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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely updates...

P 116 - Geet tried to ease his pain..some times simple gestures can console the heart which words cannot..

P 117 - Geet must be thinking - ye kaisi kaisi shart rakhate hai babaji, wahan GHSP mein kapado ke badle ghar se bahar nikal rahe the, aur yahan 😳 😳 😉...😆



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



Hi mona..ki haal chaal...??



Hiii babbie

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Hiii lakshu ..

same to you

ghar shift ho gaya?

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Originally posted by: JayeetaGurtian

fab update...👏 👏 👏...Geet lost her luggage in airport......Maan goes to get them back...🤔...Maan says a lie that her clothes will come after 1 week...😛...Geet wears Maan's bathrobe...😆...Maan gives Geet his pyajama-kurta to wear...😳...loved maaneet romantic moments......loved it...❤️❤️❤️...the precap is so good...☺️☺️...can't wait 4 the next update......pls continue soon...😊...



Hii dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



🤗 To all my friends...





Same to you babbie


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Posted: 11 years ago

I am really so much overwhelmed with all precious comments you all are giving me .. Thank you so much 😊




(This FF i update daily so please don't wait for Pm.. please do check thread yourself, it's my kind request to all )



Part 118


She squeezed her robe with sweated fist. Her nervous eyes looked him hesitantly but Maan gaze didn't lessen down. He had been staring her with impassioned charm giving her heart reason to raise up and down appropriately. She tried to move away Maan gripped her hand from back. He drew her back that she collided against his chest and clutched his shoulder for calming her balance. Her eyelid had no courage to look up to him and she struggled hard in his custody.

"You can't escape Geet" he said. "If you want to use my things, you need to follow my rules only, what I say to you"

"I don't need your things" she blabbered but then realized what she said! She looked him embarrassed then looked down smiling nervously.

"Really Geet?" Maan furthered her words. he held her chin "Then why are you wearing my clothes. Give it back to me!"

He touched the knot of her belt with the intention to lose it down when Geet startled up suddenly and she moved back gasping.

"No.. please.." She clutched the knot tight. She shook head when found him smirking and advancing nearer. She wanted to run away, to hide somewhere, to escape. She looked at the door from cornered eyes. It was opened. She hastened there but couldn't reach there as Maan was faster. He grabbed her from waist letting her legs dangling in air.

"Don't dare to run Geet. Otherwise I will not leave any escape for you later ever!!"

She was fluttering in cadge like a prisoner bird but the difference was, she herself dint want him to let her become free. But she also couldn't surrender so easily. She had seen a dream for both and needed moment to fulfill them. Looking her all silent Maan started tickling in her waist making her to giggle aloud.

"Please. Don't... ouch Maan.. Leave me.." she was laughing yet she had uninvited effect of his activity which was increasing a desire inward. Her breathing was skipping.

"Then promise me, you'll not leave me and runaway"

"I promise.." She stopped for breath. "leave Maan it tickling"

Maan stopped his activity. He put her down on floor. Geet was gasping for breath. Maan hugged her from back giving trail of kisses over her neck squeezing arms around her waist. Geet was on the edge of losing her sense but she knew if she let him blow away in his intense passion, her wish couldn't be fulfilled ever. She wanted to save this moment for later, to making it the most beautiful moment for lifetime.

Geet felt her shoulders started getting bared. The only material over her body was started getting misplaced slowly and then felt cold touch of his mouth over her arm. She gripped his hands over her stomach reaching for a deep gasp. She didn't know should stop him or let go further but it was her own heart which was stopping her to take any decision and when she couldn't decide and failed, she turned and hugged him tight surrendering herself into his arms.

Maan as if had found a most demanding wish. He tightened the hug. His hand move over her spine crushing her deeper against his body. He was losing control over his mind. His mouth was relishing the taste of her skin of slender shoulders and nape. He was going out of control. He bite her shoulder that brought Geet back from her captivating sleep.

She wanted to stop him and when found his hold had been losing she pushed him back and with a loud giggle she started running off but Maan stopped her way out shadowing over the door. He was much quicker than her. She stepped back timidly when Maan glared her and slipped closer. Geet hastened and jumped over the bed and he followed her. But as she was going to jump off he pulled her hand back with a jerk. He let her fell down on bed and rolled over her, taking Geet underneath. He clasped her both legs and hands with his hands and legs. She was completely trapped beneath his strong body.

"Why did you try to escape Geet" Saying Maan bite over her collar bone in anger. Her robe had been unmannered and some unhidden parts of her body was inviting his attention. Her slender legs till over thigh and her half uncovered chest was receiving his admiration. He bite over her heart then kissed the place to soothe the pain. Geet gasped with the ache but with more of effect what his touch had given.

"Be ready for the most painful punishment Geet" he smirked.

She knew now he will not stop and her dream will be left broken. Though she was not sad but was little upset with the incompletion of her wish. She had no time to make herself prepared for him. In hurry she turned face to transform her expression so that in next moment could surrender herself for him.

"Are you sad?"

But Maan had already seen she was hiding something. He asked confusing "Geet what happened?" He turned her face to him. He studied her eyes which was saying different story. There was love for him but in form of commitment not involvement.

"You not happy with this closeness Geet?" He was shocked. He sat up. Geet shook head conveying no, it's not truth. "No Maan there's nothing like what you're thinking?"

"Then why are you sad?"

"I'm not Maan.. I swear"

"No you lying. I know because I can read your eyes Geet"

She knew he was right. She can't hide things from him and she selected better to tell everything. Simply she hugged him and told what she wanted. That to start her life when they will have a proper marriage. She looked him for any reaction with thudding heart.

"So you want a proper marriage first. Don't you?"

She nodded. But she also said that it doesn't mean she doesn't believe in their relation. "And if you want Maan I can surrender myself right now because with you every moment is special for me" She said hugging him.

Suddenly Maan fell down on bed taking Geet in arms and then rolled over her. She was surprised and Maan was smirking. "That doesn't mean I can't do what I can do sweetheart. You're still my wife and I can do whatever I will want" He caressed her cheek naughtily. She looked him confused.

"For you your dream is far away Geet but for me, you're my dream which is near, in my arms and I can live this dream anytime" He started kissing her lips slowly. In between he spoke, "You can wait for you dream but I can't" leaving her lips he kissed her neck going downward then came to her face. "Now it's your problem, how you keep control on yourself to be away from me and I promise, till you won't want, I'll not cross the limit what you've decided for yourself but you also have to give me promise that you'll not stop me fulfilling my wish" Saying he winked. he again started kissing her deeper. But Geet left confused with the meaning of his words. But for one thing she was sure, in anything, it was her lose and his win.

Then they spent night together kissing each other, sleeping and cuddling in each other arms.

Precap : Maan has to take Geet for shopping 😆


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago
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awesome update😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

update deke chali gayi???


nahi toh..😲

koi hai hi nahi toh kisse baat karu

tumhaare thread pe thi 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago


Hi dr...wat's up...?

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