~Kashmakash~ Maaneet SS Thread 6 last pt pg2 mar2

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Muskan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Character Sketch

Maan Singh Khurana 34yrs. Successful business man, MD of KC. Very hard working. Mature, practical & yet orthodox in his approach. His life is simple work & his family. His family is mom pami, Daadi Savitri Devi, sister Anni, brother Dev & his sweet wife Geet.

Geet Singh Khurana 27yrs old. Project manager at xyz IT company. Mature, sensitive, traditional & yet modern in her approach. Her life.. umm she wonders!!!

Maan '.

Kuch khud bhee thay afsurda say
kuch tum bhee hum say rooth gaiy
kuch khud hi zakham k aadi thay
kuch sheeshay haath say choot gaiy
kuch khud bhee thay hassas bohot
kuch apnay muqadar rooth gaiy
kuch tumko such say nafrat thee
kuch hum say na bolay jhoot gaiy
kuch khud itnay mohtaat na thay
kuch loag bhee hum ko loot gaiy
kuch talaq haqaiq thay itnay
k khawab hi saray toot gaiy.

Geet

Raat Ki Tanhayi Mein Un Aahaton Ki Kashmakash,
Kaisi Ajeeb Hoti Hai In Karwaton Ki Kashmakash,

Har AnjuMan Adhura Hai, Har Mehfil Akeli Hai,
Deedar Ko Tarasti, In Chaukhaton Ki Kashmakash,

Kayi Gehre Sawalon Ka Karwan Ho Jaise Koi,
Yun Meri Peshani Pe Salwaton Ki Kashmakash

don't ask me how am I going to manage any of my FFs. I have no clue.. my head was bursting to pen this down.. so hear I am yet again with another Maaneet FF

na hum bewafa the

na tum bewafa the

kasoor tha to,bas tha uss faasale ka

jo pahle pal se hi

hum dono ke darmiyaan the

tum ne kabhi kuch bhi to mujh se kaha nahi

aur agar kabhi kuch kaha hoga toh

un faasalo ke kaaran maine kabhi kuch bhi sunna nahi

aur kua sunti,

kyu sunti,

mai uss kahi gayi baat ko

kyoki jab maine huch sun na chaaha aapse

tab to kabhi ,aap ne kuch kaha nahi

aur ab

jab aap ne kaha ki

hum aapke hai

jism se rooh tak

din se raat tak

dil ki aakhiri saas tak

dhadkan ki aakhri aawaz tak

to mai chah kar bhi ,sun na saki

saare sapne dobaara dekhu

aisi himmat,khud mai bun na saki

yeh sab jaan kar

teri har baat maan kar

ek ajeeb si kashmakash mai phas gayi hu ki

na tum bewafaa the

na hum bewafaa the

kasoor tha to tha

bas uss faasale ka

jo hameesha se,hum dono ke darmiyyan the

9n9i9s9h9u9

THANKS SHRUTHI FOR BANNER & cute-aly

LAST PART

thanks 9n9i9s9h9u9 for the beautiful poem dear

plz leave me lots of ur sweet & motivating comments.

love

muskan

Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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LAST PART

She spoke in between her tears - babaji gave back our babies to us
he couldn't agreed to more
Maan - I am sorry Geet he pulled her into a hug
yes he gave it back inspite of my sins.
Probably ur babaji didn't want to punish u for my sins
he knew his few words of reassurance is not going to make any difference.

As shallow his words felt to himself in presence of his past actions, it did gave a sigh of relief to Geet. She was comfortable, she didn't have to hide her pregnancy any more. It is the most beautiful time of her life.

Pammi really took good care of her. She did realize a bit of her mistake from past days. Not that she made it obvious but yes she did every thing to take care of geet. She made special special dishes rich in calories & taste. It was indeed a treat for every one in the house to see pammi indulge in something positive ever.

Off course with that was all her regulations too.

Maan was in a mission to make a difference. He could not manage any decent conversation especially with geet shutting down totally. So many days he had returned home hearing her chatting away to the babies. She would tell them stories, some fancy things. The moment he enters she will go quiet.

He cleared his throat & sat down on the floor on his knees. He rested his hands softly on her stomach
what r they saying
she just shook her head consciously.

He sighed & softly rested his head on her stomach - umm...
he sighed yet again - papa doesn't know how to say all this
but I want to say so many things
wo aaj office main .. he smiled inward amazed himself
then continued - I had a meeting
Geet was so curiously listening & wondered seriously he wants to tell the babies abt the meeting.
Then he suddenly took out his phone & pointed to the stomach holding it safely away - yeh dehko I have ur pic on my phone too.
She peeped inquisitively, Maan smiled & showed to her. It was her pic, she doesn't even know when he took it.
Geet - yeh aapne kab lee
he just smiled

this was not an isolated incident.. there were some cute moments which for him was so out of place but for Geet it felt just right.

Like the other day she was checking herself in the mirror. She was struggling to wrap the inch tape around her, when Maan had just walked in. she instantly hid the measuring tape & straighten herself.

His eyes read her restlessness & left her alone. He walked straight into the washroom after taking his towel.

She waited for him to leave & immediately reached to the tape..

Maan just came from no where & reached out the tape. She bit her lips looked down. He held her in his arms & slowly caressed her stomach. She leaned closer backward to his neck taking in his fresh scent. He dipped his neck into her shoulders & kissed her ears softly.

Not that he had become a super caring & loving husband. But there was this softness that was so tender & mild. U blink ur eyes & it could be miss it.

The arrival of the twins only filled the house with more love. Maan began to spend a lot of time at home with the babies & her. Though daadi & pammi were always there, but he seemed to rush home every day just to be with them. He had filled the room with toys. He didn't make a separate room for them, he insisted they stayed in their room.

Playing with babies came so naturally to Maan. Everyone in the house was amazed to see him tell them silly stories. It was like he was living his lost childhood with them. He even seemed to watch cartoons with them. It was easy for geet to shout at the kids but when the dad himself was laughing & rolling over silly cartons she didn't know how to stop. She couldn't believe it was t same shadeless Maan.

He still couldn't do things romantically for her, but he laughed with all his heart. He played silly games with the kids.

He couldn't thank enough Geet to have blessed his life with the little angels.

His morning schedule started with waking up kids & having a little chit-chat & having breakfast with them followed with the big dramatic bye for the day. Evening was filled with warm welcome he received from them when he came back from office. Night was telling them stories & sneaking into the room after geet slept.

He still couldn't snuggle to geet since that always led to their passion. Slowly geet learned he didn't hug her & sleep because he was shy to tell his urges that were never ending around her. Yah her closeness made him want her more, again endlessly. Well geet was geet & she had become little more bold now. All his never ending passion was met with her love.

A kashmakash was there whether he was doing it right.. for her, yet it was a beautiful togetherness. She was surprised with his sweet side of showering so much of love to the little ones. She indeed felt blessed & thanked her babaji every single day to have shown her the righteous path of togetherness inspite of the kashmakash.

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