Secretly Smitten#13 (Thread 14 link @ Pg 139)

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Secretly Smitten... Thread 13



Story of small Maan and little Geet. They were innocent, they were kids, they did not know what they were doing, but their naive act became the most unexpected incident of their life in which they had to suffer for entire life..


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She is my Geet..


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INDEX


Thread 1

Thread 2

Thread 3

Thread 4

Thread 5

Thread 6

Thread 7

Thread 8

Thread 9

Thread 10

Thread 11


Thread 12


Part 113 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3932208/secretly-smitten-13-thread-14-link-pg-139?pn=2

Part 14 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3932208/secretly-smitten-13-thread-14-link-pg-139?pn=12

Part 115 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3932208/secretly-smitten-13-thread-14-link-pg-139?pn=28

Part 116 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3932208/secretly-smitten-13-thread-14-link-pg-139?pn=40

Part 117 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3932208/secretly-smitten-13-thread-14-link-pg-139?pn=47

Part 118 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3932208/secretly-smitten-13-thread-14-link-pg-139?pn=54

Part 119 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3932208/secretly-smitten-13-thread-14-link-pg-139?pn=76

Part 120 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3932208/secretly-smitten-13-thread-14-link-pg-139?pn=83

Part 121 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3932208/secretly-smitten-13-thread-14-link-pg-139


Part 122 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3932208/secretly-smitten-13-thread-14-link-pg-139


Part 123 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3932208/secretly-smitten-13-thread-14-link-pg-139

Part 124 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3932208/secretly-smitten-13-thread-14-link-pg-139


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Part 113


Geet has just finished ordering the dinner when she found Maan looking at her. She felt as if he wanted to say something. She stood up from sofa, advanced ho him when Maan turned ignoring her and started to get his vest out from wardrobe.

"Let me do it"

Geet said. She begun to pull his clothes out from shelf. She felt his gaze on her back and his bare closeness was arousing her senses. She thought the same he must be feeling and it proved with his heavy becoming breathing. His front touched her back. Geet breathed in his calm and masculine scent. She tried to concentrate in her job but it disturbed when his fingers brushed the skin around her neck. His heart was hitting against her spine and that moment was becoming uncontrollable for her. Maan nuzzled nose on her nape slipping arm around her waist. The time she found perfect to ask her answer.

"Maan.." She spoke.

"Hm.."

"How was your day in office?"

The reminiscence hit his mind. He stopped loving her. He left her and moved back that frozen her doubt that there was something wrong with him. She decided not to leave this chance.

"Maan what happened?"

"Nothing Geet" Maan didn't want to face her otherwise she would have studied his tention. That could be risky. He pulled his shirt out from wardrobe and wore.

"Why are you looking tensed? Is everything fine there?"

He knew she was getting worried. He smiled and said there is nothing about she should be tensed. He was just tired due to entire day work. But Geet didn't believe. She kept following him and repeating her query.

"No, you are laying. You are hiding something Maan I can read your face"

"Why are you being so stubborn Geet and why are you following me. I'm not any child that would be needing for your damn care!"

His over flowing frustration concreted her suspicion. Now she became more determine to get the truth out from him. She came and turned Maan to face her. "Your stupid words cannot affect me Maan and I am not going to leave you till you tell me everything, what happened you that made you that stressful. You're getting angry on me without reason and I know, this can't be happening without any reason. Something is annoying you and you will tell me what!"

"You Geet... you annoying me goddamn!" Maan blasted. He had become out of control, her queries and her thoroughly insistence had filled anger in him that the awful words started coming out without warning. Geet looked him stunned.

"This your stupid blabber Geet.. That is annoying me. Rather than comforting me and releasing my tiredness you started your nonstop blabbering, your never ending queries.. For god sake Geet give me some peace.. Let me live in peace" He shook her"You wanted to know what happened me haan! I don't want you here. I want you to send home back so that couldn't hear your this irritating chatter. Got you Geet. You are returning back to your home tomorrow and you can't deny"

Maan left the room like a alive storm. He walked in his place and banged the door on her face. Geet startled. She was still in condition of getting the thing fill in mind that actually what happened? What did he say and why, but whatever her mind had engrossed, directly had hit her heart. She spent night being awaken thinking about the entire episode. Her eyes couldn't leave sight of his door and when the morning came, her tired eyes became closed.

When the first morning sunray hit the window, Maan stood up from bed. His eyes were red and swollen. He had not slept a blink and the words he had said to Geet was fresh in his mind. His heart burned in remorse but he that he found the best option to mask his sadness, otherwise, she could have swam in her heart to get the mystery out. He opened door and came toward her. Geet was in deep slumber.

Maan sat and watched her intensively as if she would vanish in few time. He wanted to keep her sight always in his eyes but for her own sake, that couldn't be possible. The hard blow of a fresh struggle could have easily garbled her life. For his fine future she was needed to be unified completely and for this, she should go far even for some days.


Maan caressed her cheek lovingly. Abandoned tears had made mark there. He tried to brush them off but mark was dry and he couldn't clean her face. his heart pained but he didn't want the same result for her life where his all effort even wouldn't be able to remove her wound later. "She needs to go away from me" He was determined.

Geet stirred in sleep. Maan stood up at once fearing she could see his weakness. He coughed just to get her attention. Geet opened her eyes. She found him there, at her front, watching her. Her eyes shone thinking he was there to pacify her but then her gaze fell on those suitcases which were hers and she remembered well they were not been kept there by her. She looked him questioning.

"Get ready Geet. Within an hour we need to leave for airport" Maan left out of room leaving her completely wondering in random thoughts. "Why he is so angry?" she couldn't understand but she knew, he was serious. She couldn't ignore his command. Aimlessly she stood up and went to take shower. Her mind was occupied in various reasons could've behind his decision but not any could satisfy her heart. Everything happening was strange and so fast. She came cladded in Chiffon yellow suit and stood before the full size mirror.

"I know he still loves me, cares for me, think for my betterment than what could be the reason he is adamant to send me far from him? I know well he is trying to hide things from me. He is sending me because I can know his secret but what he can hide. What is there he can't tell me. I need to know.. ?"

Her chain of thought broke when her behind the door sounded and Maan entered. She looked him in mirror still holding Dupatta in hand just to keep it on correct place but seeing him, her hand dropped.

Precap : Maan slaps Geet 😭


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