorching sun

she just say Mr khurana I have to go some wear , maan just want to grab her and ask what the hell , muskan in this condition and she want to go some wear but her word just feel like acid

if I don't go now pata nahi as punishment ek time main kitne mens ko satisfied karma padega , and I have to save my energy for my baby ,before maan say anything she just went from there , just than one tear fail on maan cheek its his tear , he surprised why he have tear in his eyes

Aakh agar bhar ayi hai, boondein baras jaayengi

Kal kya pata inke liye aakhen taras jayengi

Jaane kahan ghum kahan khoya

Ek aansu chhupake rakha tha

Today my eyes have welled up with tears

Soon they will burst forth, I'm sure

Tomorrow, who knows, these sore eyes perhaps

Will long for the sight of more -

Where have I lost that lone drop of tears

Which I had tucked away so safely?

geet just went from there but she say nania that she will come back in 4/5 hour and give her mobile no

dr nanina don't know why but don't ask anything just nodded her head


geet reach home , there she welcome by tight slap , that monster don't give her chance to ans and just start to beaten her , geet just like dead body never pinch in small sound ,like she is behind all this physical pain, he just asking why you go out without my permission why ,at last he tired with beating and say ... tuze pain nahi hota na , attend this call than you know what is pain , but no reaction from geet she just went to her room and change in jeans , top ,she have buries on her all body but ,feeling , pain ,emotions ye to kab ke chode gaye the usko it is just body and it useful to her mother and daughter just body


Tujhse naaraaz nahi zindagi, hairaan hoon main

Oo hairaan hoon main

Tere masoom savalon se pareshaan hoon main

I am not angry with you, Life

Simply baffled

By your innocent questions

hear maan thinking about all incidence from morning he come hear in khurana hospital to visit dadi , and went to visit dr nanina who is closed friend of maan adi and veer , there he saw lifeless muskan and crying geet , his heart get winch in pain after looking pale face of muskan , it is more than three hour and geet don't come back , baby also sleeping because of medicine , but maan restless with thought of baby feed , he know muskan deepened on geet feed , just than his phone buzz he attend call it is from ,veer who waiting for him in hotel maan just say nania to look muskan and call him if she get her conscious

maan reach in hotel where in lobby veer waiting for maan , maan just say him come with me both are going to maan room , just than they hear , faint voice of crying and mummer help , first both ignore but just they heard thud ,like something is fail on floor , both rush to door and maan open door and froze in his place ...small voice come from his mouth with gasp Geeet , veer also want to enter but maan stop him on door because she laying on floor in half conscious without single piece of ...

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
dev is animal . he needs to die.😡😡😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very emotional update...
thank god that maan is there with muskaan and geet..
Poor maan and geet suffering lot in there life
Oh no dadi in hospital from 2years...
Grrh just want to chop her so called husband into pieces...
how can he do like...he doesnt even ask about daughter
Geet is in such a bad condition...
Waiting to see a new geet who stands against her husband with or without help of maan...
this story is having agreat impact on me emotionally...
Contiue soon...
i hope that the person in the above news get true justice...

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