maneet with difference #3 new poem add pg21 on 5/2 14 - Page 12

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sona-rai thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
i did'nt read Punar vivah but Loved ur Poem a lot nishu:)
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Posted: 11 years ago

books😆

exam hai dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

here u go




sukhe patte(leaves)
daal se tut kar
kahi kissi ka toh ghar banaate hai !
aur mar kar bhi ,
kissi ke sapno ke ghar main zinda rah jaate hai !

kami toh ,un patto main hai
jo shaakh(stem) par rah kar bhi,
sukh(dry) jaate hai !
pata nahi ,
unhe kyu zindagi raas nahi aayi !
par unhone maut bhi toh ,
gale nahi lagaayi !
woh jaane kyu ,
is tarah se khud se hi tut rahe hai ,
na haasil hoga unhe kuch ,
na haail kar sake unhe koi ,
woh to ,uss mod se apna daaman tod rahe hai!

maana ke ,
zinadgi sab ke liye aasaan nahi hoti !
par mar jaayo khud ke liye aacha hai ,
usse ke ,
aap jiyoo kissi ko barbaad karne ke liye !
kyoki kissi ko barbaad karke toh ,
zindagi apni bhi aabaad nahi hoti !

koi khoj raha tha ,usse ek dushman ko !
toh koi kar raha tha ,uske aane ka intezaar !
yeh bhram tha ,un dono ka
ki milke ek baar ,
ho jaayega sab gum ka udaar bekaar ,
par woh naadan ,
yeh na jaante the ,
ke badla woh ek rog hai
jo hai be ilaaj ,

is rog ke ghaav bhar jaate ,
par ,
nishaan umar bhar ke liye chod jaate hai
aur hum sahlaate rahe isse ,umar bhar ke liye
yeh aadat hum se jod jaate hai
aur
badla woh rog hai ,
jo naasor (deadly)ban kar hum me palta hai
na thik ho sake ga yeh zakham ,
hame waqt nikal jaane par ,pata chalta hai!

me waiting for your reply
gud aur bad😕

lovely mindlowing Emotional Poem dear:)
very very beautifully written:)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ---nishu---


books😆

exam hai dear



kaunsa exams

aur waise nishu teri shaadi huyi kitne saal hogayi hai
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

i did'nt read Punar vivah but Loved ur Poem a lot nishu:)


yeh hui na
darling sonA
WAALI BAAT


ff read kiya ho ya nahi

meri poem oakaa read karni😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

lovely mindlowing Emotional Poem dear:)
very very beautifully written:)



sona yeh MRS.msk ke ff ke liye hai
guess kar which one
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ---nishu---

@ sona

poem three
and comment for two


ye na insaafi hai

sweety poems 4 hain na????
ya yeh dono hi Punar vivah ke liye hain????
phn se Ol hoon thori dair toh lagay gi na sabar ker grrr
hehehehehe
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

sweety poems 4 hain na????
ya yeh dono hi Punar vivah ke liye hain????
phn se Ol hoon thori dair toh lagay gi na sabar ker grrr
hehehehehe



no ,both are not for puner vivah


and for which ff
you have to guess

hint maine de diya hai
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Posted: 11 years ago

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