Mission Impossible:The Don n The Diva part 26 pg 97 updated - Page 48

maan nai bura sapna dekha

geet nai bhi dream main worior ki jhalak dekhi

maan sent geet to noida

geet stuck in troble

maan help geet

opsss geet misundertand maan

hahaha slap me hard geet sooo cute

waiting for maan truth

n first of all im sooo sorry for commenting so late Maya, one or the other thing held me up and i'd think i'd comment properly instead of throwing a few words hastily because u deserve genuine acknowledgement 👏

this is my first comment on this FF . like ur previous one i read "Marital Tie". i must say im addicted. yes this is the proper word to show what feedback i have 😊 the updates come after interval of one day and believe me i crave for update and literally its like a soothing bed rhyme or what, i simply can not fall asleep until i have read it . no exaggeration

the storyline is so good. Geet accidentally or coincidentally has got her own "real" identity as her "fake" identity . how she n Maan instantly connected to each other. by actions by incidents by everything. and how amazing it was when Maan recognized his Choti Rani . it made me cry so badly when i read that part, where Maan wanted to rush to her n tell her he himself was her beloved Warrior but the complex things related to his life just stopped him. my heart cried for his plight 😭 the memories which flashed in his head of how dearly he had embraced his choti rani n promised to marry her . oh My God i could just not stop my tears when i read that one 😭 and here i must say , Pooja is so damn right when she calls u Jaadu 😊 u write magic. just ur simple words convey those emotions to the readers so beautifully. *Hug* :D

and i dislike Breej so much. i have a feeling that somehow he and his company they are lying to Geet and they r using her against Maan. he might be linked to something wrong but then again, it probably wont be 'involvement' in criminal or bad activities. it might just be some sort of unwanted linkage. Breej n his boss have hidden things from Geet about the people who previously went to this mission and this clearly means they r not honest with her. i wish this truth soon unveils in front of Geet.

and i love how dev and meera instantly became Geet's new friends. i loved their gesture of planning to bring Maaneet closer n gifting Geet that saarri n later making her go to the part where she met Maan. yes Maan so desperately wanted to be away from her n still he could just not help being pulled towards her. this is love n this is pure affection 😊 their first kiss was so awesome and mind blowing because Maan KNEW he was with his choti rani. but i felt sad for Geet when she was so much "at-war" with herself for kissing "the wrong guy" . she doesnt know its not the wrong guy 😔

Dev's accident was such a shock and thankfully Geet found him .this incident helped Maaneet become closer how they both worried for dev so much and then how they took care of him. it was really good. *Thumbs up*

this is the second time i cried reading this story 😭😭

Maan's nightmare of how being with him could harm Geet and then the nightmare turning into reality when Geet met that accident

how dearly he rushed to save his beloved choti rani and how nothing could stop him at all

he didnt care his own hand got injured or what. he just knew one thing- he had to get Geet out of danger. His Geet.

and the scene inside the cottage just made my tears fall 😭 she kept missing her Warrior, kept saying his name and finally Maan had to give in. he had to embrace her and tell her semi conscious form "im here choti rani" oh God 😭 i cried so much at the beautiful and innocent bond they share n how much painful it is for Maan to hide this from her all the time. he saw the locket in her hand and he did not react. but he reacted finally when she would simply not stop murmuring her beloved Warrior's name . this was superb Maya 😭 👏

and it was funny how Geet thought Maan changed her clothes without her permission but it was so instantly heart warming when his care and respect for her was shown from the arrangements he had made for her. how badly guilty Geet felt n asked him to slap her. she doesnt know how could he ever hurt her when hes the one always trying to save her. and how dearly her childhood voice echoed in his ears n how lovingly he caressed her face and left the room.😭 Geet's thoughts and how she cried for cheating with him and wishing "please be the bad guy" it made my eyes watery 😭

im not a cry baby,its ur writing which makes me so emotional 😆

i love this story so much. there is so much to unfold . so many secrets. who is vikram n what rivalry he has against Maan. who writes to Maan warning him about Geet. and so much more. waiting for next update tomorrow. n i hope my internet doesnt give me so much trouble posting comments 😆

Nice part