JANWAR {adult content} #2 PART 38/39 pg/132/136 || Dec 15th || - Page 54

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suyoha

nice update

and thank god you cleared it that saira has nothing to do with maan

when i read the last update about maan in love with that girl ,i was like what the hell

but now i am more than happy

they both destroyed geet like anything,now she is not anywhere near that confident geet in past

she is totally drown in alcohol and drugs

and what type of girl is saira ,i mean if the child is of her father then also she has no rights to kill
how can she do it being a girl

and now after doing damage to geet maan is repenting his deeds

now that he knows that to what extent he destroyed geet what will he do to repair it

i dont want any sympathy from maan to geet because she deserves more than that

i don,t want him to pity her

update next part soon




geet doesnt need anyone's pity yaar not specially from maan!! she is a janwar now not maan so just see what happens
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Posted: 10 years ago
will you please clarify me how come maan used geet? is it not geet used him?i think i forgot past story as per my memory geet was appointed by someone to destroy maan and on that night she has drudged him and seduced him and took out all the secret information of our country to sell enemies country to release amy from jail as she think maan is the mastermind behind sending ammy in jail but if one person sending robber in jail it doesnt prove maan is culprit inspite geet become gadhar of our country to sell thoes information for the sake of her friendship are people can kill themselves even before sending sensitive information to other country how come geet being responsible citizen can do such thing? people are bashing maan here but i think geet herself is the culprit for all this problem maan never force her he told her on her face he is physically attracted towards her and want that relation where has her boyfriend has used her for his benefit how come she blame maan?
i think here saira and geet both are criminal for their own deed saira kill his baby and geet betrayed her own country.please reply if i am wrong.

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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update! Hate Saira! Does Maan really love her! Past well incorporated! Maaneet meet n Maan is shocked! update soon! Pls update Saawariya, n ur other stories!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: idunno

will you please clarify me how come maan used geet? is it not geet used him?i think i forgot past story as per my memory geet was appointed by someone to destroy maan and on that night she has drudged him and seduced him and took out all the secret information of our country to sell enemies country to release amy from jail as she think maan is the mastermind behind sending ammy in jail but if one person sending robber in jail it doesnt prove maan is culprit inspite geet become gadhar of our country to sell thoes information for the sake of her friendship are people can kill themselves even before sending sensitive information to other country how come geet being responsible citizen can do such thing? people are bashing maan here but i think geet herself is the culprit for all this problem maan never force her he told her on her face he is physically attracted towards her and want that relation where has her boyfriend has used her for his benefit how come she blame maan?
i think here saira and geet both are criminal for their own deed saira kill his baby and geet betrayed her own country.please reply if i am wrong.



i agree with your pov!! but geet didnt expect maan to force her ... if you have read the story properly you might have learned that geet trapped maan after he had forced her!! she might havent done that if he hadnt committed the sin .. she did wrong bt what maan did was not justified either!! if he wanted revenge on her rejection he could have taken other ways!! but forcing is hell crime not just a sin!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 31
nice part...
OMG Geet lost her baby?
and thats coz of that Saira...
damn that girl...
Maan is free now and he loves this fool?
stupid him...
but he saw Geet and came to know what happened to her...
Geet should really punish this Saira...
she deserves that...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Saira kill geet's baby! fool woman, can't for once she asked geet whom baby she was carrying even if she hate her. when geet thought now someone will be there to love her destiny again took that happiness from her. maan who was going to marry saira is now hell shocked to know this truth. every character here is becoming animal at some point of their life
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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting for the next part...
update soon!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
meri jaan di ur baby is waiting for the update dyingly aaj update doge na meri jaan di😳
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Posted: 10 years ago


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PART 32:
read at ur own risk dont be mad at me with the content!!!



What did Saira do to you Geet? How did our child die?? His question was not just a simple question like the way he had asked her. It enveloped the dark phase of her life, the torture she had faced ... The fear she had gone through, the pain that had changed her ... The fetus that died ... Or it was then she became brain dead. She was living only for the revenge she had on Saira ... in a way Saira was the only reason she was still breathing ... Unless she sees that girl in pain she wont leave the world. It was the immense hatred she was respiring.



She couldn't talk what happened but she wanted to tell him for she made out that he wasn't a janwar anymore ... if he could feel someone's love he could feel someone's pain even. She didn't argue neither taunted ... she just started off what she wanted to him to know.



Saira had put me in jail so that no one would doubt where I could be ... she wanted to torture me to a level so that my baby dies ... Ek baar toh mujhse poochti bacha kiska tha but she didn't ... All she wanted was her father's reputation to be safe ... I might have left everything if she could talk to me ... she didn't ... she simply got me kidnapped and then like a sinner I was sent to jail ... I couldn't even ask anyone what wrong I did coz I didn't knew actually why I was captured at the first place ... I had no idea that Saira could do such evil to me.



She closed her eyes feeling the same tremor run through her body and veins



After she got off from the van first the women were sent to bathroom to have a great bath coz after that they wont be getting one ... dressed in the uniform they got, they were all lead inside a dark room where each one were stripped naked ... Geet's heart began to thud against her rib cage. She didn't understand what was going around ... all of them were females but no one seems to have humanity. Being clueless she stood watching the events ... A ting of slap has made her look at the person who had hit her on cheek ... Saali tujhe bolna padega undress karne ko?? Do it fast we don't have a life for you ... the lady yelled at her, she literally felt the earth slipping down. Why was she even there she had no idea upar se all this.



Her refusals made the woman hit Geet more, finally she had to do what she was told and then ... She stood on the table in the centre all naked ... Her legs were spread and then a cotton was inserted into her core ... she closed her eyes feeling helpless and miserable. She was then pushed to a corner and her dress was thrown on her face.



Later Geet was let into a cell along with two women, they looked cruel .. so were their acts seemed the way. All she could do was to cuddle on the bed that was given, it was very untidy ... she threw up couple of times with the maintenance ... The place was stinking her head was spinning but then putting her wits together she asked as she was worried about her health .. anything wrong can prove fatal for her baby ... Where am I?? Aap ho kaun?? And then the reaction she got scared her even more .. they laughed and laughed until gods knows when ... one of the women spoke ... Tu jail mein kaha se aagayi tujhe toh pagal khane mein hona chahiye!!



Jail mein?? Geet repeated checking around as the reality sunk ... Jail?? Why?? That was why all this ... They were checking out if she had drugs in her system with that cotton so does of other women ... how is she supposed to escape?? That was the only issue ringing in her mind.



Geet was sure of a miscarriage if she stayed back any longer ... But who could do this to her?? That was a question she had no answer. When it was dinner time all the women were lead to the dining hall where the food was being served ... she puked again with mere glance at the items she saw in the plate. The guard had slapped her hard for spoiling food, she was thrown into her cell again for she dared to throw up.



Later at night she felt someone desperately trying to undress her ... she got up to see the other two women were actually pouncing on her body. One was holding her firmly while the other was tearing her clothes ... Geet couldn't scream and then she felt a tight pain in when they hit her on the abdomen. Blood began to ooze out from her mouth and core ... she tried to let go, checking out the blood the women left her.



Geet slipped into unconsciousness with the pain that began to kill her ... till the next morning she lay there like a dead body still not giving hope on the baby she was carrying.



The next day Geet was being checked and the doctor said she had a miscarriage ... The ground began to slip from her feet. The women were already given a death sentence and they were supposed to stay in the jail for a life time ... What more punishment she could give them??



Geet sat in the cell pondering over culprit ... All this was a trap to kill her baby, she was sure someone had planned against her. She tried to ask the two women they didn't tell her ... She was there for four days like a culprit ... There was no food in her body ... Why should she eat at the first place when her mere reason of living was snatched away??



And then the day came when she was released ... No one has told why she was held captive, why she was set free!! When she came out she saw Sam and Nisha waiting for her ... she walked pass them not wanting to break down in front of them. Nisha was already carrying and she cant risk her life, she had already lost her baby she cant let the same happen to her sister.



Jab main wapas ghar aayi tab pata chala Saira ne yeh sab kiya ... she did all this to kill my baby, she thought I would ask for property on the pretext of my child ... how low a woman can get?? Maine apne saamne hi mardon ko ghatiya bante dekha lekin aurat?? Ek baar toh kehti main sab kuch chodke chali jaati lekin usne aisa nahi kiya ... uss din se main iss liye jee rahi hoon taaki mujhe mera badla mile ... I am living to kill that woman



Maan was shocked beyond words ... He could never imagine Saira to be this low and shallow ... He wondered if she was the same person whom he loved. For the first time ever his eyes went teary, he watched Geet in a numb state. He dipped his head feeling miserable that he didn't even know he was to become a father at the first place and the child died before coming into the world. And then he heard her talk ... meri saasein iss liye chal rahi hai taaki main usse badla le sakon ... I am waiting to kill her since two years ... I want my revenge ... drugs, drinks I am using every which way that can keep me alive ... I am a corpse who is still breath revenge



Jab badla lene ka soch hi liya toh batavo what is running in your mind?? He shook her assuming that Geet's mind definitely had something fatal for Saira.




Maan jo tumne kiya mere saath woh galat tha ... jo maine tumhare saath kiya woh bhi kuch kam nahi tha ... galat hum dono the ... The day you had taken the blame of mine on your head I realized you had actually given a life to me ... and its only you who can help me out this time ... Saira will have to die ... First she will lose her property and then life ... Uske liye main kuch bhi karongi ... I know you loved her ... and your love will kill her!!



Precap: Love Making!! What's running with MaanEet?? Game has begun ... with a U Turn MaanEet turn out to be?? 😉Socho socho ... thrill begins here!!😉


P.S: this is how women are treated in jails ... like i said i am not writing like a fool ... i am writing with research!! this is for all those who point faults at me ... those silent readers who comment or pm me calling me names!!


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Edited by dreamyharika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
So painful update
really made me cry
hate saira so so muchh
she dont deserve to be called a woman

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