~Kashmakash~ Maaneet SS Thread 6 last pt pg2 mar2

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COLOGY

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Nivedithachand
Awesome ff di !! I wonder from where you gauge such beautiful concepts from !!?? "Kashmkash" is really an apt title for such a complicated story !! I loved the way u beautifully portrayed Geet's emotions & pov !! Geet's emotions , expectations & lack which she felt from Maan & this marriage can only be felt & not be expressed in the form of words, especially with Maan being a nice person & them sharing a very good marital relation physically ..And that's why i felt it sooo real when she was not able to explain herself why she wanted a divorce to anyone , even to Maan himself !! I don't know to which extent its possible for a girl to live in Geet's place , in real.. But definitely this story was an inspiration for me in a positive way of not easily giving up.. As i myself have come across a good number of girls easily giving up on their marital life , even when they had their own cart of mistakes & shortcomes(no offence)... And the highlight of the story is , Maan changed a lot , but in actual he did not change from who he was into someone who he himself doesn't recognize !!! All that he had to do was to give a little attention , show his love & care in his own way.. That is all he did & Geet was on top of the world !!! Just loved the story to the core di !!! You are just amazing !!! Love u !! 🤗

Thank so much for this 🤗

Honestly i so wanted to write how much i liked this story... n why.

i couldn't when it was updated... today i came to write but after reading your comment i could only say-this is what i felt -WORD!

@BOLD

Oh my ! This one is exactly my words :P

Many said Maan has changed but i couldn't understand ! Reason is he hasn't changed but his outlook is changed. he was n he is still the same person who valued his upbringing, work ethics and,loved his family. May be he never felt the necessity give extra attention to his wife... she was just as imp as his other family member... may be little less looking at the amount of time she spent with him.

Muskan why this happens everytime i go loggerhead praising other stories but when i think of some peace/ when i sit idle/ when i want to rejuvenate my mood i come back to your stories!

I couldn't find the logic- i so could relate to may here who stand logic-less for the never ending attachment to your stories... i so wanna thank you for writing em for us😃 I remember reading all your stories bunking my clg for a week😆 n i did PM you... i was so juvenile to express that time, so thought to tell I LOVE YOUR STORIES muskan❤️

I had given my rank list to stories saying i liked this story more n this one less... my bad! I don't think any1 can rate your stories..if they do it'll suck just like I-F ranking system :P

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Muskan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Thanks a lot cology
So sweet words
It means a lot especially after t ss is completed
U still felt t need to drop in few words
Gives a lot motivation to me
Hugs
Muskan 😳

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

I really loved it

Feel like reading it again and again 😉

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

nice ss

geet at least got a bit of what she wanted

but maan practically spoiled her life

the chirpy, always happy geet is lost somewhere in time

maan could never speak up to his mother and tell her to shut up

he never understood geet completely

so much so that geet hid her pregnancy for 5 months

God felt pity on her that he returned her babies to geet not maan

he does not deserve teh love of a family after what he did

he did not even realize that he was at fault

this is one story where I am not happy with the end

it is real and practical but just not exceptable.

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December04

@December04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Giv epi for this na pls
Waiting for ur other stories too

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-Veritaserum-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Maan & Geet were married for 5 years. Maaneet's relationship is so complicated. Maan shouldn't have hit Geet. Feeling so bad for her. I'm really hating this Maan. He is so insensitive towards Geet's feelings and now when Geet is asking divorce he is getting angry. Geet has been enduring so much & Maan doesn't even know/care. I hope he realizes his mistakes before its too late. Geet should not forgive Maan so easily. I can't believe Maan thinks everything was alright from past 5yrs. Maan aborted their child & didn't even bother asking Geet's opinion. She is suffering so much. I want Geet to divorce Maan. Maan is making everything more complicated. Is he so dumb not to understand the reason for divorce. I just want to kill Maan. He is blaming Geet when he himself is responsible for all this. Geet's family too didn't understand her. Well I expected the same. I want Geet to forget Maan & move on in life because he never tried to understand her. He believed that Geet has someone else in her life. Maan has a feeling of emptiness but still can't overcome his ego. Its so sad to see that Geet has no one by her side during such tough time. Maan has literally gone mad. He didn't even bother knowing about her in the past 4 months & now he is concerned about her all of a sudden. Well atleast Dadi is concerned about Geet. Maan please replace your brain. He took her out for a coffee when they are getting divorced.. How ironic. Maan for once can you stop assuming things the way you want. Finally Maan is observing small small things about Geet. But when Geet tries to clear something he gets back to where he started. Grrr Maan ka kuch nahi ho sakta. Even after listening to Annie's talks he didn't understand what Geet would have wanted. Thank god Maan is slowly understanding Geet. Geet is pregnant but fearing to tell Maan. She has been hurt very badly in the past & it will be very tough for her to come out of it. Geet is just getting hurt more & more.. When will she be happy?? Finally Maan understood where he had gone wrong. Geet has slowly started trusting Maan. Maaneet had twins. Thats nice.. I love how Maan has not changed completely (that would be unreal) but is making efforts to keep Geet
happy.

This is one of the most beautiful SS I've read. Thanx for giving us such a wonderful story.